“契诃夫法则”看读后续写隐藏线索的利用周萍.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,6/8/2020,#,从“契诃夫法则”看读后续写,隐藏线索的利用,契诃夫（,Chekhov,），,19,世纪末俄国伟大的批判现实主义作家，情趣隽永、文笔犀利的幽默讽刺大师，短篇小说之王，著名戏剧作家。他创作态度严谨，重视文学的写生，笔下一草一木无不栩栩如生，刻画心理亦往往入木三分，是世界短篇小说巅峰之一，并成为短篇小说的代名词。,Chekhov 1860-1904,Chekhovs,Law,契诃夫法则是一种文学技巧，在故事早期出现的某一元素，直至最后才显现出它的重要性。,换言之，在故事开头出现过的物品一定要在后面的故事情节中用到，否则，它就不应该出现。,“,契诃夫法则,”,对读后续写的启示,1.,故事前面隐藏的线索为故事后续的发展指明了方向；,2.,在阅读故事时应重视隐藏的线索；,3.,隐藏的线索在后续的故事发展中应有所交代。,课例（读后续写讲评课）,Cookie Thief,It was late and raining heavily one night.A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport.She was leaving for London because she got a new job there.It was said that her new boss was a typical English,gentleman,polite,modest,humorous and considerate.She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life.,With several long hours before her flight,the woman,hunted for a book,in the airport shops,bought a,packet of cookies,and found a place to sit.She took out a book and started to read.Although she was,absorbed,in her book,she,happened to see,that,the man,sitting beside her,as,bold,as he could be,grabbed,a cookie or two from the bag,in between,them.,Educated to be well-mannered,she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument.But to show that she was the owner,she started to take cookies from that bag too.Unfortunately,the man didnt get that,hint,（,暗示,）,since he didnt stop grabbing the cookies.,“How annoying!”She thought.As the greedy,cookie thief,kept eating,the woman,munched,(,用力咀嚼,)some cookies and watched the clock.,She was getting angrier as the minutes went by,thinking,“If I werent so nice,I would,blacken his eyes,.”With each cookie she took,he took one,too;when only one was left,she wondered what he would do.,With a smile on his face,and,a nervous laugh,he took the last cookie and,broke it in half,.He offered her a half,and,ate,the other.She grabbed it from him,glared at him and,thought,“Oh,brother.This guy has some nerve and he is so,rude,!Why he didnt even show any gratefulness?”,She had never known when she had been so angry,and,sighed in relief,when her flight was called.She gathered her belongings and,headed to the gate,quickly,refusing to look back at the rude thief.She boarded,the plane,sank in her seat,and looked for her book,which was almost complete.,1.hunt for a book:search for a book,2.bold-bolder-boldest:,大胆的，敢于冒险的,3.grab vt/vi-bb-,抓住，攫取,grab sth(from sb/sth):seize,grab hold of me/my arms,：抓住我,/,我的胳膊,grab at sth,：抓住，利用（机会）,4.get that hint=take a/the hint:,领会某人的暗示,5.munch,/mnt/,(on/at)sth,大声咀嚼,6.blacken his eyes,：打肿他的眼睛,blacken sbs name/reputation:,玷污某人的名声,5.break/cut/tear sth in half:,把某物分成,/,切成,/,撕成两半,6.sigh in relief,：,let out a sigh of relief=breathe in relief,7.head to the gate:,走向登机口,=be,headed,朝,前进，,向,去,:+,for/towards/back etc,The,ship was heading for Cuba.,船正驶向古巴。,Its,about time we were,heading home,.,我们该起身回家了。,head north/south etc,We,headed south towards the capital.,我们朝南向首都进发。,Where,are you guys headed?,你们要去哪儿,？,8.sink,in her,seat,I,倒下,;,颓然坐下,尤因非常疲倦或虚弱,:,+,into/to/down/back etc,She,let out a groan and sank into a chair.,她呻吟了一声，颓然倒进椅子里。