英语中考英语书面表达综合测试卷12.doc

【英语】 中考英语书面体现综合测试卷经典1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．亲爱同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有诸多感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右短文。
提醒：
1.个人基本状况简介
2.校园（校园洁净而漂亮，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,常常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。
规定：
1. 文章包含以上提醒内容，合适发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我个人状况，接下来简介我们校园，老师和同学，最终对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
地球是我们家园，我们作为地球主人，就应当好好保护地球。目前正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球环境，不挥霍地球能源，就可以让我们周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应当怎样做呢？谈谈你想法。内容应当包括如下几点：
1. 节省用水、用电；2. 节省纸张，循环使用旧书本，保护森林；3. 节省粮食，在更多土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；
规定：短文中不得出现真实校名和人名；80词左右
提醒词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.
【答案】How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?
I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定构造But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3． 假如你是李华, 你美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想理解你梦想职业。请认真阅读下面邮件, 根据信中内容和你实际状况给他写封回信。
To: lihua@ china. com
From: bill006@ america. com
Subject: Your dream job
Dear Li Hua,
Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.
Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?
◆What is your dream job?
◆ Why do you like the job?
◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?
◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?
Drop a few lines if you have time.
Best wishes,
Bill

规定:1. 参照提醒语, 可合适发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。
Dear Bill,
Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?
Tell me about your ideal job!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本题通过描写梦想中职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提醒词，让学生有话可说。
【详解】
首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为何喜欢该工作，由于可以把自已知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校环境。为了实现自已梦想，正在为此作出努力。最终向Bill提出问题，结束全文。
【点睛】
本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始重要内容，运用多种连接词，例如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

4．（B）根据规定完毕大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生共同爱好.请根据下面提醒写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 短文,应当包含如下要点:
1,学生参与体育运动爱好不一样,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自已.
3.男孩参与各项体育运动,但愿运动能使自已更强健.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，但愿运动使自已减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自已名字和学校名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参照词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作重要是谈论自已对运动观点和见解，应当用一般目前时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动不一样见解及原因。2.详细分析（多数学生观点、男生观点、女生观点）。3.提出自已对运动观点。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

5．　　近年来雾霾天气在中国许多都市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾危害 2. 雾霾产生原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾措施（3个）
提醒：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以合适增长细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
　　How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们根据提醒来简介有关雾霾状况，题目中给出了写作内容，我们应将这些内容用对英语体现出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意体现层次和条理。另一方面要注意使用对时态和人称，通过度析可知，这篇短文应使用一般目前时态，谓语动词用原形，尤其要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一种写作难点。最终要注意英语体现习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上使用是不一样，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇和句型来体现，语法规范。还应使用某些很好句型或者短语，增强文章体现力。

6． 书面体现
共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给《二十一世纪英文报》写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
1.随地可见，出行以便
2.有益健康，减少污染
3.费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
1.未及时归还
2.占道挡路
你观点
我认为……（考生自拟，至少2点）

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.
But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.
【解析】这篇作文规定我们给《二十一世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自已对共享单车见解。题目中运用表格形式给我们列举了短文重要内容，包括：共享单车优势；存在问题以及你自已对这件事情见解。前两个内容我们需要根据表格提醒用对英语体现，而自已观点则需要学生们自已发挥想象力，组织语言，并体现出来，规定至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应重要使用一般目前时态，第三人称来论述，短文可以提成两段或者三段，一种内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，变化文章句式节奏，使用不一样句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、体现流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目规定所有信息。短文提成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车某些长处；第三段简介了某些问题；最终一段作者提出了自已见解。分段论述使文章构造清晰，主题明确，有层次性。另一方面短文中使用了恰当时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般目前时态为主，语法规范，用词精确，句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几种长句；此外文章中还使用了恰当连接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。对文章行文连贯、语句通顺、体现流畅。

7．假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参与。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。
提醒词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提醒问题： ●When and where are you going to meet?
●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in Yanqing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】
Dear Peter，
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了重要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述全面性，尽量将提醒内容运用上；提醒问题就是写作基本方向，然后围绕要点合适发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采用邮件格式，时态以一般未来时态为主。语言表述应当符合语法构造，语言精确，语意连贯，体现清晰，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。
句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

8．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现实状况进行分析并提出提议。
要点：

不重视课外阅读原因

1. 作业太多
2. 没有读书习惯
3. 时间花在电脑或网络上

课外阅读好处

1. 更多地理解世界
2. 学会怎样思考
3. 生活愈加丰富多彩

对学校或同学提议

……（至少一点）

注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中要点，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清晰、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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