改革后新专业四级英语写作开头技巧省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。内容摘要：内容摘要：写作新题型考是summary+comment。这种题型看似新奇，其实愈加简单,显著不一样是开头需要summarize。Comment部分不一定要写考生自己观点，完全能够摘取阅读材料中现成观点稍作展开。这么考生最少从头到尾不愁“无话可说”。第1页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。“Read carefully the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.”新样题中“阅读材料”由原来一段话变成了对某个issue正反双方鲜明对立几段文字，而且题目明确要求考生先summarizebriefly。summary应该用原文四分之一文字表示原文主要观点。新专四样题阅读材料原文普通200词左右，这么概述以后大约保留80字左右。对于一篇总共200字左右考试作文，这么开头会让整体结构不太匀称，所以也能够稍微再做压缩到50-60。第2页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Inrecentyears,traditionalprintednewspaperhasfacedaseriouschallenge.TheChristianScienceMonitorbecamethefirstnationalnewspapertoshutdownitsprintedition,andrecently,theworldfamousmagazineNewsweekannouncedthatitwouldsoonceasepublishingonpaperandshifttoanonline-onlyformat.Willtheprintednewspaperonedaybereplacedbyonlinenewspaper?Somebelievesowhilemanystillholdanoptimisticviewonthefutureoftraditionalnewspaper.Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandwriteyourresponseinabout200words,inwhichyoushouldfirstsummarizebrieflytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewsontheissue.EXERCISE1第3页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Traditional characters,which date back to more than yearsago,haveamorebeautifulappearanceandamorereasonable structure.Traditional characters make more sense convey traditional values and can therefore representtraditionalculture.For two millennia,Chinese historical records and classicworkswerewrittenintraditionalcharacters.Tobeabletoreadthemandinherittraditionalculture,weneedtobringtraditionalcharactersback.Politically,itisalsonecessarytorestoretraditionalChinesecharacters.Currently,traditionalcharactersarestill in use in Hong Kong,Taiwan and many Chinese communities around the world.Restoring them can contributetocross-straitsexchangesandnationalreunificationanduniteChinesepeoplearoundtheworld.YES第4页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Intodaysworldefficiencymattersmost.Traditionalcharacters,whichusuallyhavemorestrokesthansimplifiedones,aremoredifficulttolearn.Bycontrast,simplifiedcharactersaremucheasiertolearnanduse.Overthepast50years,lotsofclassictextshavebeenturnedintosimplifiedcharacterversions,whichmeanssimplifiedcharacterscanalsopromoteandpreservetraditionalculture.ConstantsimplificationhasbeenatrendintheevolutionofChinesecharacters.Fromtheoraclebonesscriptof3000yearsagototraditionalcharacters,theChinesewritingsystemhasalwaysbeenslimmingdownforbettercommunication.NO第5页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.第6页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。找出对立双方主要论点感觉有难度，简单方法是用句子代替词组（注意尽可能不要照抄原文）；实在感觉个别观点有难度还能够忽略WhenitcomestosimplifiedChinesecharacters(或WhenitcomestowhetherweshouldrevivetraditionalChinesecharacters),peoplesviewsvaryfromonetoanother.Someclaimthatweshouldadoptthepolicyforaesthetical,culturalandpoliticalbenefits.Others,however,contendthatsimplifiedversionsarebetterchoicebecausetheyareeasiertolearn,slimmerforbettercommunicationandalsohelpfultopreservetraditionalculture.Frommyperspective,itiswisetochoosetraditional/simplifiedversionsforthefollowingreasons.第7页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。YESThenewmedia,suchastheInternetandmobilephoneapplications,haveexertedagreatinfluenceonpeopleslife.Onlinenewspaperisfast,instant,andconvenient,whiletheprintednewspaperoftenrespondsslowlytothelatestnews.Peoplearenowusedtoreadingonlinenewspaperontheirsmartphones,andnoonehasthepatienceofwaitingfortheprintednewspaper.Onlinenewspaperisalsoenvironment-friendly,whichisinaccordwiththetrendofsavingenergyintodaysworld.Theprintednewspaperconsumesalargenumberofnaturalresources,andwill,inthelongterm,begraduallyreplaced.Themultipleservices,suchaspostingcommentsandfindingrelatednewsthroughthelinksprovidedbyonlinenewspaperhavegreatlyenrichedpeoplesreadingexperiencesandknowledge.Traditionalnewspapercanhardlycompeteinthissense.EXERCISE2第8页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。