【优化方案】2021高考英语(外研版)总复习Ⅱ卷强化训练(9).docx

卷强化训练(9)(建议用时：35分钟)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。留意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2022辽宁大连高三双基测试)Dear Jack，I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working parttime in a fast food restaurant.Now I would like to share your working experiences with you during the past summer holiday.In the beginning of the summer vacation，I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket.I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met.Sometimes I was laughed at，and most of the time，I was praised for my wonderful works by many people.Half a month passed quickly after I knew it，and I learned how to deal with different people.Above all，I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.Best wishes，Yours，Li Ming其次节书面表达 (满分25分)(2022黑龙江四校高三联合考试)很快你们就要进入高校了，现在上高校的费用对于每个中国家庭来说几乎都是一笔不小的开支。下面供应了解决上高校费用的多种途径，请用英语表达出来，同时结合你的家庭实际状况，说明适合你的途径和理由。1解决上高校费用的途径：(1)父母供应学费；(2)申请银行贷款；(3)获得奖学金；(4)业余时间在校内外打工。2你的途径和理由。留意：1.词数100左右；2短文的开头已写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：学费tuition fees；贷款loan；奖学金scholarshipWith the sharp rise of the cost of college education，students have a few ways to pay for their college tuition fees._卷强化训练(9)第一节短文改错Dear Jack，I am to hear from you and know that you had a time working parttime in a fast food restaurant.Now I would like to share working experiences with you during the past summer holiday. the beginning of the summer vacation，I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket.I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I met.Sometimes I was laughed at， most of the time，I was praised for my wonderful by many people.Half a month passed quickly I knew it，and I learned how to deal with different people.Above all，I have learned that smile is the key to any problem.Best wishes，Yours，Li Ming其次节书面表达One possible version：With_the_sharp_rise_of_the_cost_of_college_education，students_have_a_few_ways_to_pay_for_their_college_tuition_fees.Many students just let their parents pay the tuition.Some students may apply for a bank loan and others will try to find parttime jobs both on compus and out of campus.Apart from these ways，many good students will win a scholarship.In this way they can pay at least part of their tuition fees.As for me，I will let my parents pay half of my tuition fees because they are not rich enough.Besides my studies，I will take up a parttime job as a tutor teaching some high school students maths，physics or English，for Im very good at these subjects.Of course I will work very hard at my lessons so that I can win a scholarship.I think these are enough to pay for the cost of my college education.