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Last month, I, together with my parents, were invited by my uncle in the USA. My uncle, which moved to America when I was five, has been living in there for nearly ten years. He meets us at the airport. I was exciting when I set foot on the land of America. In the following days, we visited some places of interests and took photos in front of the Statue of Liberty. We all enjoyed visit the Museum of
Natural History because it great enriched our knowledge. For me, this is one of the most rewarding trip I have ever made in our life.
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Mr Turner turned over in bed from time to time last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep Yesterday, she went to a big gardening company, known as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looked forward the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, because the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was help.
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A few days ago when taking the walk with my mother in the park, I came across a foreigner. Judged by his puzzled expression, I thought he might in need of help. So I went up and asked that I could help him in English. He told me he had got lost. He had turned to several passerby for help, but they couldn’t speak English. Then he told me my destination. Fortunately, I was quite familiar with the place In order to make myself understand, I told him how to go there as clear as possible. Although it was the first time that I have talked to a foreigner face to face, he totally understood what I said and thanked for me.
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A Frenchman is once visiting London. He wished to taking a walk to see a city. But he was afraid he might get losing because he knew no words of English. So after he left this hotel, he stopped at the first corner and careful copied in his notebook the name of the street where he was staying. Then he walked on. At last, he got lost. After several hour he found a policeman.The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn't know the name of his hotel，and he knew the name of the street.He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook. It was read; “One-way street”.
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I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you give me. I was a perfectly stranger when reaching this city. Once I lost myself for not know the way in a downtown street, although I stopped to ask some people for help. As you know, this is the first time for me to come up to this big city. I bought a guidebook, and there were still difficulties in going round the city. The streets and shops puzzled myself so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance which has enabled me go about the city without losing myself. Now I begin to know how to take the proper bus. Yesterday I went downtown with some of my schoolmates for shopping. Lessons will begin after a few days. I will come over to see you some day the next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.
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As the college entrance examination is approaching, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have much ti share with my fellow student. Firstly, I'd like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers，parents and
friends including. Without their help and advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates who I hurt or misunderstand. I firm believe that communication and smiles act bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, as hard work is the key to a success. Finally，I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time,because time and tide wait for no man. 易错点整理：
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Li Yue was awarding the title of “Star Student of the Week” because what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went to downtown and walked from one store to other, looking for the clothes we would wear in the singing contest. When the rest of us were enjoying our leisure times in cool rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching for the right clothes. Deep moved by her, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and care a lot about the class. Beside, she often devotes her spare time to help others. She has set the good example to us.
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Dick is Australian man, aged 25, whose life is full of hardship. He was born without arms and legs. He used to being made fun of by others. Everything seemed impossible to them. However, Dick never gave up. After many failures, he finally learned to swim, fish and even surf. That surprised us most is that he
completed university education and get two degrees. And now he is the CEO of two company.When asking bout the secret of his success, he thinks a positive attitude is the key to success. Dick's story great inspired me. Compared with him, and we are healthy. However, we are always frustrated when we face difficulties. I think Dick has set a good example for us. We should learn from him and never give up.
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Our mother accompanied us to school in the first day. Soon a teacher came and led us to a classroom. There we were put into four separate class. Some children begin to cry as the parents were not allowing into the classrooms. I did not cry because I had been to kindergarten ago. Actually my mother went to home soon after for she knew I would be all right. It was enjoyable time for me as I got to know my new classmates. The teacher was very busy write down our information so they had plenty of time. In the meantime some children continued to sob when their parents looked in anxious through the windows.
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I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they also help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but followed the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked a bad habit. Just as the old saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Therefore, there are still many children who don't like fruit or a vegetables. On the contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many children
were crazy about junk food. Consequently, we become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion we must take action change it "
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One day last month, a group of Chinese student arrived in Brisbane. I was one of them. After say goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport, I started my long journey. That was my first journey abroad. How exciting I felt when I got on abroad. We left Shanghai to Hong Kong to change to another plane to Merbourne, second largest city in Australia. From there we flew to Brisbane, that is the capital city of Queensland, Australia. We were exchange students and send to the country by their government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months. From the first few lessons, we found the teachers there really worked hardly, and I am sure of that everything will go well in the next months.
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I had an unusual experience today. In the morning, I was walking along a street while I saw a lady knocked down by truck. But the driver just drove away. Without hesitations, I rushed across the street to help her. I put her on my back
and carry her to a hospital nearby. On reaching the hospital, however, she started
to accuse me of knocking her down and demanded I paid for the bills. That really surprised me! Although I tried to explaining, she insisted that I was the very person whom was responsible for the accident! I was total puzzled. Is it right or wrong to help others' people? What should I will do next time?
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One day, my cousin told me about the importance of protect the environment. He asked me help do it, too. I just said, “ I don’t think my helps is important.”
Hearing what I said, he was asked, “How much does a snowflake weigh?” I reply that it almost weighed nothing. Then he said, “ I once read the story. There were already 8,865,219 snowflakes on a tiny branch. When the 8.865,220th fell into it, it broke." I got her point and decided to do that I can to help protect the environment. Since you think your effort doesn't mean anything to the environment, think of the8,865,220th snowflake.
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My name is Jack, and I am living in New York now. Some people think it is a large city, and I don’t feel like live here. I don’t have much money to buy house, so I have to rent it. The house is across from the railway station.I can see trains
come and go from my window. It's noisily all day and I can't seep well at night.
The traffics here is very heavy because of there are too many cars in the street. So it's difficult for me to drive to work.The cost of living are very high. To get more money, I have to wok hard every day. I really like my life on the farm which the air is fresh and life is quiet.Though I can't get much money, I can live with my family. I would move back to my house soon.
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We are leaving school and we decide to give a gift to Mr Li whom has taught us for three years. Two suggestions have provided by our classmates. One is an album