1021writing公益活动作文养老院.docx

丰台2010一模第一节情景作文（20分）假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生。3月5日是学雷锋日，你班组织了一次帮扶活动。请根据下面四幅图所提供的活动内容和过程写一篇英文短文，为你校校刊英语专栏投稿。短文词数不少于60。提示词：nursing home养老院A day in memory of Lei Feng A day to commemorate/remember Lei FengLei Feng DayMemorial day for Lei Feng Learning from Lei Feng DayTime line: Feeling line:Pic 1: On March 4th / The day before, Key points: discussed(vt.) what we should do / we had a lively(heated/detailed) discussion about put forward / came up with a lot of great ideas(suggestions); we hit on the idea of ./ that It hit me that / It struck me that / A thought crossed my mind that Wouldnt that be great if we .? We all agreed with that. / We reached an agreement(consensus) on / that I spent several nights lying in bed, thinking about what to say. Many things crossed my mind, but none of them involved all my classmates. Then one night, it hit me. Erwin High School has the highest dropout rate of any high school in our county. What better goal could we have than for every single one of us to graduate? What if I could get my class to become the first class in the history of our public school system to enter high school as freshmen and all graduate? Wouldnt that be awesome?The day before, we spent several hours sitting at the desks, thinking about what to do. Many things crossed our minds, but none of them involved all my classmates. Then it hit me that the elderly people in the nursing home are lonely and need care. Wouldnt that be awesome if we could do something for them? Much to my happiness, we all thought it a great idea.On March 5th, Pic 2: Key points: some swept and mopped the floor, some cleaned the windows, Details: The moment/instant/minute we got there, we started the work immediately. 流汗：We sweated a lot / sweated buckets/ sweat poured off our foreheads, but we were in high spirits, enjoying the time working for the elderly. Everyone worked very hard until the floor and the windows shone / the room took on a new look. Sweat dripping down our faces, everybody wore a radiant smile. Pic 3: After that; After a short break/rest; A few minutes later / (Shortly) afterwards, Key points: We split into 2 groups. / We were divided into two groups. / We were separated into One group put on/gave/staged a performance; performed singing and dancing The other group taught the elderly everyday English (expressions)Details: They were attracted to our performance. / Our performance appealed to them. / They were completely immersed in the happy and light-hearted atmosphere we created, busting into laughter and applauding warmly from time to time. When learning a new expression, their eyes shone with excitement / their faces shone with delight.表扬give sb. plenty of praise and encouragementget the praise it deserved 得到应得的赞扬be full of praise for sb. / sbs work Jacks teacher was full of praise for his work.received high praise The speech I gave on graduation day was only 12 minutes long, but what it started is unbelievable. When I issued the challenge to my classmates to become the first class in history to enter high school as freshmen and all graduate, the entire audience, including the parents, grandparents and teachers, erupted in applause. As I showed the personalized certificates and signs each student would get, I could tell they were really enthused. At the end of my speech the whole audience jumped to its feet with a standing ovation. It was all I could do to keep my composure and not break down and cry. Id had no idea my challenge would bring this kind of response.When our performance started, the elderly erupted in applause. We sang and danced with enthusiasm on the stage, and they were completely immersed in the happy and light-hearted atmosphere. At the end of the performance, they even jumped to their feet with a standing ovation. Pic 4: Before lunch (time); Soon(Before we knew it) it was time to say goodbye. Time flies when you are having fun. We had a lovely visit, but all good things must come to an end.Key points: they saw us off at the gate and we waved them goodbye (we waved goodbye to them) we bid farewell to each other. Details: Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, a surge of happiness flooded over me. 升华：Reflecting on this wonderful volunteer(ing) activity, I This meaningful activity taught me a great / valuable lesson: After this activity, it dawned on me that l Never underestimate the difference you can make in the lives of others. Step forward, reach out and help. l Remember, if you ever need a helping hand, you will find one at the end of each of your arms; you will discover you have two hands, one for helping yourself and the other for helping others.l Helping a person will not necessarily change the world, but it will change the world for that person. l Never hesitate to help others in their time of need. You never know when you may need that shoulder to lean on. l Lifes finest hour is when we do good things to nameless people without expecting to remember our acts of kindness.l The quality of your life will be determined by the quality of your contribution. When you work to improve the life of others, your life improves automatically. l We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. l When you volunteer, you are not paid in money or recognition. You are paid in love. People may forget what you said, and people may forget what you did, but they will never forget how it made them feel.l Volunteer are not paidnot because they are worthless, but because they are priceless.l What we have done for ourselves dies with us; what we have done for others and the world remains and is immortal.l Give your hands to serve and your heart to love.l No matter how big or how small, an act of kindness shows that someone cares. And the results can be everlasting. l Volunteering gives you an opportunity to change peoples lives, including your own. Helping others in need is such an important part of life.l Volunteering helps people feel they make a difference that they do have the power to change things for the better.l I find it interesting that one person can make such a(n) 33 to so many peoples lives by doing one simple thing like waving and smiling warmly. 