,gentleman,；,the,woman,;,a packet of cookies,;the,man,;,cookie thief,;a nervous laugh;ate;thought;,rude,;,the plane,人物,事物,动作,特性,gentleman;the woman;the man;cookie thief,a packet of cookie;a nervous laugh;the plane,ate;thought,rude,Which underlined words will you choose?Why?,Divide the underlined words into 4 groups:,The underlined words most likely to be used,the woman,the man,cookie thief,a packet of cookies,the plane,important object,main characters,important name,place where the story would go on,Read the story again and find,out,two,hidden clues,in it.,Its said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman-polite,modest,humorous and considerate.,The woman thought that man was a cookie thief and she was angry with him.,Thinking,：,When and where would she meet her new boss?,How would she meet him?,In fact,the man was not a cookie thief and the woman made a mistake.That was a misunderstanding.,Thinking,：,How would the story go on to bring it to light?,Reverse,反转,The hidden clues in the given part,She would meet her new boss.,She would find that not the man but herself was a cookie thief.,Trends in the storys development,Paragraph 1,As she reached,in her baggage,she,gasped(喘气)with surprise,._,_,_,Para 2,：,With several long hours before her flight,the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops,bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit.She took out a book and started to read.,NOT,cookies,She would find that the man was not a cookie thief but herself.,She would feel guilty and wanted to apologize to the man.,The hidden clues in the given sentences,Paragraph 2,Surprisingly,she,found,the man,sitting just behind her._,It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman polite,modest,humorous and considerate.,The hidden clues in the given sentences,She knew that the man was her new boss by accident.,She apologized to the man.,How to describe the womans feeling,（,anger,）,#,tried to,ignore,it to avoid an argument.,#,“,How annoying,!”She,thought,.,#,munched,some cookies and,watched,the clock.,#,thinking,“,If I werent so nice,I would blacken his eyes,.”,#,She,grabbed,it from him,glared at,him and,thought,”Oh,brother,Why he,didnt even show any gratefulness?,”,#,She had never known when she had been so angry,and,sighed in relief,when,#,and headed to the gate quickly,refusing to look back,at the rude thief.,a,ction,and b,ody language,f,acial expressions,s,ubjunctive mood(虚拟语气),-,（,wish,，,guilt,，,regret,）,exclamatory sentences,(感叹句),and questions,Polish your writing,A sample,As she reached into her baggage,she gasped with surprise.,She found a,packet of cookies,lying in her handbag.It had been only a few seconds before she realized that she herself was the real,cookie thief,.Feeling extremely ashamed,the woman,covered her mouth with her hands.How she wished that she hadnt,eaten,the mans cookies so carelessly.She looked around to make sure that nobody noticed her unusual behaviors,.,gasp/,gsp/,at sth,喘气,Surprisingly,she found the man sitting just behind her.,What made the atmosphere more,delicate,was that,the man,apparently recognized her.Her face was,mottled red and,white,withembarrassment and she made an apology to him.He,grinned amiably at her,saying,“Im glad you like it.”After,the plane,arrived,the woman hurried to see her new boss.What a coincidence!He was the very,gentleman,.,delicate,/delikt/,adj.,易碎的，脆弱的，纤细的，精美的，微妙的，熟练的,mottled,/,mtld/adj.,斑驳的，杂色的,grin at sb -nn-,露齿而笑，咧着嘴笑,amiably adv.amiable,/eimibl/,adj.,和蔼可亲的,in,stinct,ive,/instiktiv/,adj.,本能的,hasty,/heisti/,匆忙的，草率的,indulge/,indld/,v in sth;yourself with sth,沉湎，沉迷，沉溺于,enormous,/i,nms/,巨大的,dumbfounded,/dmfaundid,/,惊呆了的,sense her embarrassment,the previously assumed“cookie thief”,别忘了：故事隐藏的线索！,周萍 浙江省湖州市第二中学,