单元主题写作三1省公开课一等奖新名师优质课比赛一等奖课件.pptx

单元主题写作Unit 3 Safety第1页话题分析 本单元话题为“安全与规则”。怎样注意安全和恪守规则是本单元写作话题。经过本单元学习，学生要能够用简单英语表示出恪守规则主要性及怎样远离危险，确保安全。本话题多采取普通现在时和祈使句来表示。单元主题写作第2页经典例题 黔南州改编黔南州改编 当前，校园暴力时有发生，已经危害到中学当前，校园暴力时有发生，已经危害到中学生身心健康。中学生应该知道怎样规范本身行为习惯，保护本生身心健康。中学生应该知道怎样规范本身行为习惯，保护本身安全，远离校园暴力。请以身安全，远离校园暴力。请以“规范自我行为，做个合格中学规范自我行为，做个合格中学生生”为主题写一篇英语短文。为主题写一篇英语短文。关键点：关键点：1.恪守学校纪律，听从老师及家长教育，严格要求自恪守学校纪律，听从老师及家长教育，严格要求自己；己；2远离网吧，按时上学，回家；远离网吧，按时上学，回家；3待人礼貌，友好，不与同学打架；待人礼貌，友好，不与同学打架；4碰到困难多与父母及老师沟通。碰到困难多与父母及老师沟通。单元主题写作第3页要求：要求：1.必须用到以上信息，可适当发挥；必须用到以上信息，可适当发挥；2文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息；文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息；380词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；4要求句子连贯，语义通顺，书写规范。要求句子连贯，语义通顺，书写规范。参考词汇：参考词汇：campus violence校园暴力校园暴力be strict with对对严严格格 stay away from the Internet bar远离网吧远离网吧fight with与与斗争斗争 Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays.It is harmful for students.It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds.As a student，单元主题写作第4页思绪点拨 单元主题写作开篇点题As a student,it is important to know how to be a good teenager.详细描写First SecondThirdFourth表示看法In a word,we should try our best to behave well.第5页素材积累 惯用短语1恪守规则_2当心_3照看；照料_4远离_5注意_6求援_obey/follow the rules 单元主题写作look out/be carefullook after/take care ofstay/keep away frompay attention toask for help第6页惯用句子1Its necessary for us to learn some rules.2Stay away from danger.3We should learn how to protect ourselves.单元主题写作第7页高分模板 Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays.It is harmful for students.It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds.As a student,it is important to know how to be a good teenagerFirst,we should follow school rules to behave well at school.Its good for us to listen to the teachers and parents.We must be strict with ourselves.单元主题写作第8页 Second,to be safe,we should stay away from the Internet bar,and go to school and go back home on time.Third,as teenagers,we should be friendly to one another,and dont fight with classmates.Fourth,if we have any difficulty in life,its best to talk about them with our teachers and parents.In a word,we should try our best to behave well.单元主题写作第9页名师点评“疑问词不定式”结构利用很好地概述了文章主题。first,second,third,fourth这些序数词利用使得文章思绪清楚，条理性强。祈使句利用符合警示语要求。in a word利用强化了主题，起到了总结作用。单元主题写作第10页小试身手 暑假即未降临，许多学生喜欢下河游泳。为预防游泳溺水事故发生，你们班将举行以“珍爱生命，预防溺水”为主题班会。请你写一篇英语讲话稿，提出你对安全游泳提议，提议内容包含：不要到陌生河流和湖泊游泳；不要私自结伴游泳；不会游泳，不要下水救人单元主题写作第11页要求：1.语言通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑；2内容可适当发挥；3文中不得出现真实校名和人名；4词数：80词左右。参考词汇：without permission(未经许可)cherish(珍爱)_单元主题写作第12页单元主题写作One possible version：Summer vacation is coming.Many students like going swimming in rivers and lakes.But how to swim safely?Here is my advice.Dont swim in strange rivers and lakes.We shouldnt go swimming alone.We cant swim with other students without permission.We are not allowed to swim without a parent.If we cant swim,we mustnt get into the water to save a person.Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.We live only once,we must cherish life.第13页