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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,本资料仅供参考,不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考,不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考,不能作为科学依据。谢谢。不能作为科学依据。,Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,本资料仅供参考,不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考,不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考,不能作为科学依据。谢谢。不能作为科学依据。,Academic Writing,7,类常见错误,1/34,1.,省略,2/34,Wealthy parents shouldnt,spoil their children.,3/34,Shouldnt,Im,Cant,Hes,4/34,Shouldnt,should not,Im,I am,Cant,cannot,Hes,he is/he has,he was,5/34,2.Informal language,6/34,Today,newspapers,report lots of crimes in,horrible details.,7/34,lots of,a,h,ost of,a vast,n,umber of,n,umerous,a great deal of,a great amount of,可数,不可数,8/34,3.Spelling,9/34,英美词汇差异,The impact of tourism on these traditional,neighbourhoods,must be,analysed.,The impact of tourism on these traditional,neighborhoods,must be,analyzed.,10/34,英式 美式,se ze/ce,analyse analyze,civilise civilize,practise practice,globalise globalize,v.,11/34,英式 美式,our or,colour color,neighbour neighbor,favourite favorite,n.,12/34,英式 美式,长 短,storey story,dialogue dialog,archaeology archeology,jewellry jewelry,traveller traveler,词汇长短,13/34,4.,词汇没有特色,14/34,例句,1,Serious crimes harm,peoples lives.,15/34,severe,offense/criminal act,damage/destroy,undermine/jeopardize,individuals/man/,mankind,serious,crime,harm,people,16/34,例句,2,The advantages of space,research are more than its,Disadvantages.,17/34,例句,2,The advantages of space,research,are more than,its,Disadvantages.,18/34,be more than,outweigh,19/34,例句,3,Our world is becoming,more,and more,reliant on modern,Technology.,20/34,more and more,increasingly+adj,on a rise,21/34,5.,句子无衔接,22/34,1.The environment is becoming,worse.We must work together to,deal with this situation.,23/34,分析句间关系,加衔接词,24/34,The environment is becoming worse,;,therefore,we must work together to deal,with this situation.,25/34,2.,Opinions from different people will help us finish our work better and faster,their opinions can serve as a sound information channel,which leads to a better solution to a problem.,26/34,2.,Opinions from different people will help us finish our works better and faster,because,their opinions can serve as a sound information channel,which leads to a better solution to a problem.,27/34,6.,感情色彩过于强烈,love letter,式写作,28/34,So,we should make sure that,globalization does not harm our own,traditional culture!,29/34,!,改,。,So,不要和,should,连用,感情强烈。,therefore,30/34,7.,宗教作为引言,31/34,We must be friendly to others,because the Bible says,“treat,your neighbors as you would like,to be treated.”,32/34,引言,:名人名言,/,公认观点,Bible,圣经,:信仰,非逻辑推理,33/34,满分网无偿赠书活动:,限时抢报 价值298元TOEFL/SAT作文批改卡无偿领取,猴哥SAT词汇蓝宝书无偿赠予100本(第四期),猴哥SAT阅读长难句108句无偿赠予 100本(第四期),猴哥托福词频9000无偿赠予100本,赠完为止!(第四期),猴哥背词团报名,34/34,
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