九年级英语书面表达指导与训练-样稿戴海燕.doc

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DHY英语工作室

初中英语单元同步书面表达指导与训练
（新目标英语九年级全册）

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使用说明
一、2013年中考对写的能力的要求：
1、能正确使用大小写字母和标点符号；
2、能简单描述人物或事件；
3、知道使用常见的连词表示顺序和逻辑关系；
4、能根据图片或表格写出简单的段落，并能表达自己的观点；
5、能根据要求写简单的短文、书信、日记。
二、书面表达批阅符号及评分表的使用说明
1、单词或句子下划“ ”线，表示该单词或句子存在词法、句法错误；单词或句子下划“ ”线，表示该单词或句子存在词法、句法严重错误；给单词画“○”，表示该单词拼写错误。
2、单词间穿插符号“∧”，表示该处缺少单词。
3、单词被符号“﹨”划掉，表示要去掉该单词。
4、在单词、词组或句子下划“ ”，表示好词好句。
5、在所有需要订正的地方，老师都会标上“①②③……”符号。
6、评分表的使用：教师的批阅分数打在封面上的评分表中。事后一百分是对学生订正情况的打分。建议用“★”表示他们已经准确订正。这种一目了然的评价表，可督促学生做得更好。建议教师制定激励性评价制度，对态度好的学生进行奖励！
三、书面表达订正要求
在订正处按老师标上的序号逐一认真订正，并写出理由。订正理由参考如下：1. 主语错误；2. 名词的单复数错误；3. 动词错误：主谓不一致或时态错误；4. 介词遗忘；5. 冠词错误；6. 否定句中的助动词错误；7. 人称代词主格与宾格混淆；8. 从句的时态和语序问题等。(老师不会直接帮你订正。如果老师直接将答案给你，那是一种犯罪，因为他或她剥夺了你思考的机会！）
四、2013年中考评分标准：
满分档（20分）：字数100---120之间，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚， 逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有语法错误。
第五档（16-19分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚， 逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富，有少量语法错误。
第四档（12-15分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，
行文基本连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。
第三档（8-11分）：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整，行文不连贯，词汇不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。
第二档（4-7分）：能有句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
第一档（0-3/0-2分）：有一些英语单词；白卷0分。
五、常用的英语谚语
A bad beginning makes a bad ending. 不善始者不善终。
Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
A good beginning makes a good ending. 善始者善终。
A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。
A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口。
All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。
A mother's love never changes. 母爱永恒。
An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一个苹果，不用请医生。
Do it now. 机不可失，时不再来。
Doing is better than saying. 说得好，不如做得好。
Don’t trouble trouble until trouble troubles you.不要自找麻烦。
East or west, home is best. 金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝。
Every day is not Sunday. 好景不常在。
Every dog has his day. 谁都有得意的时候。
Every minute counts. 分秒必争。
It is better to give than to take. 施比受有福。
It is hard to please all. 众口难调。
It is never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
No news is good news. 没有消息就是好消息。
No one can call back yesterday. 昨日不会重现。
No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。
No sweet without sweat. 先苦后甜。
Where there's life there's hope. 留得青山在，不怕没柴烧
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
Will is power. 意志就是力量。
六、语言点提示：
（一）八年级上
1. It is + 形容词 ＋ for sb. to do sth.
例子：It is important for us to learn English well.
对我们来说学好英语很重要
2. It takes sb some time to do sth.
例子：It takes me an hour to do homework. 做作业花了我一个小时。
It takes him 10 minutes to get to school. 上学花了他10分钟。
3. too…to… 太……以至于不能……
例子：The coat is too small for me to wear.
这上衣对我来说太小以至于不能穿
4. enough to…足够……以至于能……
例子：I am old enough to look after myself.
我已经足够大了能照顾自己了。
5. so…that: 如此……以至于
例子：I am so old that I can go to school.
6. so that: 以便
例子：I get up early so that I can’t be late.
7. 形容词后置: something/somewhere good/new/different…
8. be good for对……有好处 Doing sports is good for our health.
be good with sb.与某人相处得好 My English teacher is good with us.
be good at 擅长于…… We are good at playing ping-pong.
9. want sb (not) to do sth. 想要某人（不）做某事
ask/tell/invite/would like/sb to do sth.
10. make sb do sth. 使某人做某事 let sb do sth. 让某人做某事
See/hear/find/watch/ sb doing sth./do sth. （感官动词的用法）
help sb (to) do sth. 帮助某人做某事 help mom with the cooking.
11. try (not) to do 试图（不)做某事
want (not) to do 想要（不）做某事 plan (not) to do计划（不)做某事
would like (not) to do想要（不）做某事 decide to do 决定做某事
12. practice doing, 练习做某事be busy doing, 忙于做某事
finish doing完成做某事enjoy doing 喜欢做某事
mind doing 介意做某事 thanks for doing 为做某事而感谢
13. sb. spend time on sth./in doing sth. 某人做某事花多少时间
例子：Tom often spends an hour doing his homework everyday.
14. start to do/doing开始做某事
stop to do停下来去做某事 stop doing停止做某事
forget to do忘记还没做的事 forget doing忘记已经做过的事
remember to do记住还没做的事 remember doing记住已经做过的事
borrow…from…从…借…（借入） lend…to…把…借给…（借出）
15. cut up, turn on, turn off, put into, put on, mix up…
这些词组遇到代词时，必须将代词放在中间
例子：cut it up, turn it on, put them into a box, put it on, mix them up.
cut the bananas up=cut up the bananas.
turn the TV on=turn on the TV. where you live.
16. 从句：
（1）定语从句
例子：People who are too stressed out and angry may have too much yang.
In my view, I like a friend who is good at schoolwork.
He’d like to read books which are humorous and meaningful.
（2）宾语从句
例子：Chinese doctors believe (that)we need a balance of yin and yang.
I want to know where you live.
Do you know what he wants to be?
It depends on where you are.
（3）状语从句
例子： I could sing when I was 4 years old.
If it doesn’t rain tomorrow, I’ll go to Wenzhou.
17. 动名词做主语
例子：Eating Dangshen and Huangqi herbs is also good for this.
Doing sports is good for our health.
18. 动名词做表语
例子：Zuoyao’s favorite hobby is playing computer games.
（二）八年级下
1. There be + sb/sth doing in a place 在某处有某人/某物在做某事
例句：There are some students studying in our classroom.
There are some people dancing in the park.
2. fall in love with 爱上……
