2021高考英语学案：短文改错练习(3)及答案解析.docx

2021高考英语学案：短文改错练习（3）及答案解析【英语卷(解析)2021届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（202208）】AOnce, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “Theres a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb. 【答案】【学问点】E1 短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础学问的应用，留意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础学问。【答案解析】76.so去掉。 because为从属连词，不与并联连词so连用，故去掉so。77. herhim 前文叙述的a man，故此处用him。78. saysaid 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。80.passingpassed 句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。81. was told tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。82.immediateimmediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。83.orand。并列的不定式，表示确定含义用and连接。84. milemiles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。85. inwith。 在某人的挂念之下with ones help或者with the help of sb。 【英语卷(解析)2021届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试（202209）WORD版】第一节短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。留意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car He shouted, but the man drive off As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief Whats more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven So the next day, he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feeling But I am a Christian and I forgive him! When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakes【答案】【学问点】E1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】本文叙述一个和善的人用爱心感动盗贼的故事【答案解析】1. when that 考查强调句。句意：一年前由于圣诞节周华得了一辆自行车。强调一年前。2. butand 考查连词。句意：一年前由于圣诞节周华得了一辆自行，并且每天都骑着它。两个句子之间是并列关系。3. RanRunning 考查非谓语动词。句意：他跑到前院，看到一个男人正在把他的自行车装到他的车上。两个句子共用一个主语，he与run之间是主动关系。4. drivedrove 考查动词的时态。句意：他叫喊但那个男人开车跑了。But连接的两个句子时态保持全都。5. real-really 考查副词 句意：作为一个虔诚的基督徒，他告知父亲他真的原谅了那个小偷。6. the thief后面加to 考查动词用法。Want sb to do 想让某人做某事。7. the messagea 考查冠词。句意：因此其次天，他前院的海报上写一个短信；由于第一次提到故用a.8. feeling-feelings 考查名词。句意：你损害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。9. himyou 考查代词。句意：但我是个基督徒，我原谅你。10. left for 去掉for 考查动词。句意：当他其次天早上离开家时。Leave A for B 离开A地去B地。短文改错I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. _first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant.78. _I still remember going there early and felt anxious about79. _the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. _losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do81. _my homework. And I came to understand that was not82. _easy to earn money, and knowledge could change83. _my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard84. _way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. _【参考答案】I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _a_family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. _had _first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant.78. _去掉one_I still remember going there early and felt anxious about79. _feeling_the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. _hard_losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do81. _too_my homework. And I came to understand that was not82. _it_easy to earn money, and knowledge could change83. _that _my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard84. _way, was much more important as what I earned.85. _than_短文改错My cousin Xiao Hong and I went on trip to my uncles 76. _last Sunday. We were riding along a hillside then suddenly 77. _some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes. 78. _Xiao Hongs legs got serious hurt and so did mine. We 79. _couldnt move a bit. Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead. 80. _Waving our hand, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing 81. _us, they run to the spot as fast as they could. Thanks to 82_their help, we were all sent to a nearby hospital and received 83. _medical treatment in time. Although we do not know about their 84. _names, we fell they like our dear big brothers and sisters. 85. _【参考答案】76.on a 77. then when 78 were去掉 79 serious seriously 80.正确 81. handhands 82.runran 83.allboth 84.about 去掉 85.theyare短文改错One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as76_the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately.77_She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking78_on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the79_kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly80_burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the81_windows, and then went out of the house. With my82_surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I83_was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it84_was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.85_【参考答案】76asWhen 77answer后加it 78SheIt 79athe 80 room后加was 81openingopened 82WithTo 83 84去掉about 85whichthat此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出推断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列状况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。留意：原行没有错的不要改。 George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81_another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82._work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83_was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to 84._our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._Yours,Mike【参考答案】76.after-since 77.them-us 78.for-with 79.正确 80.去掉much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip前a 85.better-more(2021甘肃省部分学校其次次联考)Im a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, Id like to apply for them. Im an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, Im willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, Id like to make friend. The chance is so precious as Im really looking forward to your approval.答案：Im a senior student from China, seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With interest, Id like to apply for . Im an outgoing girl who communicating with others. I speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, Im willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn more about other countries. In addition, Id like to make . The chance is so precious Im really looking forward to your approval.短文改错I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80. At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool81. or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82. each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any83. difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories85. are as sweet as ever before . 【参考答案】I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. yet in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. were at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. an had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. ourselves we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80. helpless At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool81. swim or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82. treated each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any83. difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. others It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories85. since are as sweet as ever before .短文改错Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over76. _the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since77. _long ago , many adults and children called their friends together78. _to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 79. _like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 80. _they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are81. _playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities82. _for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 83. _Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American84. _big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.85. _【参考答案】76. and but 77. womanwomen 78. called前加had 79. play- playing 80 正确 81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes 84.去掉the 85. sell-buy