NOTherearestillalargenumberofpeopleintheworldwhohavenoaccesstotheInternet.Forthesepeople,printednewspaperisanimportantwaytoknowaboutthelatesteventsathomeandabroad.Althoughtheprintednewspapercannotbeasfast-respondingastheonlinenewspaper,itstillcanprovidemanyin-depthreportsandanalyticalarticlesforreaders.Manycolumnwritersareinvitedtowritespecialfeaturereportsfortheprintednewspaper.Onlinenewspaper,ontheotherhand,isonlysuitableforfastreading.Manyreadersprefertoreadtheprintednewspaperfortheydonotlikestaringatthecomputerorcellphonescreen.Printednewspaperisalsopreferredbytheelderlypeople.第9页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。难以抗拒网络报纸时尚难以抗拒网络报纸时尚审题思绪审题思绪:本题讨论是在网络媒体冲击下，传统报纸是否会被网络报纸所取代。在详细行文方面，应首先依据材料简明概括正反两方观点：正方认为网络报纸优势显著，反方则认为纸质报纸依然有存在理由。然后提出自己观点：纸质报纸最终会消失，并给出论据。最终总结全文，重申观点。第10页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Withtheadventofinformationtechnology,thetraditionalmediaarepushedtothecornerandarestrugglingtosurvive.Surprisingly,notallpeoplearehailingthebirthofonlineversionnews.SomepeoplebelievethattraditionalprintednewspaperisirreplaceablesincealargenumberofpeoplestillhavenoaccesstotheInternet.However,othersbelievethatthedemiseofprintedversionisathand.Beingfasterandmoreconvenient,cellphonesandpersonalcomputershaveledustoapaper-freelifestyle.TheIrresistibleTrendofOnlineNewspaper第11页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。AsfarasIamconcerned,itisirresistiblethattheprintednewspaperwilldemisewhiletheonlinenewspaperwillprosper.Asthemodernlifepicksupspeed,newsisreportedateveryturn(处处).Newsisnolongernewwhenprintedonpaper.Whiletheprintingprocessoftraditionalnewspapertakeshours,anditsdistributionmaytakeevenlongertime,theelectronictransmissionofnewsontheInternetmayonlytakeacoupleofseconds,evenincludingvideosandaudios.Besides,youngpeople,thelargestnumberofconsumers,prefertoreadnewsviacellphoneorlaptop.Bythesedevices,userscanshareandcommentonthenews,whichenablesthemtoenrichtheirknowledgeandmindinashorttime.第12页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Inconclusion,Ifirmlyholdtheideathattheonlinenewspaperwilldominatethemarketinthefutureandtheprintednewspaperwillbedisplayedinthemuseumrepresentingaperiodofhistory.第13页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptonterm-timeholidayargumentsintheUK,andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words,inwhichyoushould:lSummarizethemainmessageoftheexcerptandthenlcommentonwhetherparentsshouldtakechildrenoutofschoolforholidayduringtemtimeinordertosavemoney.Youshouldsupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.EXERCISE3第14页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。TermtimeholidayswillbeBannedParentsaretobebannedbyMichaelGove,theEducationSecretary,fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschooltosavemoneyonholidays.Heistoabolishtherightofheadteachersto“authoriseabsence”fromtheclassroom,whichhasbeenusedtoletfamiliestaketerm-timebreaks,andwillwarnthemtheyfacefinesfortheirchildrennotbeingatschool.“Anytimeoutofschoolhasthepotentialtodamageachildseducation,”aseniorsourceattheDepartmentforEducationsaidthisweekend.“Thatiswhythegovernmentwillendthedistinctionbetweenauthorisedandunauthorisedabsence.”第15页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。