英语专四作文培训(TEM4Writing).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,TEM-4,Writing,命题作文满分,15,分，分五个等级，,14,分、,11,分、,8,分、,5,分和,2,分，可以酌情加一或减一分，但不得加或减半分,专四作文评分标准,14-15,分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,句式用词富有变化,有,闪光点,基本无语言错误,.,11-13,分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,少量语法错误,8-10,分内容基本切题,完整,条理基本清楚,文章结构基本严谨,语法基本正确,语言基本通顺恰当,.,少量严重错误,一些词使用不当,.,5-7,分内容基本切题,完整,条理不够清楚,教明显的母语痕迹,.,较多语言错误,许多词使用不当,.,2-4,分内容偏题,不完整,思路混乱,语句不完整,只有少数句子可以理解,词汇拼写错误严重,.,审题并列出提纲（约,5,分钟）,开始写,:,（,1,）切题（,2,）干净（,3,）少犯错误（,4,）开门见山（,5,）闪光点（约,20,分钟）,交卷前检查（,1,）拼写错误（,2,）语法错误等（约,5,分钟）,审题,December 5th is International Volunteers Day.Since 1985,when the United Nations announced the special day,tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in need.China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work.What can you gain from volunteering?,Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:,The Benefits of Volunteering,You are to write in three parts.,In the first part,state specifically what your opinion is.,In the second part,support your opinion with appropriate details.,In the last part,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.,写作,三段式作文各部分的主题句,在首段能有有气势的开篇句,注意中间拓展段和结论段的段首句和层次感，特别是中间段多用连接词,结论段工整，能恰到好处地变换句子来重复总结观点,书写笔记工整,检查应注意以下几个方面,:,主语是正确的吗,?,（名词，代词，动名词，不定式，,that+,句子,),谓语动词是一个吗,?,（每句话一个）这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗,?,若是在,shall,，,will,，,must,，,may,，,can,等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗,?,除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗,?,（使用动词的非谓语形式）,主语与谓语一致吗,?,及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗,?,定语或状语的位置放的合理吗,?,从句的引导词使用恰当吗,?,单词有没有拼写错误,?,最易错的句子,There are still many people think we should not take it for granted.,As more and more migrants flooding into cities,more and more people begin to question the positive effect.,Make,For mental power is so important to us that our college should take its responsibility to change the situation.,Recently,it has become a hotly discuss issue which is a best choice for us to learn from book.Whether we should buy books or borrow books from others?,Aiming to achieve this goal,more and more extracurricular activities are carried out.,You can be more aware of what a happy life you are living and become more cherish it so as to study and work harder.,可以多用的句型,while,those who,which,Those who are in favor of artistic and cultural projects advocate that cultural environment will attract more tourists,which will bring huge profits to local residents.,The fact that (has been brought into focus.),Despite the fact that/N.,.,We should instead.,it is not always the case.Is it really the case?A case in point is,It is essential/imperative/advisable/desirable that,Proper measures must be taken to limit the and the great efforts should be made to protect from the harmful effects of.,启,A proverb says.At present.As the proverb says.Currently.Generally speaking,.Now.In general,.On the Whole.It is clear that.Recently.It is often said that.Without doubt,.,承,First(of all),.Moreover,.Firstly,.No one can deny that.In the first place,.Obviously.To begin with,.Of course,.Also,.Similarly,.At the same time.Therefore,we should realize that.Certainly.There is no doubt that.In addition,.Whats more,.In fact.It can be easily proved that.Meanwhile.,转,But.Still,.But the problem is not so simple.There is a certain amount of truth in this,but we still have a problem with regard to.However,.To our surprise,.Nevertheless,.Unfortunately.On the other hand,.Yet difference will be found and that is why I feel that.Others may find this to be true,but I do not.I think.,合,Above all,In brief,.Accordingly,.In conclusion,.All in all,.In other words,it is hard to escape the conclusion that.As a consequence,.In short,.As I have shown/said/stated/.In sum,.In summary,.As has been noted,.Obviously,.By so doing,.On the whole,.Consequently,.Presumably,.Eventually,.To conclude,.Finally,.To sum up,.In a word,.To summarize,.,1.,增补,(Addition)in addition,furthermore,again,also,besides,moreover,whats more,similarly,next,finally.,2.,比较,(Comparison)in the same way,likewise,similarly,equally,in comparison,just as,3.,对照,(Contrast)whereas,in contrast,on the other hand,instead,however,nevertheless,unlike,even though,on the contrary,while,4.,因果,(Cause and effect)because,because of,for,since,due to,owing to,thanks to,as a result(of),accordingly,hence,so,thus,5.,强调,(Emphasis)certainly,above all,indeed,of course,surely,actually,as a matter of fact,chiefly,especially,primarily,in particular,undoubtedly,absolutely,most important,6.,让步,(Concession)although,though,after all,in spite of,nevertheless,still,provided,while it is true.,7.,例证,(Exemplification)for example,for instance,that is,namely,such as,in other words,in this case,by way of illustration.,8.,总结,(Conclusion)to sum up,to conclude,in a word,in short,in brief,all in all,in all,to put it in a nutshell,in summary,9.,推断,(Inference)therefore,as a result(of),consequently,accordingly,so,otherwise,10.,时间和空间,(Time and