高中英语作文：用好非谓语动词-提升写作档次.doc

高中英语作文：用好非谓语动词，提升写作档次众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。1我为那事感到非常遗憾，开始考虑做些什么来帮一下。I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help.Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.(现在分词作状语)2另一方面，我将帮着建立英语角，给我们学生提供一个练习英语口语的平台。On the other hand, I will help set up the English corner. It will provide us students a platform to practice our oral English.On the other hand, I will help set up the English corner, providing us students a platform to practice our oral English.(现在分词作状语)3这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。All the people here like the novel.It is written by Tom.All the people here like the novel written by Tom.(过去分词作定语)4我们应该多讲英语。我们认为这是很重要的。We should speak more English. We think it is very important.We think it very important to speak more English.(it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语)5我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平？这是个问题。How should we improve our spoken English? It is a question.How to improve our spoken English is a question.(不定式短语作主语)The question is how to improve our spoken English.(不定式短语作表语)用非谓语动词进行句型转换1(2015全国卷书面表达)It carries articles about the cultures of their home countries.They are written by foreign friends.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.(过去分词作定语)2(2015湖南高考书面表达)I went back home proudly that afternoon. I jumped with joy.I went back home proudly that afternoon, jumping with joy.(现在分词作状语)3As he is encouraged by the progress he has made, he works harder.Encouraged by the progress he has made, he works harder.(过去分词作状语)4The boys were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier.The boys were making the most of time to finish the work earlier.(不定式作状语)5The boy came to school late again.This made the teacher very angry.The boys coming to school late again made the teacher very angry.(动名词作主语)用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可，所以只需两步。示例第一步：写出复合句。(安徽高考书面表达)Since you have realized that your time is limited, youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.第二步：把since引导的原因状语从句转换为非谓语动词，realize与you之间为主谓关系，且表示完成，故用现在分词的完成式作状语。Having realized that your time is limited，youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.其他几个转换的例子如下：1We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books.To have more time to read and select books, we can set out early.2(2015广东高考书面表达)If it is carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress.Carried out continuously，it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress.3(2015湖北高考书面表达)Because I thought that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.用非谓语动词进行句型转换1(山东高考书面表达)When we are faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help.Faced with difficulties，we need friends to give us comfort and help.2(安徽高考)When I saw a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.Seeing a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.3(湖南高考)After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.1remain to be done有待于被Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work.我们的教育工作中还有许多问题要解决，还有许多事情要去做。2疑问词to do(江西高考书面表达)To all of you，fresh students，how to adapt yourself to the new environment is the first thing that you have to face.对你们所有新生来说，如何使自己适应新的环境是必须要面对的首要问题。3连词when/while/once/unless/althoughdoing/done(湖南高考书面表达)When searching for some information，we can operate by touching the screen.当查找一些信息时，我们可以通过触摸屏来操作。4easy/difficultto doSome bad habits such as smoking and drinking arent easy to get rid of.像吸烟、酗酒等一些坏习惯不容易改掉。5prefer to dorather than do/would rather dothan do/would dorather than do宁愿做,而不愿做Nowadays some teenagers prefer to chat with strangers online rather than talk with their parents face to face.如今，一些青少年宁愿在网上与陌生人闲谈也不愿与父母面对面谈话。6having done已经(江西高考单项填空)Having spent nearly all our money, we couldnt afford to stay at a hotel.几乎把所有的钱都花完了，我们没有钱住宾馆了。7by doing通过做(2016全国卷乙书面表达)Moreover, by doing the parttime job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society.而且，通过做兼职工作，我能获得一些宝贵的经验，以致于能更好地适应社会的发展和变化。8only to do sth.(表示出乎意料的结果)Whats worse，I found myself having a fever this morning and I went to the clinic for immediate treatment, only to be advised to stay in bed for three days.糟糕的是，今天早晨我发现自己发烧，立刻去诊所治疗，结果被建议卧床休息三天。9judging by/from根据判断Judging from the expression on her face，she must have news of great excitement to tell us.从她脸上的神情看，她一定有非常令人兴奋的消息要告诉我们。10compared with/to与比较There is clear evidence that children who take music lessons develop a better memory compared with children who have no musical training.有明显的证据表明，与那些没受过音乐训练的孩子相比，上音乐课的孩子有更好的记忆力。11be said/reported/consideredto do据说/报道/认为A bus full of passengers was reported to have gone out of control on a highway south of the city.据报道，一辆满载乘客的公共汽车在市南的一条公路上失去了控制。12with宾语宾语补足语With everyone respecting him，he decided to make great contributions to the country.大家都很尊敬他，他决定为国家做出巨大贡献。用非谓语动词完成句子1人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes, which are the special food for this festival.2随着太空技术的快速发展，我们一定会在将来某一天奔赴月球。With space technology developing so rapidly, we are sure to make a visit to the moon some day.3有些人宁愿骑自行车也不愿坐公交车，因为骑自行车没有乘坐公交车的麻烦。Some people prefer to ride bikes rather than take buses/would rather ride bikes than take buses/would ride bikes rather than take buses as riding bikes has none of the troubles of taking buses. 用非谓语动词进行句型转换1As soon as they saw a few people still in the burning house, they rushed into it to save them without hesitation.On seeing a few people still in the burning house, they rushed into it to save them without hesitation.2We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think that it is possible that they can master one.We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think it possible for them to master one3I took part in the meeting, which was held in Beijing last Friday. It was very instructive, which was hosted by a manager who came to our company yesterday.I took part in the meeting held in Beijing last Friday.It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager coming to our company yesterday4Mother went to work in a hurry, and she didnt have breakfast.She was as busy as a bee these days and came back home very late.Mother went to work in a hurry without having breakfastShe was as busy as a bee these days，coming back home very late5As the society develops rapidly, its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.With the society developing rapidly, its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.(with句式) 请按以下内容要点写一篇英语短文,尽可能多地使用非谓语动词(2017山西省质量检测)假如你是李华，在“国际青年服务日(Global Youth Service Day)”与同学去老年之家(nursing home)帮忙。请给网友Tom写封邮件，简述此次活动，内容包括：1时间、地点；2活动过程；3你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语和结束语已为你写好 ，不计入总词数。Dear Tom，The annual “Global Youth Service Day” is aimed at cultivating young peoples love of service._Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Tom，The annual “Global Youth Service Day” is aimed at cultivating young peoples love of service.On that day, my classmates and I went to the nearby nursing home and had a meaningful experience there.Upon arrival, we had a free talk with the elderly residents, telling them our anecdotes and listening to theirs. At noon, we had a buffet lunch together in the cafeteria.While enjoying the meal, some talented students gave a wonderful folk dancing performance, making the elderly laugh and clap excitedly. With the meal over，we hugged each other and said goodbye.We appreciate participating in this activity, which has helped to build an emotional connection between the old and the young. In fact, if everyone could contribute a little, our community would definitely have a brighter future!Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua