新人教原创7浙江高考英语作文冲刺强化训练市公开课获奖课件省名师优质课赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考!,Tongxiang NO.2High School bobwang,NMET Specialized Revision on Writing,To strive for your success in writing,1/33,当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有些人选择看电影，有些人则喜欢读原著。请你以,“,Film or book,which do you prefer?,”,为题，按照以下关键点写一篇英语短文：,1.看电影：省时、有趣、易懂,2.读原著：细节更多、语言优美,3.我看法及理由,注意：1.词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出。,2.参考词汇,：,original work/book in the original,（原著）,浙江高考书面表示,2/33,了解得分,力争拿高分,平,均,得,分,13.96,考,生,332624,分值,百分比,分值,百分比,分值,百分比,0,3.9%,11,3.3%,21,1.7%,1,2%,12,5.3%,22,1.6%,2,1.3%,13,7.5%,23,1.5%,3,1.1%,14,9%,24,0.3%,4,4%,15,10.2%,25,0.2%,5,1%,16,9.2%,26,0.1%,6,1.3%,17,8.3%,27,0.1%,7,1.9%,18,8.3%,28,8,1.7%,19,7.7%,29,9,2.8%,20,3.6%,30,10,4.2%,3/33,抄阅读文章中句子;不知所云.得分为,0,分,4/33,语言素质欠缺;基本功差;语句毛病多;大小写;标点符号;书写不清等等;得,6,分.,5/33,卷面不整齐;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次,不清;得,11,分,6/33,语言不地道;汉字式思维;词汇错误;卷面有涂改;得,20,分.,7/33,有少许语言错误;得,27,分,8/33,Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.,The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Besides,the film is usually more interesting,and it is easier to follow.,Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile,the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.,Personally,I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situation of my own,and whats more,I am able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word,to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.,?,Its a sample!,9/33,Close your eyes and imagine how much you will score yours!,!,!,!,Do it following me,Be familiar with how to write and then take enough actions to fulfill your dream,10/33,Sentence structures and vocabulary,Use correct tenses and contain all the related points,Make the sentence structures varied and words or phrases special.,3.Organize the writing well with proper discourse marks,Tenses&points,Discourse,markers,Discussion:How to get higher marks?,11/33,1.Susan was ill in hospital.She couldnt go to the concert.(现在分词),2.The professor entered the hall.His students followed him.(过去分词),3.He wants to improve his spoken English.He often talks with the native speakers.(不定式),(一)、非谓语动词使用,Being ill in hospital,Susan couldnt go to the concert.,Followed by his students,the professor entered the hall.,In order to improve his,spoken,English,he often talks with the native speakers.Aimed at improving,巧用各种结构增强句子表现力,12/33,4.They havent completed the program.They have to stay there for another two weeks(现在分词)(04上海）,5.We are faced with so much trouble,we failed to complete the task on time.(过去分词)（06四川）,6.If you want to find more about university course,call(920)746-3789.(不定式)（05 浙江）,Not having completed the program,they have to stay there for two weeks,Faced with so many trouble,we failed to complete the task on time.,To find out more about university courses,call(920)746-3789.,巧用各种结构增强句子表现力,13/33,1.He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone.,Not until,2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat.,Only,3.She is clever but she never works hard.,as/though,4.,The clock tower stands on the other side of the street,On the other side of the street,he was left alone did he realize his danger.,by changing the plants we eat can we save,Clever,she is,she never works hard.,二、倒装句使用,stands the clock tower.,14/33,5.I could never imagine these people are living in such poor condition in my wildest dream.(06安徽）,Never,6 Then I realised how much damage had been caused (06 陕西）,Only,7 He may be a quiet student,he talks a lot about his favourite singers after class(05重庆）.,as/though,8.,Along with the time spent on computer,some problems arise there,Never in my wildest dream could I imagine these people are living in such poor condition,then did I realize how much damage had,Quite student,he may be,he talks,.,there arise some problems,15/33,He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone.,The teachers words encouraged her greatly.,三、强调句使用,It was not until,he was left alone,that,he realised his danger,.,It was,the teachers words,that,encouraged her greatly.,It,is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence.,3,The Super Girl Competition makes girls gain confidence,16/33,1.To our surprise,he refused to take the position.名词性,2.I wont believe what he says.状语,What surprised us,was that,he refused to take,No matter what you say,I wont believe.,四、从句使用,3.When he climbed up higher,he felt more breathless.比较）,The higher,he climbed up,the more breathless,he felt.,4.We all know that China will host the Olympic Games.定语,As is known to all,China will host the Olympic Games.,17/33,1.The manager had many problems to solve.He looked worried.