space)afterward,after,first,later,then,soon,outside,near,beyond,above,below,on the right(left),in the middle,opposite,in front of,历年英语专业四级作文,1997 More Pressure from Academic Studies Does(Or Does No)Good to Us,1998 One Way to Solve the Problem,1999 A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television,2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities,2001 Travel Broadens Our Mind,2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthy,2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood,2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?,2005 My Idea of a University Arts Festival,2006 Is Saving Money a Good Habit?,2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?,2008 What Benefits You Gain From Volunteering?,2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?,2010 should College Students Hire Cleaners?,2011 Should Car Owners Be Taxed for Pollution?,开头部分,引出话题,When it comes to,some people think/hold/believe.,while some other people argue/maintain,In recent years,has been brought into focus./has become a hot topic both on and off campus/home and abroad.,Nowadays,it is a heatedly discussed topic/controversial issue that,提出观点,In my opinion,/personally,From my point of view,I think,For my part,I would like to support the former/latter.,As far as I am concerned,I would prefer,My view is that.,I am quite in favor of the latter.,主体部分,理由,First(ly),second(ly),To begin with,On the one hand.On the other hand,For one thing,For another,First of all,.,Last but not least,Above all,Apart from that,In addition,in addition to,Whats more,假象，举例,We can assume,Suppose that,It is not surprising that,For example/instance,A good case in point is,.such as A,Lets take as an example,提出原因,There are many reasons for,The reason involves many factors.,The following factors account for it.,The reasons are as follows.,对比,The advantages of A,outweigh,the disadvantages.,Although,A still enjoys a distinct advantage.,Maybe,but it suffers from the disadvantage that,In contrast,结尾部分,In summary,In short,In brief,To sum up,In conclusion,On the whole,All in all,On account of this,From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that,Taking into account of all these factors,we may reach the conclusion that,Thus,it can be concluded that,sample,Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?,You are to write in three parts.,In the first part,state specifically what your opinion is.,In the second part,support your opinion with appropriate details.,In the last part,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.,开头段,(,提出话题,),In recent years,China has witnessed rapid growth in tourism.,(,提出观点,),It is true that tourism can play an important role in booming the national economy,but I am afraid that too much tourism may cause grave harm or bring about risks and disasters to the environment.,主体段（几个原因，注意层次）,段首句：,There are many ways in which tourism brings about bad effects to the environment.,To begin with,in order to attract tourists,large patches of woods were eliminated to build accommodation facilities as well as artificial scenic spots.This unavoidably destroys the natural beauty of the scenic spots.,Meanwhile,it breaks the ecological balance of these areas,resulting in the shortage of farm land,water and animals.,(,which will result in),Moreover,with large numbers of tourists flooding into the scenic spots every year,they have produced all kinds of garbage everywhere,placing much pressure on environment protection.,总结段,重申观点,All in all,too much tourism brings harm to the environment in many ways.,So it is unwise to sacrifice the environment for the unreasonably rapid growth of tourism,and there should be a balance between tourism development and environment protection.,Benefits of volunteering,Volunteering means being willing to help people in need and make contributions to the society for no financial rewards.Needless to say,volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society.Yet,despite the fact that volunteers are not paid for what they have done,serving as a volunteer,I believe,is also beneficial to the volunteers themselves.,Benefits of volunteering,Volunteering means being willing to help people,in need,and,make contributions to,the society for no financial rewards.,Needless to say,volunteering,is of tremendous benefits,to both those in need and the society.,Yet,despite,the fact that volunteers are not paid for what they have done,serving as a volunteer,I believe,is also beneficial to the volunteers themselves.,First,volunteering helps volunteers improve their interpersonal skills.They can understand people better and have better skills to motivate others and to deal with difficult situation in collaboration with people of different personalities in their volunteering work.,Besides,volunteering serves as a good opportunity for volunteers to apply their knowledge to practical problems.This is especially useful for student volunteers.For instance,students volunteering to assist foreign guests on big occasions like Olympic games can not only practice their oral English,but also have fist-hand experience with different cultures.,Finally,volunteering satisfies ones psychological need for respect and self-fulfillment,and it gives the volunteers a sense of achievement.,In a word,volunteering helps to improve ones interpersonal skills,apply ones knowledge to practice,and give the volunteers a sense of self-fulfillment.It is of great benefits to the society,but it benefits the volunteers even greater.,Topic 1,：,Should private cars be limited?,Topic 2,：,Some parents believe that it is their responsibility to choose careers for their children,while many children think they should be left free to choose their own careers.Whats your opinion on this issue,？