2025年英语初中英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题含解析.doc

【英语】初中英语书面体现技巧小结及练习题含解析

一、英语书面体现
1．假定你是David，来自美国，你QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你理解有关这方面状况。请认真阅读下面邮件，并根据信中内容和实际用英语答复，可以有合适发挥。
To: davidwoodlandschool@
From: limingsunshineschool@
Subject: Volunteering
Dear David，
I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions?
●Why do you want to be a volunteer?
●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?
●Do you have any problems with volunteering?
●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes，
Li Ming

注意：1.词数90左右。答复信开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;
2.答复中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your
questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.
It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，简介暑假做志愿者状况。。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I'm glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到快乐，接下来简介我们可以从事志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来某些问题，最终我但愿你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
假如你是Amy，德国互换生Sara下周即未来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她来信，在信中，她问询如下信息：1．你家状况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担家务劳动；4. …目前，你就她提出问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！
规定：1. 文章必须包括图片中重要内容，可合适发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息；
3. 字数约110词。
Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________
Love，
Amy
【答案】Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.
I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.
As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.
Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.
Love,
Amy
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而复杂并列构造In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3． 世界卫生组织一项研究汇报显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关重视点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。如下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供信息，用英语写一篇调查汇报，陈说学校调查成果，并表明你自已观点和理由。
我校学生近视问题调查
状况
60%本校学生戴眼镜。
原因
1. 不良看书习惯，如在床上或阳光下看书……
2. 长时间玩手机、看电视、玩电脑……
3. 学习时间长，作业多……
提议
1. 认真做眼保健操
2. 多吃胡萝卜等对眼睛有益食物
3. ……

参照词汇： 近视 nearsighted
注意： 1. 内容须包括所提醒信息，可合适发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自已真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中有关信息简介一下怎样保护视力。所提供表格中列举了近视原因和提议。重要从原因和提议两个方面去简介。时态为一般目前时。注意作文中必须包含表格上所有信息，并合适发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们熟悉句子或短语。语法要对，体现要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，体现具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 因此保持良好视力对每个人都很重要。
本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.
【高分句型二】
And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书时候，你应当把它从你眼睛里移开一英尺。
when you read是由when引导时间状语从句。

4．书面体现
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心感动，存在于每个人心中。但诸多人缺乏不是感动，而是一种显示感动勇气。请为你身边人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据如下提醒要点，写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实人名及校名。
Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?

【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我要点赞人，接下来简介他状况，最终指出我从他身上学到东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

5．书面体现
初三学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提醒，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”短文，简介九年级学校生活，并提出但愿和提议。
在校
老师
工作认真负责，充斥爱心
学生
…… （至少发挥两点）
周末
作业
作业多．舍弃爱好
其他活动
锻炼，电视
愿望
…… （发挥一到两点）

规定：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供所有信息，并合适发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.
As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6． 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你印度朋友Danny收看了大会有关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚爱好，来信向你理解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据如下内容提醒用英语写一封回信给Danny。
要点
内容
历史文化
历史悠久，文化各异；老式节日，多彩习俗（举一例）
文明行为
互相尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟）
身边文明
校园文明（自拟一点）

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 答复必须包括因此要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。
3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
参照词汇: civilized 文明
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文规定给你印度朋友Danny写一篇有关华夏文明回信。
【详解】
文章需要简介下中国文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中规定，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目要明确，要注意内容精确性和严厉性。
【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以合适使用高分句子。本篇文章写好句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一种礼仪之邦。

7．环境保护人人有责， 假如我们每一种人都能珍爱漂亮地球 保护自然资源，相信我们家园会越来越美好。
某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临重要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你期望。
提醒词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action
提醒问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?
Now there are many environmental problems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.
I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.
I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于阐明文写作，写作时要把我们面临重要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你期望所有包括。
例文点评：例文采用是三段式；用第一人称来论述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用是一般目前时，描述提议时，描写详细，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。
句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现，例如save energy；brus