例句：I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.
3. except 除了， besides 除了
例句：Everyone is here except Xiao Lei. Because he is ill.
Chen Zhicheng played basketball besides Chen Peijian. They both play basketball well.
4. not … anymore 不再
例句：I wasn’t mad at my students anymore because they were very hard-working.
She didn’t play computer games anymore.
5. as…as possible 尽可能
例句：I will get to school as quickly as possible,
We should do exercise as much as possible.
6. compare …with… 与……比较
例句：Parents always compare their children with other children.
7. find it + 形容词 + to do sth. 发现做某事怎么样
例句：We find it important to learn English well.
Many boys find it interesting to play computer games.
相当于：It is interesting for many boys to play computer games.
8. on the one hand, on the other hand 一方面，另一方面
例句：On the one hand, we should study hard. On the other hand, we should have time to relax ourselves.
9. It’s a good idea for sb to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是个好主意
例句：It’s a good idea for me to get an education.
10. not … until 直到……才
例句：Mr Huang didn't go to bed until 12:00 last night.
王先生昨晚直到12点才睡觉。
I didn’t leave until my mother came back. 我直到妈妈回来才离开。
11. have a really hard tune with…. 与……相处艰难
例句：He had a really hard time with science last semester.
12. have a difficult/hard time doing sth. = have problem (in) doing sth.
做某事困难
例句：If you are rich, you will have a difficult time knowing who your real friends are.
13. open up one’s eyes to the outside world 开阔视野
例句：If I travel around the world, I will open up my eyes to the outside world.
14. You are supposed to do sth 被期待/要求做某事；理应做某事
例句：As a student, I am always supposed to study hard.
15. a good influence on sb/sth. 对某人/某物产生好影响
例句：Ms Dai works very hard. She like being a good influence on us.
16. make a living (by) doing 靠……谋生
例句：In the future, I will make a living by singing.
17. have a chance to do sth. 有机会做某事
例句：If we have a chance to get a good education, we will be happy.
18. seem like 似乎像
例句：For Ms Dai’s son, being a math teacher might seem like his dream job.
19. 不定式 to do 可以表示目的
例句：They are skating to raise money for charity.
My mother gets up early to get breakfast ready.
20. be the first one to do sth.
例句：Tom was the first one to get to school today.
21. run out of 用完；用尽
例句：We have run out of room to store them.
22. be interested in / take an interest in 对什么感兴趣
例句：Chen Zhicheng is interested in playing basketball.
Qiaoqiao takes an interest in reading books.
23. an 80-year-old woman, 一位80岁的妇女 end-of-year exam, 期末考试
a two-day holiday 一个两天的假期
24. Life with a pig isn’t always perfect. 和猪一起的生活并总是很完美。
例句：Life with hamsters is very relaxing.
25. The best gift I have ever received is … from … on my twelfth birthday.
例句：The best gift I have ever received is an English dictionary from my father on my 20th birthday.
26. be easy to take care of 容易照顾
例句：Hamsters are easy to take care of. = It’s easy to take care of hamsters.
27. rather than 而不是
例句：My mother wants me to study rather than play computer games.
I would like to go to the party rather than stay at home.
28. instead 代替
例句：Mr Xie gives us PE classes instead because Mr Li hurt his left leg.
= Mr Xie gives us PE classes instead of Mr Li because Mr Li hurt his left leg.
29. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
例句：Our teachers always encourage us to do better.
30. All I have ever wanted to do is travel.
All I have ever wanted to be is a teacher.
31. make progress 取得进步
例句：Singing English songs can help you make progress in English.
I have made great progress with the help of our teachers.
32. feel like doing = want to do
33. 一些常用的短语
(1) be supposed to do: We are supposed to do more sports to keep fit.
(2) regard…as: We regard Ms Dai as our friends.
(3) be used to do: He used to be quiet, but now he is outgoing.
(4) be used to doing: I used to get up late, but now I used to getting early.
(5) would rather do than do: I would rather read books than go to the party.
(6) have fun/trouble doing sth: All of us have fun/trouble learning English.
(7) agree with sb: He agrees with me.
(8) be proud of: Ms Dai is proud of us.
(9) do one’s best to do sth.: We will do our best to learn English well.
(10) enjoy oneself: Let’s enjoy ourselves every day.
(11) had better do: We had better communicate well with our parents.
(12) laugh at: We shouldn’t laugh at the people who are in trouble.
(13) no longer/not…any more: He doesn’t fight with his sister any more.
(14):not …until: My mother didn’t go to bed until she finished sewing.
(15) the more, the more: The more trees we plant, the more beautiful our country will be.
(16)not only…but also: She can not only sing but also dance well.
Not only our teachers but we students love sports.
34.串联词：
(1) first of all/firstly, secondly, thirdly, then, after that, finally, last but not the least;
(2) what’s more, though/although, besides, and so on, however;
(3) luckily, unluckily, to be honest, to my surprise;
(4) for example, as for, as a student, as you can see, as you know;
(5) at the same time, later on, by the way;
(6) on the one hand, on the other hand;
(7) in my opinion/view, in a word, in fact, of course, from now on, so far, in
this way...

