英语作文高分写作策略市公开课一等奖省优质课赛课一等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing,英语写作高分策略,李永旭,第1页,Preparing yourself for College Life,Perform actively today!,第2页,高考英语作文“六步法”,Step1 仔细审题,Step2.理清关键点,Step3.译写单句,Step4.连句成篇,Step5.检验润色,Step6.定稿誊写,第3页,How to polish up,your writing,第4页,第5页,第6页,影响给分原因之一：,作文卷面,漂亮书写是写作得分亮点,第7页,Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?,1.Suddenly I thought of a good idea.,All of a sudden,a good idea,occurred to,me.,2.You can find my house easily.,You,have no trouble/difficulty in finding,my house.,第8页,影响给分原因之二：,文中所采取语言材料,人靠衣装，文靠词装,A.,词汇,选择灵活新奇，出奇制胜,；,B.,句型,结构利用灵活多变;,第9页,Practice,Find some similar words or phrases of the followings,good,2.clever,3.think,perfect,excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent,believe suppose,in ones opinion/view,hold the view that,wise bright smart intelligent,第10页,丰富句式：,(,惯用到句型结构）,利用不一样句型来表示同一个意思，,能增加文章文采。,1.,感叹句,e.g.,How,happy I was,when I,received your letter!,What,a kind boy,he is!,2.,强调句,e.g.,It was,this young boy,that,helped the old granny.,第11页,3,、倒装句,e.g.,Only,in this way can you,solve this problem.,4,、省略句,e.g.They read,while,walking or,riding on a bus.,5,、,with,短语,e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in,the street,with,a handbag in her hand.,第12页,6,、定语从句,Lets come to the main teaching,building,at the back of,which,stands the school library.,7,、状语从句,e.g.,Do call me before hand,so that,I can meet you at the airport.,第13页,改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化,1.He got excited when he heard the news.,_ the news,he got excited.,2.Im Li Hua.I am a middle school student from China.,Im Li Hua,_,from China.,3.The text has too many new words and expressions,and they are hard for us.,The text has too many new words and expressions,_,are hard for us.,Hearing,a middle school student,which,第14页,4.This is my room and there is a desk and a chair in it.,This is my room _.,5.Attending English corners is very helpful to improve my,oral English.,Attending English corners is _ to improve,my English.,6.I think,with a desk and a chair in it,of great help,In my opinion,As far as I am concerned,第15页,影响给分原因之三：,行文流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成,正确而巧妙地使用好,连接词,第16页,使用恰当连接词,first;firstly;second;secondly;last but not least,and;too;whats more;besides,for example;for instance;like;such as;as to,but;however;while;though;on the contrary,逻辑角度,适当过渡性词汇,排序关系,并列关系,举例关系,转折关系,第17页,选择适当连接词填空。,A.,besides,B.,therefore,C.,so that,D.,for example,As a student,we must study rather hard to get good grades _we can go to a better college._I have lots of things to do._,I recite the most important summary of everysubject and I also have some test papers to do.Sometimes I can do sports,listen to music or take part in school activities._,dreamingofbeing a college student is also part of my life.,C,B,D,A,第18页,Three strategies：,1.,作文卷面-,整齐卷面,2.,文章语言-丰富词汇，,短语和句式,3.,行文流畅-流畅结构,第19页,You are all winners!Congratulations!Here come your,大学录取通知书,第20页,Homework:,Improve,your own writing in your composition book after class.,第21页,Thank you！,第22页,