高中英语作文读后续写afunnystory省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

Afunnystory第1页阅读下面短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之组成阅读下面短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之组成一个完整故事。一个完整故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like youve got a problem,”Arthur said.“Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,“Thanks.If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all.Id be glad to help.”第2页 The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?”But everyone had a different answer.Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase!She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thought,he started to run.第3页Whoaremaincharactersinthisstory?ArthurandayoungmanwhodidArthurmeetwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday?ayoungmanWhathappenedtotheyoungman?Whattroubledidhehave?Hewasinabighurrybuthecouldntstarthiscar.第4页Whathelpdidtheyoungmanaskfor?HeaskedArthurtohelphimgetsuitcasesintoataxi.WhathappenedwhenArthurcarriedthesuitcase?Heheardtheloudnoiseofanalarm.Therehadbeenarobbery.Becauseofcarringthesuitcase,whatdidpeoplethinkofArthur?Hewasconsideredasthebankthief.第5页HowdidArthurfeel?Whatdidhedo?hebecamefrightenedandstartedtorun.Brainstrom:whatkindofendingwouldyoulike?Canyoudesigntheendingofthisstory?第6页HowtowritetheendofstoryParagraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._第7页1.所所续写短文词数应为续写短文词数应为150左右左右；2.使用使用5个以上短文中标有下划线关键个以上短文中标有下划线关键词语词语3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用关键词续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用关键词语。语。续续写故事内容根本要清楚，与前面给出故事写故事内容根本要清楚，与前面给出故事有有连连贯性。内容不能太繁杂，也不能过于简单贯性。内容不能太繁杂，也不能过于简单对内容丰富程度和对所给关键词语覆盖情况作出对内容丰富程度和对所给关键词语覆盖情况作出要求要求与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度；上下文连贯与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度；上下文连贯性性应用语法结构和词汇丰富性和表示准确性应用语法结构和词汇丰富性和表示准确性第8页HowtowritetheendofstoryParagraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_whywasArthurrunning?Whathappenedtothem?Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._WhatdidArthurwanttodoatthepolicestation?howabouttheyoungman?Whathappenedatthepolicestation?第9页Brainstrom:HowtowritetheendofstoryRequirementsdesigncomplicatedplot（情节）（情节）andtwist（波折）（波折）yourplotshouldbelogicalandreasonableuseunderlinedwordsandexpressionsinthetext.about150words第10页HowtowritetheendofstoryParagraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_whywasArthurrunning?Whathappenedtothem?Usefulexpressionsquarrel/arguesuspectafraid/threathenanxiousangryarrestrunafter/chase第11页Paragraph2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._whatdidArthurwanttodoatthepolicestation?howabouttheyoungman?Whathappenedatpolicestation?Usefulexpressionsturnouttobeproveguiltyembarrassedrelievedexplain第12页possibleversion：As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Thinkingofthewaytheyoungmanhadbehaved,herealizedtheyoungmanmightbethebankrobber.SoArthurstoppedataxi.Themomenthegotintothetaxi,hetoldthedriverthemanshoutingbehindwasthebankthiefandaskedhimtodrivetothenearestpolicestationtoreporttherobbery.ThedriverfollowedwhatArthursaidanddroveaway.第13页 The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thankedthedriveranddirectlywentin.JustasArthurwasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankontheParkAvenueandreportedtheyoungmantothepolice,heheardavoiceoutside,“Help!Help!”TothesurpriseofArthur,itwastheyoungman.HehadfollowedArthurinanothertaxi.Itturnedoutthattheyoungmanwasinnocentandinsidethesuitcaseswerejustsomeclothes.Arthurfeltembarrassedbutthepolicementhankedhimanyway.(Words:159)第14页徐宇晨徐宇晨Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”butArhturwastooscaredtostophisfoot.Heonlywantedtorunfaster.Hesawataxidrivingtohim,hejumpedandwavedhishandsandshouted“taxi,taxi”.Thetaxistoppedinfrontofhim,hecanthelpgettingintothetaxiandcounldntwaittosaywithafrightenedlook,“pleasegotothenearestpolicestation”Seeing第15页The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur rushed into the police station like a wind.All people at the police station were shocked.Arthur took a deep breath and told him what happened in the bank at the Park Avenue.Arthur said“I m sure the bank thief was the young man,because the two suitcases were his.Arthur gave them to the police,the police opened the suitcase,but nothing in it.Arthur was so surprised that he couldnt say anything to explain what happened in front of his eyes,the police was so angry and shouted“go away.”第16页Arthurwalkedoutthepolicestationandhesawtheyoungmanwalkingcloseandsmiling“pleaseturnbackmysuitcase,Iknowwhyyouaresoscared,andnowyoushouldknowIamnotthebankthief,thebankthiefwascaught.”Arthurfeltembrassedandsaid:“sorry,Iamsostupid.”第17页