目 录
Unit 1：
1. 语言学习……………………………………………………………………1
2. 生活问题的处理……………………………………………………………3
Unit 2：个人的变化………………………………………………………..…5
Unit 3：
1. 我的家规……………………………………………………………………7
2. 我的校规……………………………………………………………………9
Unit 4：如何变得自信的建议………………………………………………11
Unit 5：神秘事件的推测……………………………………………………13
Unit 6：写评论………………………………………………………………15
Unit 7：
1. 介绍自己的家乡……………………………………………………………17
2. 我的梦想……………………………………………………………………19
Unit 8：志愿者活动……………………………………………………………21
Unit 9：篮球的发明史…………………………………………………………23
Unit 10：尴尬的经历……………………………………………………………25
Unit 11：给父母的一封信………………………………………………………27
Unit 12：介绍中国的餐桌礼仪…………………………………………………29
Unit 13：一份调查报告………………………………………………………31
Unit 14：阐述计划中已经完成的事和尚未完成的事………………………33
Unit 15：环保行动………………………………………………………35
自主写作处……………………………………………………………….37

Unit One：1. 语言学习
小强是一位九年级的学生，他的英语很弱，需要帮助。假如你是他的朋友晓晓，请你给他写一封信，谈谈如何学好英语。词数120左右。
1、 审题
本文的格式是_________。你要写给___________________，谈谈________________。
本人的人称：______________，时态__________。
2、列提纲
主要列如何学好英语的方法，如：listen to tapes, ask the teacher for help ...
请再列出其它方法： _____

3、扩和连：（Useful expressions: ①The best way to improve your English is by doing sth. ②It’s a great way to do sth. ③Listening to tapes is a good way to ...④In my view, you can ... ⑤... is one of the one of the secrets of becoming a good language learner.. 参考连接词：first, then, what’s more, last but not the least）
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教师寄语：Where there is a will, there is a way! 有志者，事竟成！
4、 查和抄