“Thisispartofthegovernmentswidercommitmenttobringdowntruancylevelsinourschools.Therewillalsobestricterpenaltiesforparentsandschools.”ThetoughmeasuresontruancyarepartofawiderattemptbyMr.Govetomakeeducationmoreacademicallyrigorousandtotackleacultureintheeducationalestablishmentwhichhebelieveshasaccepted“excusesforfailure.”RussellHobby,thegeneralsecretaryoftheNationalAssociationofHeadTeachers,saidthemeasurewoulddiscourageparentsfromtryingtoputpressureonheadstosanctiontermtimeholidays.“Thehighcostofholidaysoutsideoftermtimeisstillanissuebutultimatelyachildseducationismoreimportantthanaholiday,”hesaid.第16页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。WhichIsMoreImportant,EducationoraCheaperHoliday?sample1NewresearchhasshownthatalmostfouroutoftenparentsintheUKhavetakentheirchildrenoutofschooltogoonholidays.Costisthemainreasongivenbyparentsforsacrificingtheirchildrenseducation.Parentsaretobebanned,however,byUKsEducationAuthority,fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschoolforholidayduringtermtime.第17页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Tobeginwith,takingtoughmeasuresonthiskindoftruancyisconducivetothenormalteachingprocess,oneofthekeyelementstoguaranteekidsacademicperformance.Asweknow,currently,teachershavethediscretiontoapproveacertaintimeofabsencefromschoolforeachchild,whichissupposedtobeforillnessandisnotsupposedtobegrantedforholidays.Bydefinitelyabolishingtherightofheadteachersto“authorizeabsence”fromtheclassroom,thoseteacherscanrarelybepesteredbyparentswhowanttotakechildrentogoonaholidayjusttosavemoney,whichseverelydisruptsteachingprocess.Whatsmore,withoutstrictpenaltiesimposedontheparentswholeadtotheirkidsplayingtruant,thoseparentscangraduallyviewaskingforholidayleaveasaright.Oncethisculturalexpectationisformed,theleveloftruancywilldramaticallyincrease.第18页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Accordingly,thegrowingtrendofterm-timeholidaysshouldbebannedwithnodelay.Inthisway,teacherscanimpartknowledgewithoutdisturbanceandparentswillbedeterredfromsavingmoneyattheexpenseofsacrificingtheirkidseducation.第19页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Sample2Whenitcomestowhetherparentsshouldtaketheirchildrentospendholidaysduringterm-time,viewsontheissuevaryfrompersontoperson.Parentsclaimthatbydoingso,theycansavealotofmoneybornofbusyschoolholidays.Educationalofficialsstronglyopposethistendencyonthegroundthatitencouragestruancy,whichinturndamagesachildseducation.Frommyperspective,themeritsofbanningterm-timeholidaysoutweighitsdemerits.第20页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Shouldlocalauthoritiesstaggerschoolholidaystoenablefamilieswithchildrentotakeadvantageoftravelbargains?Or is it wrong for parents to jeopardize their childrenseducationforthesakeofacheaperholiday?AsfarasIamconcerned,education is more important.Firstly,childrenseducationmustcomefirst.Acheapholidayduringtheschoolseasonshouldntbethereasontotakeachildoutofschool.Some parents are not willing to sacrifice or schedule theirlivesintermsoftheirchildrensneeds.Thiskindofattitudewillinfluencetheirchildrendeeply.Itsnowondersomanykidsarenotinterestedinschoolanddonttaketheirstudyseriously.Secondly,school isnt day care center.Its aneducationalinstitutionthatneedseverystudenttofollowitsrules.Takingachildonholidaywhenschoolisinsessionwilldisturbtheorderoftheschool.Besides,itisdisruptiveforthechild,becausehewillhavetocatchupwhenhereturns.第21页文档仅供参考，如有不当之处，请联系改正。Allinall,takingchildrenoutofschoolforacheaperholidayisirresponsiblebehavior.Thoseparentswouldriskbeingfinedfinanciallyandmorally.Itsnotonlykidsthatneedtogrowupalotofparentsneedtoaswell.第22页