How-to-write-a-travel-journal(new).ppt

How to write a travel journal?1.The ReaderWarming upWarming up You can either travel or read.Either your body or soul must be on the way.The world is so big that I want to travel and have a look.世界那么大，我想去看看。世界那么大，我想去看看。Why I love travel?Because in our life there is not only compromise at present but also poetry and future.因何因何爱远游？因游？因为生活不生活不仅苟且，苟且，还有有诗和和远方。方。You can either travel or read.Either your body or soul must be on the way.The world is so big that I want to travel and have a look.世界那么大，我想去看看。世界那么大，我想去看看。Why I love travel?Because in our life there is not only compromise at present but also poetry and future.因何因何爱远游？因游？因为生活不生活不仅苟且，苟且，还有有诗和和远方。方。2.Revision3.My cousin Li Daiyu and I _（去旅游）to Canada to visit our cousins in Montreal.The thought that we could cross the whole continent was exciting._（在去.的路上）Montreal,we passed mountains and thousands of lakes and forests,as well as wide rivers and large cities.Vancouver,_（被.包围）mountains,is the warmest part in Canada.Its so wet there that the trees are extremely tall.In Toronto,we were surprised at the beautiful scenery of the red,gold and orange maple trees _（在远方）.Task 1:Fill in the blankswent on a tripOn the way tosurrounded byin the distance4.When we crossed the Rocky Mountains,we _(设法做)_(看见）some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle.During our trip,we did lots of unforgettable things.For example.we _(和.闲聊)Lin Fei,who had moved to Canada many years earlier in Toronto.In addition,we spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visiting artists in their workplaces in Montreal.In short,We_(感到高兴)and the Canada trip _ (留给我们一个深刻的印象).How fascinating a country Canada is！Task 1:Fill in the blanksmanaged tochatted withleaves us a deep impressioncatch sight offelt happy5.This is a travel journalHow to write a travel journal?6.A short introductionSeeDofeelPara.1 We went on a trip to visit.Para.2 On the way to Montreal,.catch sight of mountains,lakes,forests.Vancouver,Toronto,beautiful scenery of maple trees,mountain goats,grizzly bear,eagle.Para.3.chatted with Lin Fei.spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visiting artists in their workplacesPara.4.felt happy.leaves us a deep impression.The main ideas of each part7.Tense:_ Person:_ Structure:1._ 2._ _ 3._ Be sure that your journal:simple past tense;simple present tenseI/weA short introductionSee(scenery/famous places)Do Feel(Conclusion)8.Weekend hiking to Chinese herbal medicine Expo Garden 11.Your foreign teachers Owen and George happened to see your hiking activity on the newspaper in your class and theyre greatly interested in your trip.Theyd like to ask you three questions and please share your answers to them.12.During your trip1.What did you see?(famous places or beautiful/special scenery)2.What did you do?3.How did you feel?Task 2:Teamwork With your group members,discuss and share your answers to G.and O.later.13.14.NO.6 Middle SchoolChinese herbal medicine Expo Garden The routestarting pointWuyue Temple五岳殿五岳殿staging point/stationdestinationXihu Post(驿站站)rest point15.SeeWenfeng TowerThe dam in DaaoGreen wayLiuxi River16.A flight of wild geese17.I posted our trip to Internet that day.Tom,my American friend,saw my circle of friends and wanted to know more details about our trip.Can you write him a travel journal?18.DoMind map chattingsinginglaughingtaking picturesXihu PostWenfeng TowerThe dam in DaaoWuyue TempleChinese herbal medicine Expo Garden tired but happyproud of myselfGreen wayLiuxi RiverA flight of wild geeseTask 3:WritingWeekend Hiking FeelSeeexhaustedA short introduction19.Check List（评价表）价表）1.Accuracy(准确性准确性)30%TensePersonCorrect sentences2.Content(内容内容)40%A short introductionSeeDoFeel3.Cohesion&coherence(衔接与接与连贯)10%4.Good expressions 10%5.Handwriting 10%20.Improve your passage after class by“批改网”and write it again as your homework.21.More than 600 Senior One students in our No.6 Middle School had a 23-mile hiking together from school to Chinese herbal medicine Expo Garden on March 18.This trip left a deep impression on us.Approximately 23 kilometers to southwest of Jiekou,the expo garden is a beautiful place with traditional Chinese culture.On the way to our destination,we went past Wenfeng Tower,the dam in Daao and Wuyue Temple which was the staging point for us to have a rest.Walking on Green Way,we caught sight of beautiful scenery of Liuxi River.Sample:Weekend hiking to Chinese herbal medicine Expo Garden 22.During the trip,we sang,laugh and chatted with each other.What leaves me a deep impression is a flight of wild geese.When I became tired and wanted to give up,the flight of wild geese came into view and it seemed that they were encouraging me to keep going.After walking for more than 4 hours,we reached our destination,feeling tired but happy.We were pound of ourselves for getting such a difficult mission done.Sample:23.