,Should private cars be limited?,With the improved social developments,more and more Chinese families are beginning to afford private cars.Yet opinions of whether we should develop private car ownership or not differ from person to person.In some people,s eyes,private cars offered them great convenience and mobility.People no longer have to depend on public transportation and they can go wherever they want to.However,opponents of this idea think that private cars make the situation of city traffic even worse.There are already so many traffic jams.What,s more,so many private cars greatly pollute the air.As far as I,m concerned,the increasing number of private cars is a symbol of modernization of our country,but we should try to carry out some relative policies to put the use of private cars under firm control.,On choosing careers,On choosing a career,parents generally believe that it is their responsibility to choose careers for their children.They claim that they know their children well enough to decide what kind of jobs for them.Holding that their children are too young to understand the society and life,many parents insist that their children should obey them absolutely.,But many children suggest that they should be left free to choose their own careers.For one thing,parents and children may not share the same interest.A job that appeals to parents is likely to be boring for their children.For another,children have grown up in a different social environment where independence and self reliance are highly valued.They should be allowed to cultivate these spirits by making their own decisions.,In this case,I think mutual understanding is important.On the one hand,it is natural for parents to take care of their children.But on the other hand it is the children who will take the job.Therefore,their ideas should be the top concern.It is more advisable that the children take into consideration the suggestion of their parents when they make their own decision.,My View on Keeping Pets,Apart from providing companionship,pets invite us to love and be loved.,Often a cat or dog can comfort us at time when human words dont help.,Animals are naturally playful and their antics(,滑稽的动作,)are fun to watch.,Having a pet that requires daily exercise gets the person out into the fresh air and sunshine,too.,Animals also are great ice-breakers.They encourage conversation and invite other pet owners to share stories.,Learning to care for a pet helps a child to grow up into a loving adult who feels responsible towards those dependent on him.,A pet dog brings its master a sense of confidence for he can see in the dog that faithfulness does exist.,There is no denying that keeping pets will cost you a lot of money and time.,And pets will hinder travel if satisfactory pet-sitting arrangements arent available.,Although few diseases are transmitted by pets to their owners,some people in frail health are more susceptible to such diseases.,Furthermore,the growing number of pets has caused serious hygiene(,卫生,)problem that cannot be solved.,To Ban or Not to Ban?,After the news that a five-star hotel in Shenyang,northeast Chinas Liaoning Province,was destroyed during this Spring Festival was released,Chinese netizens are debating about whether firecrackers should once again be banned.Do you think it necessary to ban firecrackers in China?,Setting off fireworks is a tradition which has been passed down for thousands of years in China.But in recent two decades,many fireworks-related accidents occurred during the Spring Festival,which has aroused wide public concern over whether government should ban fireworks or not.Although many people hold the view that fireworks shouldnt be banned for the sake of traditional culture,from my viewpoint,it is necessary to ban it in big cities on account of safety and environment.,First,it is evident that setting off fireworks has caused a lot of accidents and injuries,which results in enormous loss to peoples life and property.Every year,especially in the Spring Festival,many people are injured by fireworks and sent to the hospital.Its really a tragedy for a family in the holiday which should otherwise be a happy vacation.Meanwhile,with buildings getting taller and denser in big cities,there is less spare space for playing fireworks.Once a building catches fire,the t