英语写作技巧指导市公开课一等奖百校联赛优质课金奖名师赛课获奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,初中英语写作技巧指导,1/16,健康很主要。在学习和工作压力日趋增大今天，会休息人才会有健康身体。人们是怎样度过假期呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查结果。依据你所得信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整调查汇报,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,2/16,怎样度假,调查汇报,倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列,(list),依据以下关键词及图表用简单句子列出文章关键点。,3/16,A lot of people travel.,Some people stay at home.,Other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,列,(list),Enjoy your vacation.,4/16,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,（the beginning）,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,（the ending）,加(add),加首尾,，使结构完整。,能够采取,总分总,结构，开头或结尾句子应注意简练、漂亮。,5/16,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it,a lot of people travel.,And,some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.,Also,some,other people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连,(connect),6/16,1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more,not onlybut also,neithernor,2.表示选择:or,eitheror,3.表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result,5.表示条件:if,unless,6.表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand,7.表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth,8.表示次序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end,9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact,10.表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short,关联词(connection words),7/16,Lets try,_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.,He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.,We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking.,_,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.,Though,Although,instead,like,First,Next,Finally,At last,8/16,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it,a lot of people travel.,And,some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.,Also,some,other people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连(connect),美,(beautify),9/16,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.,According to it,most people,choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.,Then,some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.,And,to visit friends or parents,also,makes them relaxed,.,However,a few people,have to,work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,美,(beautify),10/16,According to it,most people,choose to travel to,get away from the busy world during the holidays,.,Then,some people like to stay at home,watching TV,or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,However,a few people,have to,work.,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes,Jack a dull boy.”,Come and enjoy your vacation.People,who relax well work well.,美(beautify),And,to,visit friends or parents,also,makes them relaxed,.,Proverb（谚语）,11/16,加谚语(Proverb),锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”,It is good for us students to take exercise.,12/16,加谚语(Proverb),我们应该努力学习。,We should study hard.,As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”,We should study hard.,.,13/16,加谚语(Proverb),加入英语俱乐部是学习英语好方法。,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”,So,joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,14/16,Some useful sayings:,About helping others/volunteering：,We make a living with what we get.,But we make a life with what we give.,我们得到是为了生存,不过我们生存是为了贡献.,About,friends,：,A friend in need is a friend indeed.,15/16,About,study,：,1.,Practice makes perfect.,熟能生巧。,2.,One is never too old to learn.,活到老，学到老。,About dreams:,1.,No pain,s,no gain,s,.,没有付出就没有收获,2.,Where there is a will,there is a way.,有志者，事竟成。,About health:,An apple a day keeps the docor away.,As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”,16/16,