高考书面表达—邀请信名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,高考书面表示邀请信,A Letter of Invitation,第1页,一、观察学习并思索：,怎样写一封邀请信？,段落结构？,内容组成？,语言利用？,连贯性？,语气与得体性？(上级，长辈，朋友间？),增分亮点？,第2页,假设你是李华，暑假通常你会和Lisa一起去度假。今,年你们打算邀请在北京学习美国朋友Ben和你们去海,南三亚度假。请依据下面关键点写一封email向Ben,发出邀请。,关键点：,1海南三亚度假两周；2.参加一周潜水课程；3周四之前回复是否加入；4Lisa负责预订航班和酒店。,注意：,1词数为100左右；,2能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3信开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。,Dear Ben，,Time goes fast.Another summer is coming again.,_,_,Yours，,Li Hua,第3页,Dear Ben,，,Time goes fast.,Another summer is coming again.Lisa and I will go on vacation as usual.We always want to go to Sanya in Hainan Province and have planned to spend two weeks there.,We would be delighted if you could join us on this trip.,The first week we will,take a diving course.Just imagine swimming under water with the fishes!I cant wait!Dont worry about the details,as Lisa will take care of booking the plane tickets and reserving the hotel.,If you want to participate then I need you to reply by Thursday.,We hope,you decide to come along.It will be wonderful to see you again and we will have a great time.,Yours,Li Hua,第4页,假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举行一次英语演讲比赛，,希望附近某大学外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委。,请参考以下比赛通知给她写一封信。,英语演讲比赛,主题：人与自然,时间：6月15日下午2：00-5：00,地点：501教室,赛选手：10名学生,联络人：李华（电话：44876655）,Dear Ms.Smith,I am Lihua,the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School._,Best wishes to you.,Li Hua,第5页,Dear Ms.Smith,I am Lihua,the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School.,I sincerely hope,you can,set aside some time for,our English Speech Contest and be a judge.,The contest,the theme of which,is“Man and Nature”,will be held in the Room 501,from 2：00 to 5：00 on the afternoon of June 15.,Whats more,there will be ten students taking part in it.I am sure that it will be a great success,if you can give us some precious remarks,.,I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.,My telephone number is 44876655.I am looking forward to your reply.,Best wishes.,Li Hua,第6页,邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动书信,，包含以下几个方面：,1.邀请对方参加活动(内容、时间和地点)；,2.与该活动相关注意事项；,3.期待对方接收邀请，并可表示感激。,第7页,提炼,邀请信格式模板：,Dear _,，,How is everything with you?I am writing to tell you that there will be a _(,内容)at/in _(地点)on _(时间).We would be honored,/delighted,to have you there with us.,The,_(activity),will start at _(,详细时间).This will be followed by a _(深入安排)At around _(时间),_(另一个安排),Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not,will you?My phone number is _,I really hope you can make it.Looking forward to _,Yours sincerely,，,Li Ming,第8页,词句模板,1,段首惯用语：,(1)I am writing to invite you to,(2)I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in,(3)I wonder if you can come,(4)How would you like to join us in,？,第9页,2,段尾惯用语：,(1)Would you please,drop me a line,(写信给我),to let me know if you can come to,？,(2)My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.,(3)We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.,(4)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.,第10页,第二节书面表示（满分25分）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举行国际中学摄影展。请给你英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信内容包含：,1主题：环境保护；2展览时间；3投稿邮箱：,intlphotoshow,.,注意：1词数100左右；2能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,二、修改提升自己作文,第11页,1、认真审题，确立话题，归纳关键点,主题：,切中题意，切忌跑题,层次：,普通是三大层次，忌“挤牙膏”式，想到哪儿写到哪儿，缺乏全局观念。,格式:,人称:,时态：,文字提要式作文写作指导：,“邀请外国朋友参加摄影展”,发出邀请注意事项希望接收邀请并感激,书信,不要写成“求援信”,第一第二人称,未来时为主,第12页,2.理顺关键点，增加细节，连贯表示,适当增加细节,：,为何发出邀请？,作品优异,呼吁环境保护,有机会与更多摄影兴趣者交流学习,理顺关键点：,简单引出有摄影展-邀请参展为何邀请注意事项-希望接收邀请,发挥有度：,围绕主题，切忌游离主题任意发挥,注意字数,第13页,3.化解难点，灵活表示,4.错落有致，多用短语句型，连接恰当,碰到难以表述内容，从另一个角度利用自己学过熟悉知识去灵活表示，一样能写出想要表示内容。,投稿截止日期：,send tobefore,错落有致:,句型多变，简单句并列句复合句交叉使用；使用高级框架结构句子。,连接恰当:,使用恰当关联词、过渡句等。,提供作品：,take part in/participate in,此文主体段落使用 first,second,third,第14页,简单引出有摄影展-邀请参展为何邀请注意事项-希望接收邀请,简单引出有摄影展,will hold,an International High School student Photography Show,will be held by,邀请参展,invite sb.to do,take part in/participate in,submit/hand in,some works for the show/exhibition,Knowing that,you are interested in/fond of taking photos,I am writing to,When I learned the news that,you are the very person to come into my mind.,第15页,为何邀请,impress sb.deeply,leave a deep impression on sb.,作品优异,I bet that,the visitors will,be amazed at,your distinguished works.,I have never seen a more outstanding photographer than you.,I have never seen more impressive photos than yours.,have a talent for,a talented/gifted amateur photographer,第16页,呼吁环境保护,motivate/encourage sb.to do,appeal to sb.to do,have some good influence on,Your works,are bound to,arouse/strengthen peoples awareness of environmental protection.,take actions to protect our environment,第17页,注意事项,The exhibition will,start on,lasting,days.,You,are expected to,hand in your photos before/within,sendto,You can submit your entries(参赛作品)by email and our e-mail address is,希望接收邀请,5.查漏补缺，修正错误，誊写清楚,We are looking forward to seeing your,distinguished,works.,I would like to meet you at the exhibition and please let me know your decision soon.,第18页,Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show.,The theme of the show is,environmental protection,.It will,start from June15th and last,three weeks.,Any students who is interested is welcome to participate.,I know you,take good pictures,and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos,on that theme,the last time you visited our school.,This is surely a good chance for more people to,see them.,If you want to join,you can send your photos to,intlphotoshow,.,Hope to hear from you soon.,Yours,Lihua,第19页,