2025年中考英语书面表达技巧全解及练习题含答案.doc

中考必备英语书面体现技巧全解及练习题(含答案)

一、英语书面体现
1．伴随社会发展，通讯方式从远古时代书信到当今互联网，经历着巨大变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具使用及见解。内容包括：
1. 你喜欢使用通讯方式有哪些？
2. 它们长处和缺陷是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
规定：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,
【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具使用及见解。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我喜欢使用通讯方式有哪些；接下来简介它们长处和缺陷是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最终呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2． 近来一份学生体质健康调查成果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提醒内容，用英语写一篇短文，并刊登自已观点。
现 状
大概70%学生眼睛近视
重要原因
1. 睡眠局限性
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
防止措施
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成对用眼习惯
你观点
… ….（至少一条）

参照词汇：近视 shortsighted
规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干规定可知，本篇文章重要使用一般目前时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠局限性（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视措施：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成对用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应当理解保护眼睛重要性，尽最大努力保护我们眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

3．立即要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍。班主任决定在下周举行一场“My Life At School” 主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参与。请你根据如下提醒，写一篇发言稿。
美好回忆
1.与同学融洽相处； 2.得到老师协助；
3.获得互换生机会； 4.参与志愿者活动。
不开心事情
1.好朋友李华转学； 2.不擅长语文写作。
未来展望
1. 升上理想学校；
2. 能认识更多朋友；
3. 请你补充（至少两点）

My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中运用表格形式，展示了文章详细内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应重要使用一般目前时和一般过去时，注意根据体现需要使用对时态，并注意谓语动词对形式。内容应重要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里美好回忆；然后是不开心事情；最终展望自已未来高中生活。表格中有非常详细提醒，但不能逐词翻译表格中短语，应把他们变成自已话，并用英语体现出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分内容中还需要自已发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。此外注意句式构造要符合英语体现习惯，用完整句子体现。句式构造可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式使用，提高作文档次。同步语句之间使用合适连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，回忆了自已初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有如下几种特点：首先文章内容完整，构造清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，简介了过去美好回忆以及不开心事情；最终一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，用词精确，注意了动词对形式变化。句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。语言精确、得体，体现自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

4．书面体现
根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（lucky money）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？请结合自已实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：
1. 你压岁钱来源和用途；
2. 对合理使用压岁钱提议（至少 3 点）；
3. 呼吁大家节省用钱，把自已压岁钱用在最需要、最故意义地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.
【解析】
【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（luckymoney）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容体现出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文重要使用人称就是第一人称，时态为一般目前时态，注意谓语动词变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。
【点睛】
文章使用了很好短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

5．李华英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想理解中国老式节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 简介该节日。内容须包含如下所有要点：
1. 中秋节时间；
2. 中秋节老式习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；
3, 我最期待活动。
规定：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。
Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.
For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.

Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作是以书信方式向笔友简介中国老式节日中秋节，要用一般目前时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节时间、老式习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待活动。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

6．你是一位九年级学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你笔友Amy，感谢她对你关怀，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前学习和生活状况。要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比很好，不过你对自已不满意。你认为自已学习上还要多花工夫。
（2）. 你父母对你严格规定，不过也很关怀你。（举例阐明，合适发挥2—3句）……
（3）. 老师很乐意协助你们。他们但愿你们实现自已理想。他们说（合适发挥2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作合适发挥。
（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前学习和生活状况。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

7．书面体现（本题15分）根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人协助，也要学会协助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：
1. 你对节目中挺身而出顾客见解；
2. 说说你协助他人或他人协助你一件事例；
3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充斥正能量。
作文规定：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实名称和学生真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。
In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______
【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.
In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出顾客见解、发生在你身上正能量事件以及鼓励大家互相协助，并让世界充斥正能量。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其合用某些亮点词句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

8．请根据表格内Zhang Ying某些体现提醒用英语写一篇短文，把她简介给你外国朋友Mary。
Time

Good habits

Bad habits

In the morning

Get up early

Eat junk food for breakfast

In class

Ask some questions

Quarrel（争执） with her
classmates sometimes

After school

Always exercise

Go home late

In the evening

Help her parents with housework

Watch TV or play computer
games for more than an hour

规定：1、语言要通顺，体现要对。
2、文章规定包含表格中所有提醒。
3、词数不少于60个英语单词。
4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。
【答案】One possible version
Dear Mary,
I’m very glad to introduce（简介） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?
Yours
Huang Deshun
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖状况简介清晰。根据材料可知，本文重要用一般目前时态，第三人称进行论述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思愈加连贯可合适使用连接词。
【亮点阐明】本文在写作中使用了诸多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth快乐做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清晰，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记某些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以合适引用,使文章体现更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点：考察提纲类作文

9．中学生在成长过程中常常会碰到某些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提醒，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到烦恼以及你自已做法。
你烦恼

你做法

个头不高，相貌平常

不必在意，相信自已

父母不理解，朋友少

学会沟通，友善待人

学习压力大，课外活动少

……（自主发挥，至少两点）

规定：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有信息，并作合适发挥。
3. 不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等有关信息。
Hello everyone,
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.