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专四写作辅导2商英教研室第1页内容一复习二模板识记、积累&检验二怎样制造亮点词语三怎样制造亮点句型第2页复习复习模板识记、积累模板识记、积累&检验检验第3页怎样制造亮点词语怎样制造亮点词语第4页1选取详细词平时学习时，就要注意积累详细词，并使之成为活跃活跃词汇。这么实战时，才能随手利用。goodfoodpktasty/freshfood原句：Noonesawthebankbeingbrokeninto.优化：Noonewitnessedthebankbeingbrokeninto.原句：Pleasetryourbesttohelpthisgirl,helphertopassthemostdifficultperiodinlife,andmakeherfinancialburdenlessandless.优化：Pleasetryourbesttohelpthisgirl,helphertopassthemostdifficultperiodinlife,andrelieveherfinancialburden.第5页2注意区分近义词学习时，注意区分含义微妙差异，从而在利用时，用词恰当。原句：Nuclearproliferationisalwaysthetopproblemtheparticipantshavetodiscussatthiskindofmeeting.issueissueatopicthatisoftendiscussedorarguedabout,especiallyasocialorpoliticalmatterthataffectstheinterestsofalotofpeople尤指社会或政治方面议题；争论问题Abortionisahighlycontroversialissue.堕胎是个很有争议话题。pkproblemasituationthatcausesdifficultiesIvebeenhavingafewproblemswithmycar.第6页3学会活用不一样词性汉语则较多使用动词、形容词，而英语中惯用名词。所以，要想地道、制造亮点，要学会多用名词原句：Afterweobservedthemcarefullyandanalyzedthemcritically,wemayidentifytheconceptionsthatwillactuallycontributetothesocialdevelopment.优化：Throughcarefulobservation and critical analysis第7页4恰当使用限定用语限定用语使用能够使叙述愈加客观、适度，防止观点绝对化，提升说服力和可信度。常见限定词：mainly,generally,ingeneral,typically,mostly,almost,forthemostpart;may,maybe,perhaps,probably;sometimes,tosomeextent,tosomedegree第8页亮点词语改写练习亮点词语改写练习1.Idliketomakeeveryefforttolet more people know theideathatwasteisdisgraceful,andcallonallmyschoolmatestofightagainstwaste.(用更详细词)2.Imsureyouwillsoonfindagoodcandidatefortheposition.(用更详细词)3.Peoplewho are good at dealing with socialrelationsadmittheirmistakes,andtaketheirshareofblame.(用介词短语改写)第9页怎样制造亮点句型第10页长句短句搭配使用在实际写作中,一味地采取长句或短句都是不可取,要长短句交替使用。开头&结尾：用长句，吸引阅卷老师注意力正文：普通来说,写作中是以简单句为基础,适当配以并列句和复合句。第11页1.长句使用方法长句含有许多修饰语,适合表示准确而复杂思想,解释观点或理论,描写细致事物。写作时,考生要注意前后句子之间是否存在联络,善于发觉各简单句之间关联,用恰当连接连接方式方式(esp并列、从句、介词并列、从句、介词短语短语、非谓语动词短语非谓语动词短语)将简单句连接起来,组成准确地道复杂长句,增加文章气势。原句:Naturalresourcesareverylimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthenearfuture.Itisnottrue.Butitbecomesamajorconcernaroundtheworld.Thisisawidelyacceptedfact.优化:It is widely accepted fact that thereisamajorconcernaroundtheworldfor the exhaustion oflimitednaturalresourcesinthenearfuture,thoughitisunlikelytobetrue.第12页学会使用并列结构平行结构指是将结构相同或相同、意义并重、语气一致语言成份并行排列一个修辞手法。这种结构层次清楚、语意顺畅,能够起到加强语气、增强表示效果作用。原句:Thisphenomenon,inmyopinion,hasupgradedthequalityofpeopleslife.Andithasalsoimprovedthevalveofconsumptionofourmodernsociety优化：Thisphenomenon,inmyopinion,hasnotonlyupgradedthequalitypeopleslifebutalsoimprovedthevalveofconsumptionofourmodernsociety第13页学会使用介词短语汉语中几乎较少用介词短语，而英语中较多。另外，介词短语简练有力，能够极大地增强文章表现力原句：Piratedproductsoftencostmuchlessthantheoriginalones,sotheyenjoyunbeatableadvantageinpricethough their quality is relatively poor.优化：despitetheirrelativelypoorquality.