如何提高我们的基础写作市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,怎样提升我们基础写作,How to improve,the basic writing,湛师附中 林晓韵,1/15,Learning objectives(学习目标),Make a discussion to correct the basic writing in a group,（互改作文提升句子写作能力）,2/15,基础写作考查方向：,(明确目标),基础写作主要考查同学们,对英语基本句型,利用，,整合知识能力,和,语言结构安排及基本表述能,力,此题基本不要求考生对写作内容进行发挥，,只需将所给信息,完整准确连贯,地写出就能够了,其实际上就是,翻译和连词成句，扩句成文,形式,3/15,基础写作（来自单元测验卷）,请依据以下情景说明,使用5个规范英语句子描述全部所给信息内容.,写作内容,写一篇记叙你英语老师Miss Michelle,1.Miss Michelle 来自加拿大,教我们英文.,2.Miss Michelle 今年28岁,身材修长,金发碧眼,参加过中国许多名胜古迹.,3.Miss Michelle教学有方,课堂生动有趣,严格要求学生，耐心回答学生问题.,4.下月Miss Michelle 将要离开中国回加拿大.,写作要求,只能用5个句子表示全部内容,评分标准,句子结构准确，信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯,4/15,试卷作文情况分析,本作文贴近生活，能考查学生基本语言表示能力！,学生答卷分析,学生基本能按照写作要求完成写作任务，不过存在着严重汉字思维和中国英语情况，最微弱步骤是基础词汇拼写错误。,5/15,改错独立完成,S1:Miss Michelle is come from Canadian,she teach our English.,S2:Miss Michelle is 28 year old,she has a long body,gold hair and green eyes.,S3:She joined in many China interest of place.,S4:She teach is good,it is interesting,and she happy to answer our questions.,S5:Next mouth,she leave China to Canada.,6/15,经典错误代表作归纳错误类型（小组活动）,S1:,Miss Michelle cames from and she teached our English.,S2:,She is 28-years old,tall,she have yellow hair and green eyes,and she visited many Chinese interesting place.,S3:,Miss Michael is good at teaching,the classes of her are very interesting.,S4:,she is patient answering classmates questions.Sadly,S5:,Miss Michael will leave China to come back to Candana in next mouth.,S6:,We will miss her in the future.,7/15,存在问题总结：,方法点拨,1.单词拼写错误，动词过去式过去分词拼写有误。,2.时态利用不妥。,3.人称尤其是主谓不一致。,4.信息不完整或多出。,5.句子结构错误。,6.缺乏一些好句型。,防止汉字式英语最正确路径：加强朗诵，背诵！,8/15,优异代表作（找出好地方）,Miss Michael,who is a girl of 28 years old,is very tall and has golden hair and blue eyes.She comes from Canada and teaches us English.Interested in China,she has visited many places of interest in China.Miss Michael is good at teaching so that we all feel happy and funny in her class.Though she is very strict with us,she answers our questions in patience.It upset us that Miss Michael is leaving for Canada next month.,9/15,范文 青出于蓝（分析亮点）,Miss Michael,aged 28,is a fairly tall Canadian girl teacher with fair hair and blue eyes,who has been to many places of interest since she came to China.She is a good teacher,who always makes her classes lively and interesting by her curious way of teaching.She is strict with us but is always warm-hearted and ready to help us with our questions.However,she will return to Canada.We like her and will miss her a lot.,10/15,基础写作:写作步骤,）确定标题（假如题中要求写标题就确定标题，若题中没做要求则能够不写）,）写出关键点（如：文中包括到重点词汇，短语及句型）,）仔细审读写作要求和写作内容,）列提要（列提要过程实际上是一个谋篇布局，把内容关键点按恰当合理次序排列，使文章条理，通顺过程,）认真书写,6）复查（复查项目包含：,格式,是否,正确,，,内容,是否,完整,，,表示,是否,准确,，,行文,是否,连贯,等）,11/15,评分标准,1.句子结构准确,2.信息内容完整,3.篇章结构连贯,4C 标准,准确性,完整性,复杂性,连贯性,12/15,再次实践限时作文,在日常生活中，因特网起着越来越主要作用。请依据以下提醒，为某英文报纸写一篇题为 About the Internet 征文稿。,因特网主要用途：,资讯：看国内外新闻，获取其它信息,通讯：发e-mail,打电话,学习：上网校学习，阅读各种书籍，自学外语,娱乐：观赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌游戏,生活：购物、聊天、交友等；,13/15,homework 作业,6,.读熟甚至背诵范文,.以小组为单位，,每小组抽出2个人,作文一起更改。,14/15,Thanks for,your attention!,15/15,