天津中考英语作文写作-(公开课)------------------(共26张PPT).ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,to my class,have a class,yesterday afternoon,They were having a class yesterday afternoon.,run,at 5 oclock,last Monday,They were running at 5 oclock last Monday.,play,often,use for,Football is,often,played,all over the world.,A camera is used for taking photos.,computer games,basketball,guitar,ride,A game:make sentences,English Day!,Lets practice speaking and writing English!,Writing is as important as speaking!,Guided composition,体裁：,1.,应用文（书信、通知、便条等）,2.,记叙文（看图作文、日记等）,3.,说明文（人物介绍、活动介绍等）,考生根据所给的情景材料和信息在限定的时间内完成限定 词数的书面材料。,书面表达一般为学生所熟悉的校园生活和家庭生活，,以日常生活为基础，以身边事情为话题。,基础知识：,1.,足够的词汇量,2.,掌握英语的,6,种基本句型,3.,基本的语法知识（时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词,.),4,熟悉习惯用语和习语搭配，注意相似词、易混词的辨析,.,5.,注意应用文的书写格式、模仿范文。,6.,写作时经常用到的连接词,4.,议论文,写作步骤：,1.,审题,：,a.,审文体：写人、写事、议论,b.,审要求,c.,审要点、人称、时态,2.,列词,：,列出关键词和短语。用规范词、句型。避开生僻词，,用熟词、熟句代替。提倡短句、简单句，少用长句复合句；按英语的句式,和表达习惯，准确又灵活的组织句子,4.,谋篇,：,将句子表达成文。（确定时态主线、注意过渡词）注意行文连贯,衔接自然紧凑，层次清楚。注意开头点题句和结尾的升华句的使用。,3.,造句,：,所列的要点句型化。注意英语的表达习惯和六种简单句的基本句型，,避免中式英语。,5.,检查,：,通读文章几遍，看行文是否一致，要点是否齐全，有无语法、拼写、,标点的错误。,6.,抄写：,书写规范，工整。,句子的基本结构,1.S,Vi,（主,+,谓）,eg,.He is laughing.,He is crying.,2.S,V,O,（主,+,谓,+,宾）,eg,.The students are cleaning their classroom.,They speak English.,3.S,V,O,O,（主,+,谓,+,间宾,+,直宾）,eg,.I gave her my little toy dog.,Can you show me your photos?,后接双宾语的动词：,give,show,lend,teach.,4.S,V,P,（主,+,系,+,表,),James is a famous actor.,5.S,V,O,C,（主,+,谓,+,宾,+,补）,eg,.The expert finds the girl very smart.,We saw him cross the road.,写作时经常用到的连接词：,时间顺序：,空间顺序：,对称顺序：,转折顺序：,因果顺序：,条件顺序：,让步顺序：,并列或递进顺序：,过渡性插入语：,总结性用语：,at first,then,next,at last,finally,in the end,later,here,there,on the other side,on the left right,on the other hand,but,however,while,though,even,as a result(of),thanks to,because of,so,because,as long as,if,unless,though,although,even though,even if,whats more,besides,whats worse,as well as,bothand,，,not only but also,either or.,neithernor,notbut,I think,in my opinion,in a word,in short,all in all,Peter,出生于英国，,去年来到中国的一所中学教英语。有一天，在他回家的路上,遇见他的中国朋友李雷，李雷告诉,Peter,他住在哪儿，,并,邀请他去家里吃晚饭。,Peter,很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜,。,Peter,出生于英国。,2.,去年他来到中国，并在一所中学教英语。,3.,有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter,正好遇见他的,中国朋友李雷。,4.,李雷告诉,Peter,他住在哪儿。,5.,然后他邀请他去家里吃晚饭。,6.Peter,很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜,。,A,：Peter,出生于英国，去年来到中,国的一所中学教英语。,Peter was born,Britain,.,Last year,he came to China,.,He taught English in a Middle school.,A,.,有一天，在他回家的路上,遇见他的中国朋友李雷，李雷告诉他住在哪儿，,并,邀请他去家里吃晚饭。,One day,on his way home,he met his Chinese friend,Li Lei,.,Li Lei told him where he lived,.,Then Li Lei invited him to his home for supper.,1,）有一天，,在他回家的路上,他遇见他的,中国朋友李雷。,2,）李雷告诉他住在哪里。,3,）然后李雷,邀请他去家里吃晚饭,。,A,：他很喜欢中国菜。,He liked Chinese food very much.,Please dont write:,He,was,very like Chinese food.,A,:Peter,很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜,。,Peter was very happy because he liked Chinese food very much,.,Please dont say:,Because,Peter liked Chinese food,so,he was very happy.,One possible version:,Peter,was born,in England.Last year,he,came,to,China and,taught,English in a middle school.One day,on his way home,Peter,met,his Chinese friend,Li Lei.,Li Lei,told,him where he,lived,.,Then,he,invited,Peter,to his home,for supper,.Peter,was,very happy because he,liked,Chinese food very much.,A,:,我校建于,2001,年。,B,：佛山建起了很多高楼。