历年大学英语四级作文市公开课一等奖百校联赛特等奖课件.pptx

历年大学英语四级作文第1页6月英语四级作文题目Forthispart,youareallow30mins.towriteashortessay.youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120andnomarethan180words.“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearweapon”“Ifyoucanemptythedustbin,youcandoanything”第2页第3页图画作文基本格式分段分段-三段三段第一段：图画描述第一段：图画描述1.总体描述：人物总体描述：人物/动物动物/事物动作环境事物动作环境 2.挖掘细节词、串连成句挖掘细节词、串连成句 3.题目文字描述题目文字描述第二段：寓意描述第二段：寓意描述第三段：结论段，提议办法第三段：结论段，提议办法1.结论句结论句2.针对双方提提议针对双方提提议3.包装结尾、展望未来包装结尾、展望未来第4页作文第一段，要进行简单描绘图画内容，这是必须，也作文第一段，要进行简单描绘图画内容，这是必须，也是题目中强制要求（是题目中强制要求（a brief description of the picture）。描述时候，只要把父子两对话移植到第一）。描述时候，只要把父子两对话移植到第一段，然后把父亲手指垃圾桶动作描绘一下就能够了，非段，然后把父亲手指垃圾桶动作描绘一下就能够了，非常简单。常简单。作文第二段，进行主旨提炼而且叙述。这幅图画很轻易作文第二段，进行主旨提炼而且叙述。这幅图画很轻易看出主题，那就是做大事之前，要先做小事（一屋不扫，看出主题，那就是做大事之前，要先做小事（一屋不扫，何以扫天下）何以扫天下）,而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了（express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.）所以，第二段通篇叙述小事做起主要性就能够了。所以，第二段通篇叙述小事做起主要性就能够了。作文第三段，总结，启发。这一段再次强调小事做起意作文第三段，总结，启发。这一段再次强调小事做起意义，我们不能低估他威力。文章最终能够以名人名言作义，我们不能低估他威力。文章最终能够以名人名言作为结尾。为结尾。第5页We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son.Having heard his sons words“Dad,I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”,the father replies,“If you can empty the dustbin here,you can do anything”,pointing the garbage can beside him.第6页Funny and common as the conversation sounds,it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big.Unquestionably,doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big.By doing something small,we are enabled to accumulate experience,master skills and train ourselves to be more patient.In other words,we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things.By contrast,those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment,frustrations or even failures.As when opportunity“something big”appears,they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things.Taking the picture presented above as a case in point,how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesnt know how to empty the dustbin?第7页From my perspective,under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things.Instead,we should regard small things as the source of experience,skills and the prerequisite of success.“Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.”Aristotle once said.第8页12月Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountofthe impact of the internet on the way people communicateandthenexplain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.Youdwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.第9页第10页经过这幅所给题目，我们观察到有两个人在电脑前。男子妻子站在后面，而男子则正给他们儿子写邮件，并说到：亲爱安迪，你好！你妈妈和我一切都好，而且很想你，也希望你一切都好。我们期待下次在你电脑瓦解或者是下楼取东西吃时候再次见到你。爱你妈妈，父亲。第11页我们从这幅图画得知互联网对人们沟通方式带来了巨大影响。人们过去习惯于面对面沟通、电话沟通或者是书信沟通。而当代社会，人们更倾向于像图画所画那样，用诸如邮件、QQ或者是微博这么互联网工具进行沟通。人们认为这么沟通方式愈加方便，节约时间。现在，就有这么一个问题了：电子交流是否会取代面对面沟通呢？答案是否定！人们在享受电子沟通带来便利性同时，也已经开始意识到了这会减弱人与人之间情感，降低工作效率有时候甚至会带来一些误会和摩擦。再者，电子沟通也会使人变得孤僻甚至是产生愈加严重心理疾病。第12页图画中所描绘场景，是可悲:假如没有互联网，此刻他们可能其乐融融在一起聊天呢。然而现在，同处一室家人，正是因为互联网便利性，却变得相距千里。或许我们应该花点时间想一个问题：有些人想成为互联网和电子沟通工具便利性牺牲品吗？第13页Fromthecartoongivenabove,wecanobservethattherearetwopeopleinfrontofacomputer.Withhiswifestandingbehind,themaniswritinganE-mailtotheirsonwhichstates,DearAndy-Howareyou?YourmotherandIarefine.Webothmissyouandhopeyouaredoingwell.Welookforwardtoseeingyouagainthenexttimeyourcomputercrashesandyoucomedownstairsforsomethingtoeat.Love,MomandDad.