2022届高三牛津版英语一轮复习全书讲义-第三部分第十讲发挥合理想象灵活阐释开放作文-.docx

第十讲　发挥合抱负象，机敏阐释开放作文

(2022·高考福建卷)如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”
—Sir Winston Churchill
内容要求：
1．你对该引语的理解；
2．你的相关经受；
3．恰当的结尾。
留意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不能毁灭考生的具体信息；
3．词数：120左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_______________________________
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1．丘吉尔的名言告知我们失败后我们不应当灰心丧气，相反，我们应当连续布满热忱地努力尝试。
(一般表达)This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t lose heart right after failures；on the contrary，we should continue with enthusiasm.
(高级表达)(get done与keep doing sth.)This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t ________________ right after failures；instead，we should ________________ with enthusiasm.
答案：get discouraged；keep trying
2．成功在于你经受了失败后连续努力的力气。
(一般表达)Success lies in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
(高级表达)(同义句转换)Success ________________ the ability to continue efforts through failures.
答案：consists in
3．十二岁时，作为生日礼物我收到了一辆秀丽自行车，我是那么兴奋，我迫不及待地去尝试骑自行车，然而，骑自行车比预想的要困难得多。
(一般表达)At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.I was so excited that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than it was expected.
(高级表达)(so倒装句型，省略)At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.________________ I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder ________．
答案：So excited was I that；than expected
4．自行车看起来太沉，太难把握了，我从自行车摔了那么多次数，我想放弃。
(一般表达)The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.I took many falls off the bike and I wanted to give it up.
(高级表达)(so...that)The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.I took ________________ off the bike ________ I wanted to give it up.
答案：so many falls；that
5．在我刚要放弃时，父亲过来鼓舞我连续努力，随着多次练习，我骑得越来越好了。
(一般表达)I’m going to give up and just at that time my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.
(高级表达)(be about to do sth.when...)I ________________________________ my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.
答案：was about to give up when
6．回想起来，假如我当时失去信念的话，我认为我就不会骑自行车了。
(一般表达)When I look back，I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.
(高级表达)(非谓语动词作状语)____________________________，I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.
答案：Looking back
7．事实上，我们不行能事事成功，重要的是我们应当坚持。(一般表达)Actually，we can’t succeed in everything we try.It is important that we should stick at it.
(高级表达)(what引导主语从句)Actually，we can’t succeed in everything we try，______________________ we should stick at it.
答案：what’s important is that

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One possible version：
This_quotation_from_Winston_Churchill_tells_us_that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures.Instead，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.
Actually，we can’t succeed in everything we try.What’s important is that we should stick at it.
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