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本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。谢谢,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。谢谢,How to set a topic sentence and its supporting sentences,第1页,Charles is very interested in cars.He knows all the details about every new model.He has collected many magazines on cars.He spends a lot of time working on his old Ford.He attends all the car shows.,topic,Controlling idea,第2页,The topic,tells the reader what the paragraph is about.,The controlling idea,is a key word or phrase that expresses the basic point of a paragraph.,Note:,a controlling idea commits the paragraph to a specific aspect of the topic.,e.g.,1),Convenience foods,are,easy to prepare,.,2),Alcoholic beverages,should be,banned from college campuses for two reasons,.,3)There are quite,a few unusual superstitions,in China about marriage,.,(general),(specific),第3页,Many illness are caused by smoking.Smoking shortened our lives.Even if you dont smoke,you can be harmed by secondhand smoke.So in order not to hurt ourselves and others,we should stop smoking right away.,is bad for ones health,.,topic,Controlling idea,Smoking,第4页,The Characteristics,1)The topic sentence,may appear at the beginning of,、,in the middle of or at the end of a paragraph.,2)The topic sentence should always contain both a,topic,and a,controlling idea,.,The Topic Sentence=,Topic,+,Controlling Idea,3)The topic sentence should be neither too general nor too specific.,第5页,Discussion:which of the following statement is general,specific or suitable?,Group 1,1)American food is terrible.,2)American food is tasteless and greasy because Americans use too many canned,frozen,and packaged foods and because everything is fried in oil or butter.,3)American food is tasteless and greasy.,(too general),(too specific),(suitable),第6页,Group 2,1)Many voters supported the candidate.,2)Many voters passively supported the candidate.,Group 3,1)To play any kind of musical instrument,one needs to know something about the instrument.,2)TO play any kind of drum requires a good sense of rhythm.,(too general),(too general),(suitable),(suitable),第7页,Topic sentence,Supporting sentences,第8页,I enjoy weekends.,I can sleep late on Saturday mornings.,I can do all kinds of shopping.,My friends and I can go to the movies.,Assignments are not due on Monday.,We usually go for a ride on Saturday afternoon.,第9页,I enjoy weekends.I can sleep late on Saturday mornings.My friends and I can go to the movies.I can do all kinds of shopping.We usually go for a ride on Saturday afternoon.,第10页,Nowadays,English is widely used in business.It is estimated that 80%of business letters are written in English.Furthermore,most contracts and agreements are written in English.In many business conferences,compared with other languages,English is the major language for people to communicate with.So if you want to expand your business,English is the key to your success.,number,facts,comparison,第11页,Topic sentence,Supporting sentences,quotations,Metaphors/similes,Numbers,Contrast and comparison,Examples,Refutation,第12页,Supporting sentences should be,closely,related to,the topic sentence.,Supporting sentences should further explain,the topic sentence,using,typical examples,facts,numbers,or,making comparison,etc.,Tips:,第13页,写作要求：,如今越来越多人改变了阅读方式，喜欢网上看书，你观点是,practice,第14页,Nowadays,more and more people have changed their ways of reading.They prefer reading on the Internet to traditional reading.In my opinion,.,Body,part,Topic sentence 1,Topic sentence 2,Topic sentence 3,Beginning,Ending,In a word,./To sum up.,there are several advantages about reading online.,第15页,Nowadays,more and more people have changed their way of reading.They prefer reading online to tradition reading.,In my opinion,there are several advantages about it,.,First of all,reading online may provide us with a variety of books.,As the invention of modern science and technology,the Internet can offer us all the latest information.Only by moving and clicking the mouse can we read all the books written by our favorite writers,.,第16页,In addition,its convenient for us to read online.,We dont have to go to the bookstores one by one in search of the books we need.Since the Internet is accessible at any time,we can enjoy reading online whenever were free.,whats more,reading online can be cost-effective.,We dont have to spend money on buying books.We can also share with others.,To sum up,Im fond of reading online.It has made my reading life more convenient and colorful.Lets enjoy the electronic reading era.,第17页,简明描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多补习和培训看法。,第18页,In the picture,a boy is tightly tied up in all kinds of training programs and extra classes,giving up his hobbies.The boy looks so sad and frustrated,but he cant free himself and have his own spare time.This picture ironically describes a typical Chinese student.,As far as Im concerned,it is bad for children in many ways.,第19页,Homework:,Finish the second part of your picture writing.(Make sure that there is a topic sentence in each paragraph),第20页,