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大學英語六级作文模板:
付兵南
1)先背3個句子
1 Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)
2 The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life. On the one hand …, But on the other hand.(讲影响)
3To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.(結尾段)
Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句,根据不一样模板自由组合。
2)模板(2個模板)
1 開頭段:先讲重要性,然後转讲不好的地方。
中间段:措施
結尾段:先来個小转折再進入總結
開頭段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life. However, what worries most of us is that……
中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……
結尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.
2 開頭段:先讲重要性,然後转讲争论
中间段:转折(即列出两种不一样人的观點)
結尾段:直接進入總結(即你的观點)
開頭段:It is accepted that …. Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of….. However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.
中间段:On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..
On the other hand, a great many people insist that….
結尾段:From my perspective, however…. (你的观點) . Therefore, it’s time that (措施之类的)
6级作文萬能句子(补充在”…..”裏面的萬能句子,自已揣摩每個句子放在哪裏比较适合)
重點背:1)5)6)7)句子,最佳所有都被過一遍,自已揣摩怎么用。
1)Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life. 。。。能让我們的生活更美好,也就是說,。。。可以給我們枯燥的生活带来色彩
2)For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 對于诸多人来說,學习一门新技术占据了他們的生活和充实了他們的生活。
3)。。。。。, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom. 。。。占据了某人大部分時间,使得某人没空想東想西(充实了某人生活)
4)What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. 住校為學生省去了不少時间,這样學生可以把更多的時间用在學习上
5)Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.
一點一滴,這样做可以丰富我們的知识和拓宽我們的视野
6)For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.對于想過一种故意义的人来說,抽空學习一门新技术很重要
7)The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让學生們學习個人技巧,這样可以在找工作時更有竞争力
8)By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.學生不仅可以提高學习成绩,還可以获得在書本上學不到的工作經验
9)Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
10)1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么東西可带来好影响
2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么東西可带来不好的影响
The World Expo in (世博會)英文作文
The World Expo in (世博會)
The World Expo in
Shanghai will host the World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government
has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
How To Be A Lovely Citizen(怎样成為一种可愛的上海人)
Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近几年大學校园内出現“考证热”
2)产生這一現象的原因
3)你的見解
Certificate Craze On Campus
行文思绪
本題属于提纲式文字命題。提纲第1點指出一种現象,提纲第2點规定分析产生這种現象的原因,提纲第3點规定談談“我”對该現象的見解,由此可判断本文应為現象解释型作文。
根据所給提纲,本文应包括如下内容:描述近几年大學校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大學生热衷考取多种证書的重要原因;论述“我”對大學生“考证热”的見解。
高分范文
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?
[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
【亮點點评】
[1]祈使句使用恰當。randomly意為“随意地,随机地”。
[2]限定詞使用恰當,使文章体現更严谨,增强了說服力。
[3]that引导同位語從句,修饰the idea。
[4]设問句引出原因,轻易引起注意。
[5]强调句型,此处是强调主語。
[6]which引导非限制性定語從句,充當介詞宾語。
[7]用于引出“我”的观點。
[8]“當談到或提及…時”。
[9]since引导原因状語從句,表达既定的原因,常译為“既然”。
[10]“只是,仅仅”。“而不是”。
佳句临摩
1.佳句:You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
临摩:离婚率上升尽管令人难過,但却是不争的事实。
2.佳句:Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.
临摩: 在過去的三拾年,发展中国家在許多方面都获得了很大的進步,其中包括健康水平的提高。
3.佳句:From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.
临摩:我认為,對于我們来說,更重要的是尽量提高自已的能力而不是获得更多的证書。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)目前诸多大學生都喜欢追求名牌
2)产生這种現象的原因是什么
3)你怎样看待這一現象
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
行文思绪
本題属于提纲式文字命題。提纲第1點指出一种現象,提纲第2點规定分析产生這种現象的原因,提纲第3點规定談談“我”對该現象的見解,由此可判断本文应為現象解释型作文。
根据所給提纲,本文应包括如下内容:描述目前热衷于大學生追求名牌的現象;分析大學生热衷名牌的原因;论述“我”對大學生追求名牌的見解并提出提议。
高分范文
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.
【亮點點评】
[1]“有…倾向”。
[2]過渡衔接詞語,使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。
[3] follow表达“跟随,追求(趋势或時尚)”
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]which引导非限制性定語從句。
[6] it為形式主語,不定式為真正主語。
[7]“遠遠超過他們的消费能力”。beyond表达“超過…范围”。
[8]强调句型,此处是强调主語。not…but连接并列成分。
[9]“而不是”。
佳句临摹
1. 佳句:It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.
临摹:對大學生来說,理解校园以外的世界是非常必要的。
2. 佳句:In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.
临摹:在世界上或許没有什么游戏像赌博
像赌博的那么有害和危险了,它常常會导致一种人破产,還會玷污人的心灵。
3. 佳句:Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.
临摹:诸多同學常常玩電脑游戏,這是挥霍時间,而不是一种有益的放松方式。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1)简朴简介個人状况
2)阐明申請助學贷款的原因、数额
3)保证會合理运用贷款并表明還款的决心
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
行文思绪
本題属于情景式命題,规定写一封申請信。根据所給提纲,本文应包括如下内容:简朴简介自已的状况,表明写信目的:申請助學贷款;阐明申請助學贷款的原因、数额;保证合理运用贷款并表明還款决心,最终表达感謝。
高分范文
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
Sep 12th,
To whom it may concern,
I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.
My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Song Xue
【亮點點评】
[1]“主修…”,目前分詞作伴随状語。
[2]“超過…的能力范围”。
[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。
[4]過渡衔接詞語,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“with+宾語+宾补”的独立构造。
[6]“我保证…”,that引导同位語從句。
[7]“不遗余力”。
佳句临摩
1.佳句:To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.
临摩:令人更困惑不解的是,诸多飞机都從大海上离奇消失了。
2.佳句:Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
临摩:由于周围交通不便利,人們只好步行回家。
3.佳句:Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.
临摩:全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举行奥运會。
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