2025年英语中考英语书面表达选择题练习12.doc

【英语】 中考英语书面体现选择题练习经典1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
假定你是李华，近来你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你英国朋友Peppa向你来信
问询讨论状况。请你用英语写封回信，简单简介如下讨论成果：
1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、
参照词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾
词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向我英国朋友Peppa写信，简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行讨论状况。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头我要简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来简介我们为低碳生活可以做事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．　　近年来雾霾天气在中国许多都市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾危害 2. 雾霾产生原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾措施（3个）
提醒：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以合适增长细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
　　How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们根据提醒来简介有关雾霾状况，题目中给出了写作内容，我们应将这些内容用对英语体现出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意体现层次和条理。另一方面要注意使用对时态和人称，通过度析可知，这篇短文应使用一般目前时态，谓语动词用原形，尤其要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一种写作难点。最终要注意英语体现习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上使用是不一样，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇和句型来体现，语法规范。还应使用某些很好句型或者短语，增强文章体现力。

3． “漂亮琼海我家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们生活环境得到了很大改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞文明行为随地可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

规定：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提醒，并做合适拓展；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
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Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创立文明都市、创立健康都市，都市生活环境有了很大变化。这篇作文规定我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参与到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定详细写作内容，而是用图表形式，列出了写作提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来论述：即应当做什么；不应当做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文提成两个层次，这样可以使文章构造清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般目前时态，第一人称we来论述。写作时应注意：首先英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语，而应从句子整体构造考虑，使用恰当词汇、短语和句型，以常见主谓宾或者主系表构成简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，变化文章节奏，提高文章档次。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到都市“双创”活动中来。首先短文内容完整，文章根据题目中列出图表，补充了详细写作内容，从应当做和不应当做两个方面，对中学生平常行为提出了规定。文章条理清晰，有层次。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，语言精确，语句通顺，符合英语体现习惯。短文中句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及某些较复杂高级句式，语句之间也使用了很好连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

4．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应当读什么样书，以及读书意义。
提醒词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提醒问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua

【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生倡议。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，写是阅读好处，时态采用是一般目前时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

5．书面体现
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右短文，内容须包括：对下表中有关（City A和City B）所有信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一种都市作为你暑假旅游目地。

City A

City B

Flying

2 hours

4 hours

Temperature

30℃

18℃

Hotel

★★

★★★★

Things to do

★★★★

★★

Food

★★

★★★★

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
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【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题给出了两个都市飞行时常、气温、旅馆状况。食物等有关信息，规定考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自已要去暑假旅游目地。虽然字数规定不多，但可以很好地考察考生英语写作基本功，需要考生对常用英语句型纯熟掌握。熟悉英语体现方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。此外，一定要注意题目规定，把每一种信息都进行比较，不要有遗漏。
写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目规定选择了都市A作为自已暑假旅游目地。对于都市A缺陷，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于长处则重点突出，由于在都市A可以做诸多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，例如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。在说选择都市A原因时，用了that引导宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较纯熟英语写作水平。

6．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现实状况进行分析并提出提议。
要点：

不重视课外阅读原因

1. 作业太多
2. 没有读书习惯
3. 时间花在电脑或网络上

课外阅读好处

1. 更多地理解世界
2. 学会怎样思考
3. 生活愈加丰富多彩

对学校或同学提议

……（至少一点）

注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中要点，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清晰、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【解析】
略

7．你是一位九年级学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你笔友Amy，感谢她对你关怀，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前学习和生活状况。要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比很好，不过你对自已不满意。你认为自已学习上还要多花工夫。
（2）. 你父母对你严格规定，不过也很关怀你。（举例阐明，合适发挥2—3句）……
（3）. 老师很乐意协助你们。他们但愿你们实现自已理想。他们说（合适发挥2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作合适发挥。
（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
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How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前学习和生活状况。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

8． 朋友是我们生活构成部分，他们总是在我们最需要协助时候陪伴我们。你最佳朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们友谊？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据如下提醒写一篇英语短文。
1. 简要简介你最佳朋友外貌和性格;
2. 简介和你朋友之间发生一件令人难忘事；
3. 你是怎样看待你们之间友谊
规定：
1. 语句连贯穿顺，文章衔接紧密
2. 词数80-100
3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.
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【答案】My best friend
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.
My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.
I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me