第14页WelearnfromthecartoonthattheInternethasexertedagreatimpactonthewayofpeoplescommunication.Peopleusedtocommunicatefacetoface,makecallsorwriteletters.Whileinmodernsociety,peoplearemorepronetocommunicatevia,asthecartoondepicts,InternettoolslikeE-mails,QQormicroblogs.Peopleholdthatthesewaysofcommunicationaremoreconvenientandareabletosavethemanenormousamountoftime.Herecomesaquestion,whetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact?Definitelynot.Whenenjoyingtheconvenienceofelectroniccommunication,peoplehavebegantorealizethatittendstoweakentheaffectionbetweenpeople,reduceworkingefficiencyorevenbringaboutsomemisunderstandingsorfrictions.Moreover,communicatingthroughelectronictoolswillbelikelytomakepeoplesolitaryorevensufferfromcertainmentaldisorders.第15页Whatthecartoondepictedcanbetragic:thefamilycouldhavecommunicatedfacetofacehappilywithoutE-mail.Butnow,afamilylivingtogetherseemstobeathousand-mileapart.Perhaps,weshouldtakeamomenttothink,DoesanyonetherewanttofallvictimofconvenienceoftheInternetandelectroniccommunicationtools?第16页图表作文第17页怎样分段及段落内容思索。分三段几点小改变：第一，没有汉字说明，能够发挥第二，有图片，要加上描述图片“废话”第三，图片中有单词，有数据，要是字数不够铸锻分析，段段击破！第18页第一段：引入现象于是开始写：因为这是图片题，所以先上句“应景”废话“Aswecanseefromthepicturethat”，其余部分直接往上写我们模版“nowadays,thephenomenonofhasarousedwideconcernamongthepeoplewhocareabouttheyoungpeoplesfuture”记得要把原来“”换成关键词“EducationPays”，剩下随便写写，凑足字数即可第19页第一段能够写成：Aswecanseefromthepicturethatnowadays,thephenomenonofEducationPayshasarousedwideconcernamongthepeoplewhocareabouttheyoungpeoplesfuture.Especiallytotheyounggenerationlivinginthebigcities,theytendtoputthepaystotheschoolbutnotthedegree,ignoringthefactthatthisbehaviormayposeunderlyingthreattotheirpresentcareerandmayevenendangerfutures.第20页第二段能够有两种写法，第一个，说明这个“EducationPays”原因。第一个写成：现象原因。AmplereasonscanaccountfortheissueofEducationPays，thefollowingonemightbethemostcritical.Forthemajorityofyoungpeople,theyhavebeenalwaysconsideringtheeducationasabotheringthingtodoornotanopportunitythatcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.Hence,theywanttogetajobasearlyaspossible.However,asmatteroffact,asthepicturedescribed,thepeoplewhohavelearnedmoreearnmorethanothers；meanwhile，inthepicture,theoneswhohavethedoctoraldegreeearnmore1551dollarsthantheoneswhohaveonlyadegreeasbachelor.在这个段落中，最终一句话，我着重引用了一下列图片数据，比较了一下，没写倍数，那东西一不留神就写错，不写！第21页第二段也还能够写成：现象讨论，即大家对这个事儿看法不一致。有人以为这个事儿对什么好，有人以为这个事儿对什么坏！写上就好，因为，不论什么事儿，大家观点都不是一致：Doesanyonemaintainthesameattitudetowardsthisissue?Definitelynot，asamatteroffact，opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.SomearguethatEducationPaysisbeneficialtodoctors,because,bythisway,theycanearnmoremoney.However，quiteafewpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthatEducationPaysisdetrimentaltotheoneswholearntheskillsthroughhardworks.While,mostofpeopleagreethatthedemeritsoflesseducationfaroutweighitsmerits第22页第三段，其实万古不变，就是个人观点，观点最好是提议或者对策：Tomywayofthinking,theissuementionedabovewillboundtogeneratemoreconsequencesifwekeepturningablindeyeanddeafeartoit.Weshouldappealtotherelevant administrationdepartmentstostrengthensupervisionoverit.Itishightimethatallofus,parents，educators，andtheauthorities,makecombinedeffortstotelltheyoungpeoplethefactabouttheEducationPays.Withthismeasuretaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethatthisproblemcanbeperfectlysolvedinthenearfuture.第23页6月PartIWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnExcessivePackaging.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.许多商品都存在过分包装现象2.出现这种现象原因及其带来后果3.为了改变这种情况，我认为第24页我以为你应该对“商品过分包装”现象也不陌生。在我们生活周围，我们随处可见这样例子：小电脑包装在一个又厚又重纸板盒里，衣服包装在设计精美塑料袋里，月饼通常也放在精巧包装盒里。这个问题原因到底是什么?首先，很多制造商为了获得更多经济利益，通常都将商品用不必要却吸引人包装里，目在于吸引顾客注意力，唤起他们好奇心然后刺激他们消费欲望。其次，相当多顾客认为，包装越精巧，产品质量就越高，这个想法也加剧了商品过分包装趋势。为了改变这个现状，我认为应该采取以下措施，首先，必须制定是执行相关法律限制商品过分包装;其次，我们应该开展广泛教育运动唤起人们意识，那就是，包装不等于产品质量。只有这样我们才能杜绝这种趋势。第25页我以为你应该对“商品过分包装”现象也不陌生。