2025年英语中考英语书面表达20附带答案解析.doc

- 英语中考英语书面体现20(附带答案解析)

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班外教David对此很感爱好。请你根据如下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论状况及你自已本人计划及原因。
比例
计划
原因
50%
去国内外旅游
1.放松;2.欣赏美景
30%
多读某些书
1.增长知识；2.培养爱好
20%
参与社会实践
1.锻炼自已;2.认识朋友
你计划
? （至少一种）
？（请你补充）

注意：
（1）邮件应包含所有要点
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
注：社会实践 social practice activities
Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非谓语动词构造The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现
地球是我们家园，我们作为地球主人，就应当好好保护地球。目前正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球环境，不挥霍地球能源，就可以让我们周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应当怎样做呢？谈谈你想法。内容应当包括如下几点：
1. 节省用水、用电；2. 节省纸张，循环使用旧书本，保护森林；3. 节省粮食，在更多土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；
规定：短文中不得出现真实校名和人名；80词左右
提醒词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.
【答案】How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?
I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定构造But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．你有无由于没能好好管理时间而影响了学习经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你见解。
内容包括：1.你没完毕学习任务经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对怎样管理好时间给出几点提议。
作文规定：1.短文须包括所有提醒内容，可合适发挥。2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.
I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词构造Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．书面体现
假定你是李华，近来你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你英国朋友Peppa向你来信
问询讨论状况。请你用英语写封回信，简单简介如下讨论成果：
1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、
参照词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾
词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向我英国朋友Peppa写信，简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行讨论状况。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头我要简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来简介我们为低碳生活可以做事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

5．（题文） 书面体现
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人新型家用智能机器人，它重要功能有：
1. 定期做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3. 处理紧急状况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人发明者，请你简介这个产品，并谈谈你未来设想。
规定：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右；短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）
3. 参照词汇： at a fixed time 定期
emergency 紧急状况
ccompany sb. 陪伴某人
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.
I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.
【解析】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．共享单车自从在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给二十一世纪英文报写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
随地可见，出行以便
有益健康，减少污染
费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
未及时归还
占道挡路
你观点
我认为------

参照词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，规定给英文报社写一篇投稿，简介对共享单车见解。作文应包括4个重要内容，一种是社会现实状况，第二个长处，第三是存在问题，最终刊登个人观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并合适发挥。要注意上下文连贯，将这些内容有机连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用某些好句型和短语，注意对时态和语态以及谓语动词形式，还需要注意英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，让整篇短文体现流畅。

7．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生到处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信重要性，分享一次使你愈加自信经历，并说说我们怎样愈加自信。
提醒词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提醒问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供所有信息。灵活运用多种句式，采用不一样体现方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力争精确，简洁。最终必须认真查验与否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等运用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同步语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错范文。

8．请根据表格内Zhang Ying某些体现提醒用英语写一篇短文，把她简介给你外国朋友Mary。
Time

Good habits

Bad habits

In the morning

Get up early

Eat junk food for breakfast

In class

Ask some questions

Quarrel（争执） with her
classmates sometimes

After school

Always exercise

Go home late

In the evening

Help her parents with housework

Watch TV or play computer
games for more than an hour

规定：1、语言要通顺，体现要对。
2、文章规定包含表格中所有提醒。
3、词数不少于60个英语单词。
4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。
【答案】One possible version
Dear Mary,
I’m very glad to introduce（简介） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?
Yours
Huang Deshun
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖状况简介清晰。根据材料可知，本文重要用一般目前时态，第三人称进行论述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思愈加连贯可合适使用连接词。
【亮点阐明】本文在写作中使用了诸多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth快乐做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清晰，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记某些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以合适引用,使文章体现更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点：考察提纲类作文

9．中学生在成长过程中常常会碰到某些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提醒，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到烦恼以及你自已做法。
你烦恼

你做法

个头不高，相貌平常

不必在意，相信自已

父母不理解，朋友少

学会沟通，友善待人

学习压力大，课外活动少

……（自主发挥，至少两点）

规定：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有信息，并作合适发挥。
3. 不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等有关信息。
Hello everyone,
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my pr