第14页学会使用非谓语动词短语原句:Manypeoplegetupearlytojogalongcountrylanes,orinordertoobservethewonderofnature.Andsomealsojustwatchthesunrise.优化:Manypeoplegetupearlytojogalongcountrylanes,toobservethewonderofnature,orjusttowatchthesunrise.第15页2.短句使用方法长句当然能表示出复杂而缜密思想,但假如片面追求复杂句式,华而不实,反而会成为表示累赘。所以,写作中句子长短应依据表示需要,有话则长,无话则短。短句比较简练、明快、有力,适合陈说主要事实或想法。短句不但指句子长度较短,也指句子结构精炼。原句:Manyautomobilepartsthataremadeofplasticsandothersyntheticmaterialsdonotlastlong.优化:Manyautomobilepartsmadeofplasticsandothersyntheticmaterialsdonotlastlong.第16页从句适当变换非谓语动词短语非谓语动词包含:动词不定式、动名词、现在分词和过去分词。有时候我们能够适当使用非谓语动词短语代替从句,这么就能够在有限空间内容纳更多信息,使句子结构紧凑、逻辑严谨。原句:Itmustberealizedthatpeopleshouldbecautiouswhentheydecidewhichbookstheyshouldchoosetoreadsinceiftheyreadbadbooks,itwillbetimewastingandharmful优化:Itmustberealizedthatpeopleshouldbecautiouswhendecidingwhich books to readsincereadingbadbooksistime-wastingandharmful原句:Becauseoneofmyparentsislaidoff,myfamilycantpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege优化：Withoneofmyparentsbeinglaidoff,myfamilycantpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege第17页3.会利用插入语插入语有时表示说话者态度和看法,有时起强调作用,有时是为了引发对方注意,有时起转移话题或说明事由作用,有时还能够承上启下,使句子衔接得更紧密。写作中惯用到插入语包含:副词和副词短语副词和副词短语:indeed(确实),surely(无疑),however(然而),frankly(坦率地说),obviously(显然),naturally(自然地),luckily/happilyforsb.(算某人幸运),fortunately(幸好),strangely(奇怪),briefly(简单地说),personally(依个人之见)。形容词或形容词短语形容词或形容词短语:true(真),funny(真可笑),needlesstosay(不用说),mostimportantofall(最为主要),worsestill(更糟糕),evenbetter更加好)第18页介词短语介词短语:inconclusion(总之),inaword(简而言之),inshortinbrief(简而言之),ingeneral(普通说来),Inasense(在某种意义上),Inonesview(在某人看来),Inonesopinion(按照某人看法),infact(实际上),atfirst(首先),inaddition(另外),ofcourse(当然),toonessurprise(使某人惊奇是),toonesregret(使某人遗憾是),forexample(比如),onthecontrary(相反),inotherwords(换句话说),ontheotherhand(然而)。分词短语分词短语:strictlyspeaking(严格地说),considering/takingintoconsideration(考虑到,鉴于),judgingfrom(依据判断)。不定式短语不定式短语:tobesure(无疑),tosumup(概括地说),totellthetruth(说实话),tobefrank/tobehonest(说实在,老实地说),tomakemattersworse(更糟是),tostartwith/tobeginwith(首先,第一)。第19页原句:Ithinkthatcomputergamescanalsodosomegoodtoyoungpeople.优化:Computergames,inmyopinion,canalsodosomegoodtoyoungpeople.原句:Theabove-mentionedshowthatitisnodoubtthatcollegestudentsshouldoftenattendsportsactivities.优化:Consideringtheabove-mentioned,itisnodoubtthatcollegestudentsshouldoftenattendsportsactivities.第20页4.倒装句和强调句适当穿插什么是倒装句句子成份在句子中都有一定位置,但有时能够把一些句子成份前后倒置,以到达突出强调作用。英语中倒装主要有两种:全部倒装和部分倒装.全部倒装是指主语和谓语完全倒置,惯用于记叙或描写。部分倒装是指只将助动词提到主语前面,而主要动词依然保留在原来位置上,惯用于议论或说明。原句:Byreadingwidely,onecanreallymakeremarkableachievementsinhisstudy.优化:Only by reading widely can hereallymakeremarkableachievementsinhisstudy.第21页什么是强调句写作中,常使用强调句来到达突出重点目标。强调句基本结构是:Itis(was)+被强调部分+that(who)+句子其它成份。原句:Nothowmuchyoureadbutwhatyoureadreallymatters优化:It is nothowmuchyoureadbutwhatyoureadthatreallymatters第22页