在我们生活周围，我们随地可见这么例子：小电脑包装在一个又厚又重纸板盒里，衣服包装在设计精美塑料袋里，月饼通常也放在精巧包装盒里。Iassumethatyouarefamiliarwiththephenomenonof“ExcessivePackaging”.Takingalookaround，wecanfindexampleswithease：asmallcomputerispackedinathickandheavycarton，clothesareputinawell-designedplasticbagsandmoon-cakesareusuallyplacedindelicateboxes.第26页这个问题原因到底是什么?首先，很多制造商为了获得更多经济利益，通常都将商品用不必要却吸引人包装里，目在于吸引顾客注意力，唤起他们好奇心然后刺激他们消费欲望。其次，相当多顾客认为，包装越精巧，产品质量就越高，这个想法也加剧了商品过分包装趋势。Whatarethecausesofthisproblem?Ontheonehand,toearnmoreeconomicprofits,aconsiderablenumberofmanufacturesusuallywraptheirproductswithunnecessarybutappealingmaterialsaimingatattractingcustomersattention,arousingtheircuriosityandthenstimulatingtheirpurchasingdesire.Ontheotherhand,quiteafewcustomersbelievethatthemoredelicatethepackageseems，thesuperiorthequalitywillbe,thenotionhasalsoencouragedthetrendofexcessivepackaging.第27页为了改变这个现实状况，我认为应该采取以下办法，首先，必须制订是执行相关法律限制商品过分包装;其次，我们应该开展广泛教育运动唤起人们意识，那就是，包装不等于产品质量。只有这么我们才能杜绝这种趋势。Tochangethissituation,Ithinkweshouldtakethefollowingmeasures.First,lawsmustbemadeandimplementedtoimposerestrictiononexcessivepackaging.Moreover,apubliceducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoarousecustomersconsciousnessthatpackagingdoesntequaltoquality.Onlyinthiswaycanweputanendtothistrend.第28页12月WhereThereIsaWillThereIsaWay1坚强意志是成功主要确保。2意志坚定人才能完成伟大使命，3学生也是这么，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才用。第29页Awell-knownproverbgoesthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway,whichmeansthatonecanfindawaytosuccessaslongasheorshehasastrongwill.Withastrongwill,onecanfocusallhisenergyononepoint,whichmakeshissuccesspossible.Withoutastrongwill,however,onecanbeeasilydistractedfromhisgoalordiscouragedbysetbacks,whichleadstohisultimatefailure.第30页Historyaboundswithexamplesofstrong-willedfigureswinningsuccess.Actually,thereisnobetterillustrationoftheproverbthanthedeedsofGouJian,kingofYueinancientChina.DefeatedbyFuChai,kingofWu,Goutriedeverymeanspossibletosteelhiswill.Eventually,withthehelpofFanLiandXiShi,hemanagedtorebuildhiscountryandhisarmiesandhadFuChaitastethebitternessoffailure.第31页Inshort,astrongwillisessentialifwewanttomakeachievementsinourstudiesorwork,orindeedinanyotheraspectofourlives.Oneshouldlosenochancetostrengthhiswillandremember,Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.第32页6月Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnline Shopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.现在网上购物已成为一个时尚2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.我提议第33页Online ShoppingWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingisnolongeratiringthing.Justclickyourmousetochoosethearticlesyoulike,andthepurchaseisdone.Youdontevenhavetostepoutoftheroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick.第34页peoplesopinionsvaryonthistrend.Somebelievethatonlineshoppingistimeandmoneysaving.Withplentifulselectionoptions,theycanbuywhatevertheylikeatanytimeconveniently.Stillothersinsistthatmispurchasingaloneisannoyingenough,nottomentionthecredibilityofthesellersandthesafetyoftheiraccounts.第35页Inmyopinion,theconvenienceandexcitementofonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime,wemustalwaysbearinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist,sowedbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition,weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.第36页12月Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.当前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?第37页6月Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofDueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况原因3.为了改变这种情况，我认为DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling第38页第39页