(with),2.When he arrived home,he found his house freshly painted.,With many problems to solve,the manager looked worried.,五、介词短语使用,On his arrival home,he found his house freshly painted.,18/33,使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采,1.The tourists had to ask the villagers for help.,The tourists had no choice but to ask the villagers for help.,2The car was expensive.I cant afford it,The car was so expensive that it was beyond my reach.,3.I had a good idea.,A good idea struck me./I came up with a good idea./A good idea occurred to me.,19/33,4.An interview is important to both the employer and the applicant,5Im sure it is worth visiting,6 the building is higher than the surrounding ones,The building is rising up to a noble height and towering over the surrounding ones,Great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant,I am sure it is worth touring.,Im sure it will offer a feast for your eyes,20/33,1.Some of the students think it is no use going to college because it is,difficult to get,jobs,形容词和副词使用,extremely,satisfactory,4 we are supposed to take,sleep,which enables us to have a good rest and be more,s,2,it is recommended that we should cultivate the good habit of taking,exercise,h,aving a healthy diet also plays,an,important role in keeping us healthy,5 we should not work too hard,which,does more harm than good,regular,Hopefully,sound,only,strongly,energetic,increasingly,21/33,6 We must pay attention to our appearance and good manners are,important,7 with,preparation and a,confident and honest performance,our success will be ensured,8In addition to the above,taking part-time jobs is also a,way for college student to get money to pay part of his tuition,9 Some TV station may provide such program as looking for,criminal and children,helping to find an,lover,and others which are,beneficial to society,equally,Careful,fairly,Common,dangerous,lost,ideal,quite,22/33,一、表示罗列增加,过渡词恰当使用,二、表示解释说明,besides/whats more/in addition/furthermore/moreover/especially/In particular/as well as,in addition,for example,for instance,in this case,in fact,actually,23/33,三、表示时间次序,四、表示转折关系,at present,recently,after a while,firstly,secondly,lastly,to begin with,all of a sudden,from then on,at the same time,meanwhile,however,while,otherwise,on the contrary,on the other hand,despite,in spite of,except,(for),after all,24/33,五、表示条件关系,六、表,示因果关系,七、表示让步关系,as(so)long as,on condition that,if,unless,now that,thanks to.,due to.,therefore,as a result(of),as,even if,even though,whether.or.,25/33,八、表示强调,九、表示概括归纳,indeed,in fact,surely,certainly,no doubt,without any doubt,truly,obviously,above all,in a word,in short,in brief,generally speaking,as far as I know,As we know,as has been stated，as I have shown,As far as I am concerned,in summary,26/33,Pay attention to advanced words and complex structures,Pay attention to discourse markers,pay attention to accumulating materials for writing from our daily exercises,Keep in mind that you may use some of these one day,27/33,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Founded,in 1995,our school has a short history.,With trees surrounding our school,it looks like a beautiful garden.The two five-storied teaching buildings are,where nearly two hundred teachers work and over two thousand students study,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Our school was founded in 1995.It has a short history.There are many trees in our school.It looks like a beautiful garden.We have two 5-storied teaching buildings.Nearly two hundred teachers work there and over two thousand students study there.,28/33,There is an E-reading room.We can go on the internet for information easily.The teachers are kind and patient,so we respect them.This is our school.We like it very much.,Thank you.,It is,in the E-reading room,that,we,have an easy access to,the internet for information,Whats more,the teachers are,so,kind and patient,that,they,deserve,our special respect.Such is our school,which we like very much.,Thank you.,关键点齐全，表示正确，但语言平淡，表示方式单一，逻辑性差,极难在考试评分中得到较高档次。但使用,恰当连接词,，,较高级词汇,、,较复杂语法结构,，会变得更,精彩,。,29/33,Practice,最近你班举行了一场关于“动物园里笼养动物好不好”讨论。假如你是李华，请你依据下表提供信息，用英语将讨论结果向某中学生英语报投稿，并陈说你观点（最少发挥一条）。注意：字数,100,左右。,赞成同学认为,1,、有机会亲眼目睹野生动物。,2,、有利于培养对动物和自然爱,3,、能保护动物免于野生环境危险。,反正确同学认为,1,、浪费人力物力。,2,、破坏生态平衡。,3,、动物失去自由。,你观点,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos.,30/33,Writing Skills（写作技巧）,一、审清题目，定格式。,二、连接关键点，巧表示。,三、扩词成句，通语法。,四、连句成文，合线面。,31/33,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos.,Those who,favor,the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals.It might also,develop,peoples love for animals and nature.,Besides,animals in zoos can be,protected from dangers,in the wild.,However,those,who are against the idea,think that its,a waste of,money and labor to keep animals in zoos.Itll also damage the balance of nature.Animals will lose their freedom,if caged in zoos,.,I,personally,feel it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and,keep them locked up,.,Yours sincerely,32/33,May you,succeed,In writing,33/33,