,My school was built in 2001.,Please dont write:,My school built in 2001.,Many tall buildings were built in,Foshan,.,A,.,一次交通事故使他不能像平常那样走路了。,He cant walk as usual,because of,a traffic accident.,He cant walk as usual after a traffic accident.,有时候太多功课而没时间跟小宠物玩。,Sometimes there is too much homework.,I dont have free time to play with my pet.,许多老师给学生留过多的课外作业，使学生大伤脑筋。,Many teachers leave too much homework after class.,It troubles the students a lot.,学习时间过长，学生感到疲乏。,After a days hard work,the students usually feel tired.,中考真题再现（,2010,年天津）,与人交流,课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法，课间和同学交谈。,表达善意,主动问候同学，对同学友好，帮助同学,参加活动,积极参加班级活动（如运动会，歌咏比赛）,假如你是某学生杂志社的编辑,Diana,，收到了读者,Steve,的一封来信，信中倾诉了他目前的烦恼。请根据提示内容，给,Steve,写一封回信。提示：,参考词汇：小组讨论,group work,表达,express,要求：,1.,词数：,80-100,个,2.,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,3.,要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。,Dear Diana,I just came to a new school.And I cant get on,well with my classmates.What should I do?,Dear Steve,Ive learned about your problems.I think_,解析,1,.,体裁：,2.,人称：,3.,时态：,4.,要点,：,与人交流,:,课上参与小组讨论,表达自己的想法,课间和同学交谈。,表达善意,:,主动问候同学,对同学友好,帮助同学,参加活动,积极参加班级活动（如运动会，歌咏比赛）,劝慰信,/,帮助信,第二人称,一般现在时,be active in group work in class,express ones ideas,talk with your classmates at break,say hello,be friendly,be helpful,take part in all kinds of class activities,such as sports meetings,football games and singing competitions,中考真题再现（,2010,年天津）,与人交流,课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法，课间和同学交谈。,表达善意,主动问候同学，对同学友好，帮助同学,参加活动,积极参加班级活动（如运动会，歌咏比赛）,假如你是某学生杂志社的编辑,Diana,，收到了读者,Steve,的一封来信，信中倾诉了他目前的烦恼。请根据提示内容，给,Steve,写一封回信。提示：,参考词汇：小组讨论,group work,表达,express,要求：,1.,词数：,80-100,个,2.,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,3.,要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。,Dear Diana,I just came to a new school.And I cant get on,well with my classmates.What should I do?,Dear Steve,Ive learned about your problems.,I think_,You should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas.Try to talk with your classmates at break.If you want to get on well with your classmates,dont forget,to say hello when you meet them.Being friendly and helpful is also very important.You need to take part in all kinds of class activities,such as sports meetings,football games and singing competitions.Im sure you will soon be among friends.,Best wishes,Diana,书面表达,节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。李明是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他，请以“,My Low-carbon Life”,为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。,要点：,（,1,）,每天步行上学；,（,2,）,离开房间时，关灯、电扇、电视等；,（,3,）,不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；,（,4,）,充分使用纸张；（,5,）不使用塑料袋；,参考词汇：,on foot,turn off,tap,electric fan,reuse,make full use of,plastic bag,要求：,1.,词数：,80-100,个。,2,.,要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。,3.,开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,My Low-carbon Life,My name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I go to school on foot every day.I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the electric fans when I leave the room.When I am not using the water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water.For example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor.I never use plastic bags.I think saving paper is necessary,so I often make full use of paper.Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.,Thank you!,