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中间段扩展方法
1）解释原因或预测结果
①解释原因
The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood

a. It helps you to get along well with others.

If you could maintain a good mood, you would take an optimistic and positive attitude towards life. You treat your classmates or colleagues as friends rather than rivals. Thus, you cooperate with others well and are popular in your circle.

Internet or Library

a. Library is a better place to study in.

When you are in the library, with almost all the students absorbed in their studies, you will be able to concentrate on your books in such an atmosphere. You will not be distracted by the tabloid news as on the Internet.

预测结果

Examinations----Harmful or Useful?

a. Teachers will know their students better after the examinations.

Therefore, they can adjust their teaching materials and even teaching methodology accordingly.

2) 举例说明（包括运用数据）

Travel Broadens the Mind

For example, if we travel to Africa, we will find a culture totally different from that of ours, and people who think and live in a way unimaginable for us before we set foot on the continent. And we will marvel at the natural wonders, historical miracles and cultural brilliances. All these experiences help to broaden our minds.

3)进行对比

Should the Older People Live with Their Adult Children?
a. People of different age have different ways of life.

The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life; whereas the young love noises, activities, and unrestrained enjoyment.

Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

a. Writing letters costs much less than making a phone call.

To write a letter, you just need a piece of paper, a pen, an envelop and a stamp, which all together costs no more than 2 yuan. However, to make a phone call, you have to have a phone first and pay for every minute after.

Exercises

Private Tutoring---A Good Thing or a Bad Thing
In recent years, an increasing number of parents hire college students to act as private tutors to teach their kids. Like everything else, private tutoring also has advantages and disadvantages. From my viewpoint, private tutoring is more a good thing than a bad one.
First, private tutoring is helpful to the parents.________________________Besides, private tutoring is good for the tutors themselves.______________________ Most important of all, private tutoring is beneficial to kids being taught. __________
According to the above analysis, it is clear that, to a great extent, private tutoring is not only a good way to help the kids to stimulate their learning and cultivate their potential but also a good part-time choice for college students.

Private Tutoring---A Good Thing or a Bad Thing
In recent years, an increasing number of parents hire college students to act as private tutors to teach their kids. Like everything else, private tutoring also has advantages and disadvantages. From my viewpoint, private tutoring is more a good thing than a bad one.
First, private tutoring is helpful to the parents. Being so busy with their work, many parents have no time to help their children with their lessons. In fact, I was deeply impressed by this point after I had taught a Korean boy English for more than two years. Besides, private tutoring is good for the tutors themselvse. They can make some money while providing service for others. They can also enhance their teaching ability and broaden their knowledge by teaching the kids. Most important of all, private tutoring is beneficial to kids being taught. Since thr parents can’t help when the kids have problems, private tutoring seems to be a wise choice. For instance, with my tutoring, the Korean boy I mentioned just now did make great progress in English speaking, writing and reading.
According to the above analysis, it is clear that, to a great extent, private tutoring is not only a good way to help the kids to stimulate their learning and cultivate their potential but also a good part-time choice for college students.