2025年英语中考英语书面表达技巧很有用及练习题.doc

（英语）中考英语书面体现技巧(很有用)及练习题

一、英语书面体现
1．你有无由于没能好好管理时间而影响了学习经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你见解。
内容包括：1.你没完毕学习任务经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对怎样管理好时间给出几点提议。
作文规定：1.短文须包括所有提醒内容，可合适发挥。2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.
I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词构造Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现
假如你是九年级学生李华，你美国笔友Billy发来邮件问询你平时锻炼状况。请你根据如下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并提议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：
1. 你近来正忙于为即将到来体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2. 简介你平时锻炼状况：
（1）每天锻炼时间：不到一种半小时。
（2）偶尔不锻炼原因：作业多，没时间。
（3）擅长体育运动：球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作规定：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2. 可合适加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，体现精确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. ___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，简介自已平时锻炼状况，并提议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表达很快乐收到Billy来信，接下来简介我平时锻炼状况，最终指出锻炼给我带来好处以及我提议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面体现
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心感动，存在于每个人心中。但诸多人缺乏不是感动，而是一种显示感动勇气。请为你身边人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据如下提醒要点，写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实人名及校名。
Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?

【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我要点赞人，接下来简介他状况，最终指出我从他身上学到东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4．（题文） 书面体现
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人新型家用智能机器人，它重要功能有：
1. 定期做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3. 处理紧急状况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人发明者，请你简介这个产品，并谈谈你未来设想。
规定：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右；短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）
3. 参照词汇： at a fixed time 定期
emergency 紧急状况
ccompany sb. 陪伴某人
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.
I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.
【解析】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

5．书面体现
“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创立文明都市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞行为随地可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自已努力。请根据如下所 给要点,写一篇 100 词左右英语短文。
1.种植花草树木；
2.遵守交通规则；
3.公共场所不大声喧哗；
4.公交车上积极给有需要人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）
参照词汇: civilized 文明 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守

【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.
As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For
example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.
Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（并且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．书面体现
你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校利和弊；读走读学校利和弊；你选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容反复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥。
A hoarding school or a day school
We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________
【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.
If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.
As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。第二段要写详细论述读寄宿学校利弊；读走读学校利弊。第三段要表述作者自已选择和理由。
【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些规定？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？阐明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定期态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用合适句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落构造句型及关键词句完毕文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增长了文章亮点。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

7．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生到处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信重要性，分享一次使你愈加自信经历，并说说我们怎样愈加自信。
提醒词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提醒问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供所有信息。灵活运用多种句式，采用不一样体现方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力争精确，简洁。最终必须认真查验与否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等运用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同步语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错范文。

8． 假如你是李华，你英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件体现了想参与你校暑期为外国学生举行汉语夏令营愿望，但愿你告知活动举行详细时间地点，活动安排以及你提议。
提醒词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提醒问题： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our
school this summer holiday .
.
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.
What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.
If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面体现，只给了某些要点提醒，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提醒都体现出来外，还要进行合适拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：该题规定写作体裁为书信格式，因此例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照原则书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般目前时和一般未来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提醒都已体现清晰，并进行了合适拓展，所给单词也都所有用上。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。
句型：被动句型，目前分词作状语，主语从句。

9．书面体现
我校决定让学生轮番打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强烈反响，请你把下列不一样意见整理成一篇书面材料，汇报给学校。
同意 ：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。
2．学生应当学会做艰苦工作。
3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人劳动。
不一样意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应当做事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。
注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。 生词提醒：respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干规定，这是一篇见解类作文，那么首先得点明讨论话题，然后分别写出不一样人群对此事见解，时态以一般目前时为主。
重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth协助某人做某事；get sick生病。
亮点句型：
（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场剧烈争论。目前完毕时（have/has+done）。
（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习怎样做困难工作好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。

10．近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。“扫雪机式父母”特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到一切障碍，处理一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功人生。
请从下表两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点论述自已见解，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
观点
理解
不理解
父母出于对孩子爱才这样做。
父母控制一切，孩子没有自由。
自已见解
自已见解

规定：
1、词数：60-80词。
2、短文应包括所选观点中要点，可合适发挥。
3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
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【答案】例文
I really can't understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in children's lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.
In my opinion,parents shouldn't do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experi