高中英语写作之道歉信全省一等奖公开课.ppt

,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,1,3.,提出补救办法,2.,说明具体原因,道歉信写作,4,步走,写信的一般要求,1.,内容要简单,对于题中所给的内容：全面,对于自己发挥的内容：简单,写熟悉的，会写的！,2.,结构要清晰,开头段：,中间段：,结尾段,:,3.,语言要精彩,：,4.,注意内容之间的连接,1.,表示歉意,总结提升,4.,再次致歉望理解,造句能力,+,高分套话,2,Basic structure and expressions,第一段,:,简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。,道歉的表达：,I feel sorry for my failure to,I am awfully sorry that I cannot,I am very sorry for,I am writing to express my sincere apology for my,5.I regret to inform you that I am unable to,6.I feel guilty for what I have done to you.,pick you up at the airport,attend your party.,my rudeness/thoughtlessness/bad manners.,3,第二段：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。,1.Now let me explain what happened to me that day.,2.I had intended to,3.I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.,4.I am to blame for this silly mistake.,5.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.,6.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.,4,第三段：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。,1.In order to remove our misunderstanding,I would like to invite.,2.To make up for my fault,I will,3.To compensate for your loss,I decide to.,4.I wish you could give me a chance to make up for my fault.,5.I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes.,5,第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。,1.Please accept my most cordial apology again.,2.I promise that I will never make such a stupid mistake again.,3.I assure you that it will never happen again.,4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.,5.Once again,Im sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.,6,Dear Anne,Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately,it is much to my regret,that I cannot join you and your family,because,I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together,and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time.,Is it possible,for you and me to,have a private meeting afterward,?If so,please dont hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.I do long for a pleasant chat with you.,Please allow me to,say sorry again,.,yours,Li Hua,1.,表示歉意,2.,说明具体原因,3.,提出补救办法,4.,再次致歉、希望得到理解,8,Dear Paul,Thank you very much for your invitation.,I would love to accept it and,take this opportunity to,introduce traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends,but I am sorry to inform you that I cant.My grandpa is seriously ill in hospital and I have to,attend,him.,As for the introduction speech,I strongly recommend my friend Anna,who is,the most suitable choice to take my place,next Sunday.She began to learn painting at an early age and,has a good knowledge of,traditional Chinese painting,which,combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English,will help make your activity a success.,Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.,Yours,Li Hua,9,Thank you very much for your invitation.,From your letter,I know that you want me to introduce traditional Chinese painting.I really want to accept it,from the bottom of my heart,but I am terribly sorry to tell you that I cant.My grandpa has been ill in hospital these days.,On account of this,I have to go to the hospital to attend to him.,As for the introduction speech,I strongly recommend that my classmate Anna should take the place to make it.,As an excellent student,Anna,has a good knowledge of,traditional Chinese painting.,What is more,she can speak fluent English,which makes it possible,for to receive many prizes in different speech.,Therefore,I believe that she,is equal to,the job and you will,be satisfied with,her.,Sorry again for my absence and I hope you can succeed in holding the activity.,10,I would love to join in the activity to introduce traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends,but I regret to inform you that I cant.,My grandpa is seriously ill and I have to,care for,him.,Considering the fact that you want someone to make the introduction speech,I strongly,recommend,my classmate Anna should give it,instead of,me.,As far as I know,she has,got the hang of,much knowledge about traditional Chinese painting.Besides,she is,so,out-going a girl,that,I am sure she will,leave a deep impression on,you.,Furthermore,what is the most important,is that she,is fluent in,English and good at,communicating with,others.I am sure that she will bring a great surprise to all people,present at the speech,.,I hope you can have a good time during the activity.,