高考英语写作点拨课件：12 图画作文.pdf

图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式，是一种变“画”为 文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画，要求考生在 看懂图画意思后写作文，主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思 考力、创造力和表达能力。一、试题特征 1.素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉 的场景，画面生动形象，具有趣味性，体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明，考生 易获得直观信息。2.文体形式多样。图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论 文。二、写作步骤 1.确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文、说明文和议论文 为主。2.确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写，一般采用第 一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称。3.确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章 所要用的时态。4.合理、适度的联想。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生进行 适度的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。5.虚实结合、详略得当。对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述描 写的，就必须要详细、具体；可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。比如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论须一词不漏地写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。三、注意事项 1.看图记叙文的写作要注意把握写作素材的时间、地点、人物，以及事件的叙述。可以采取倒叙的方式，也可按事件的发生顺序进行描写。2.看图议论文的写作首先要认真阅读图画，把握图的意义，有时还要注意其隐含 的观点与意图，并联系生活实际进行思考与阐述。3.看图说明文的写作要注意观察图画材料，找出所有内容，然后按一定的顺序有 条理地阐述。说明文的叙述顺序一般有三种：时诃顺序、空 间顺序和逻辑顺序（比如按图画反映的数字大小进行叙述）。注意文章开头与结尾的呼应。四、常用句式 1.用于描述图画或引入话题的句式 As is described in the picture.As is shown in the picture,we can see clearly the relationship between.The sight reminds me of something in my daily life.2.用于记叙事件经过或分析现象的句式 At first.then.five minutes later.finally/in the end/at last.开始时然后五分钟后最后。Some were doing.,some were doing.and/while others were doing.一些人在做，一些人在做，而另一些人在做。(3).was/were doing.when sb./sth.did.当某事正在发生时突然又发生另一件事。More and more people have come to realize the importance 3.用于发表议论或总结的句式 If such measures were not taken,the problem of.would be more serious.如果不采取这样的措施的话，的问题会更加严重。We can conclude from this picture that.从这幅图画我们可以推断。(3)As has been stated above,we must.如上所述，我们必须。【典例】假设你刚刚参加了一次”伦敦游学”活动，请根 据以下五幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文汇报，在班内介绍你 们游学的过程。注意：L汇报的开头和结尾已经为你写好（不计入总词数）；2.词数不少于120。参考词汇：大本钟-Big Ben 伦敦眼-London Eye 住宿家 庭一home-stay family Good morning,everyone.It was a great honor to have been selected to go on a study tour in Britain.Thats all.Thank you.解析：从这五幅图看，应该这样来组织文章：L我们到达英 国Heathrow Airport,受到热情的欢迎；2,我们到了各自的 home-stay family,写他彳门一起吃饭、聊天；3.我们到 Westminster College听报告，了解大学的情况(图中给出了大 学的名称和教授做报告的内容)；4.我们参观了很多风景名胜，比如Big Ben和London Eye；5.在最后一天,我们参加了告别 会(farewell party),大家在一起唱歌、跳舞；6.表达感想和意 义，总结全文，说明这次活动的收获一提高了英语水平，更 好地了解了英国文化。优美范文 Good morning,everyone.It was a great honor to have been selected to go on a study tour in Britain.On the morning of March 27,the moment we stepped out of Heathrow Airport,we were surprised to find our home-stay families waiting to pick us up.Later we went to different home-stay families as scheduled,where we had typical English food and chatted happily.The next day,as was arranged beforehand,we went to Westminster College to attend a presentation about the school.A professor gave us a vivid and interesting introduction,from which we learned a lot about the college.The following days sped by when we visited so many famous tourist attractions such as Big Ben and London Eye,where we took many photos.On the last day we had a farewell party,at which students from China and Britain gave fantastic performances including singing and dancing.From the study tour,not only have we improved our speaking skills,but weve got a better understanding of British culture.Thats all.Thankyou.点评：结构安排合理，层次分明，衔接自然。如：1 尹头适当发挥，增加到达的时间，这使得叙述更加真切；运用了the moment,later,the next day,the following days,on the last day，保证了文章的连贯性；2 范文用一个段落介绍五幅图的内容，在倒数第二段中讲述 了自己的感受，这样安排使得文章的结构更加紧凑。请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的 短文。内容包括：1.描述画面；2.概述其含义；3.谈谈个人感想。凿壁偷光 注息：1,短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3,短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：凿，钻：bore In the picture,_参考答案:In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy,being poor couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course,things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.解析：本题为看图写作，主要是古时候的一则成语“凿壁偷 光”。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽 量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信 息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于内容的要求是要达到写作目 的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。点评：文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的 非谓语动词做伴随状语和with的复合结构In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中较们可以看见男孩穿 着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿 过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom,这是一个众人周知的中国古 代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The boy,being poor couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his neighbors house to read at night,这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把 墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二 段最后一句用了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且 不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。第三段结束Of course,things are totally different today.当然，现在司完全不同了。第二荀是一个notbut结构以友宾语从 句 It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西 才是重要的。俗语：Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future,我们应该不辞辛苦地通过学习 来改进自己并且为未来做准备。