容易出错部分Made a discussion Made a performance Perform songs and dances Memorize leifeng Memorize number, address, names, details, words, lines 用心去记下来 Commemorate/honour /celebrate /mark the anniversary of Lei fengs death Waved/said/kissed goodbye to sb. Waved sb. goodbye Farewell Bid farewell to A possible version:Our class planned to organize an activity on March 5th, the day in memory of Lei Feng. The day before, we had a class meeting to discuss what we would do. After a heated discussion, we decided to go to a senior citizens home to do something for the elderly.On March 5th, we set out early in the morning. As soon as we got to the senior citizens home, we first did a thorough cleaning. Some swept and mopped the floor. Some cleaned the windows and the others did some washing. An hour later, the rooms in the senior citizens home looked clean and tidy. And then we were divided into two groups. One group gave wonderful performances that the elderly enjoyed a lot, the other group taught those who were interested in English some daily English expressions. All the elderly had a good time with us. When lunch time came we had to say good-bye to them.Weve really learned a lot from what we did. We also realize that we can make ourselves useful to those who need help and care.好句子：The day which commemorates Lei Feng was coming and or class planned to organize an activity to help others. 都乐平I do believe that the greatest happiness comes from helping others.梁鹤We realized that the happiness of helping others is around us. We just need to find it.马慧博It is love between people that makes time and lives glow.葛琪好作品：谢楚楠December 5th is National Volunteer Day, as for Chinese we have March 5th as a volunteer day to commemorate our immortal hero Lei Feng. To study from his spirit, we planned an aid activity at a senior citizens home, which had been carefully arranged by each of us on March 5th.Finally the big day came. We set out early with the sun shining in the sky, wind slipping by our side, and everything seemed so nice. Upon arrival, we greeted the elderly and started our cleaning work. Some of us swept and mopped the floor, while others cleaned windows and tidied the rooms. Being well-organized and earnest, we soon got everything done.After that, we taught some of those affable elderly people basic English words and several simple sentences. The granny I taught was really a quick learner, and apparently, we had a great time together. Also, we put on performances, and thanked to the effort of everybody, warm applause was given and we all felt satisfied. Time flew. Soon it was the time to wave goodbye. We all had lots of fun and we gained a lot from what we did. Love and care are always the best gift to other people. And it is not how it comes, but what it contains that builds up the relationship between two men, no matter if you have ever met. Its the deduction spirt and humanity that break the barrier of age, gender or territory. 韩嘉艺March 5th was the day in memory of Lei Feng and we held this activity to remember him. After a lively discussion, we decided to go to the senior citizens home where we could help the elderly.On arriving there, we rushed in. We just couldnt wait to do something for the elderly. We helped them do some housework. We swept the floor and cleaned the windows. With our work finished, the room looked tidy and delightful.After a short break, we performed for the elderly. It made them laugh again and again maybe because of our poor performing skills. After all, it was amused.You know what? After the performance, some of the elderly even wanted my classmates and me to teach them English! They were so admirable, werent they?The time passing, we had to say goodbye to them. I thought that the elderly were lonely and helpless. It was not for duty, but for kindness, that we should help them and help other people who need help.王冕晨 The Lei Feng Day was coming soon, so my classmates and I wanted to do something. After a heated discussion, we decided to help the elderly who lived in the senior citizens home.On the Lei Feng Day, hardly had we got there than we got down to doing some cleaning as planned. Girls were responsible for cleaning windows while boy took charge of sweeping the floor. Despite our tiredness, we worked in high spirits. After the cleaning, we were divided into two groups. Each group performed a different task. One gave the elderly people a fantastic performance in the hall and the other were asked to teach the elderly some daily English expressions when they saw broad smiles appear on their faces, happiness and achievement filed their hearts.Happy time always passes quickly. When we left the senior citizens hoe, all the elderly people said goodbye to us. Although we felt tired, we thought it worthwhile. 郄卓妍 Our class organized an activity on March 5th, the day in memory of Lei Feng. We decided to volunteer at a senior citizens home, because we had seen how lonely some of the residents were.The day before, a class meeting was held to discuss what we should prepare. They gave lots of good ideas during the heated discussion.On March 5th, we set out early in the morning with pleasure, we heled the elderly clean the windows and swept the floor. Some classmates were in charge of cleaning work while others tooks the task of chatting with the elderly. Our hearts were enveloped with happiness when we saw their smile from the bottom of their hearts. We also gave wonderful performances that they enjoyed a lot.We had to say goodbye before much time. That meaningful volunteering experience has shown me that I can bring joy and warmth to the elderly. It made me a more caring person.