英语中考作文及遣词造句教案.doc

写好中考英语作文的五个步骤
书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查，涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容，以下就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导：
　　一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式
　　时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。
　　说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。
　　根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。
　　如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。
　　如ago，last…——过去时
　　next，in…——将来时等
　　人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。
　　例如：Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English.
　　其中we和our就是人称的统一。
　　格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
　　二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点
　　切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。
　　根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。
　　特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
　　三、成文时表述正确，文字流畅
　　切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
　　首先考虑句子结构（如主谓宾，主系表等）。
　　同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
　　四、文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
　　考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。
　　常用连接词：
　　1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…
　　And then，Finally，In the end，At last
　　2.表并列补充关系的：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition
　　3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，but
　　Although+clause（ 从句），In spite of+n/doing
　　On the one hand…
　　On the other hand…
　　Some…，while others…
　　4.表因果关系的：Because，As
　　So，Thus，Therefore，As a result
　　5.表换一种方式表达：In other words
　　6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；such as+n/doing
　　7.表陈述事实：In fact
　　8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion
　　9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary
　　文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
　　宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous.
　　状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment， ourhometown will become clean and beautiful.
　　动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.
　　It‘s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
　　常用状语从句句型：
　　1）时间when，not…until，as soon as
　　2）目的so that+clause；to do（ 为了）
　　3）结果so…that+clause，too…to do（太……以至于……）
　　4）条件if，unless（除非），as long as（只要）
　　5）让步though，although，even though，even if
　　no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
　　6）比较as…as…，not so…as…，than
　　五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
　　检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。
　　下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：
　　1.We live more and more comfortable.
　　改正：comfortably（副词修饰动词）
　　2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers.
　　改正：much information
　　（不可数名词由much修饰）
　　3.There has many programs in TV.
　　改正：There are many programs on TV.
　　（There be句型和介词短语）
　　4.I think ride a bike can keep our health.
　　改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.（动名词作主语）
　　建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中
作文模板
第一段：
It is well known to us that,______is becoming more and more important/popular/wonderful/interesting/successful/beautiful in our daily life. It makes our life nicer and easier. We should__________________.
第二段：Therefore, it is our duty to First of all_______________________what’s more __________________________in the end (finally )______________________.
第三段：To sum up, we should try to ________, our life will be better and better.
或者In a word, if everyone pays more attention to , our life will become better and better.

环保题目
一、书面表达
环境正在恶化。有许多种污染，其中最严重的有水污染和空气污染。水污染可以致病。写一篇短文，建议工厂不要直接往河里排放脏水，不要排放废气。80词左右。
提示词汇：pollution n. 污染gas n. 气体
suggest n. 建议 suggestion n. 建议
二、自由发挥，写一篇关于节能环保的英语短文，80词左右。
三、同学们看见有的地方水资源污染情况严重。请你根据以下表格中的提示和要求为某报纸写一篇80词左右的专稿。
水的重要性
在所有吃喝的东西中，水是最重要的，人不吃事物可以活很多天，但缺水2天就会死亡。
某些现象
有些人意识不到水的重要性，常在江河湖海里扔垃圾。有的工厂向江河湖海排放污水，造成喝水污染以至无法饮用。
你的感想
谈一谈你对保护水资源，保护人类健康的认识
必须包括以上内容，但不能逐字翻译，可以根据实际自由发挥。

范文：
How to Protect Water Resources（enviroment）
As we know, water is very important to us. There won’t be living things on the earth without water. However, there are a lot of factories pouring waste water into the rivers. They make the rivers become dirty .What's more ,more and more fish die.
Therefore, it is our duty to protect water resources. First, we should save water. For example, remember to turn off the shower while you are washing your hair. Second, we should stop the factories from pouring waste water and throwing litter into the rivers. Finally,we should tell people the importance of protecting water resources.
In short,it is very important to protect water resources.

英语学习题目
一、请根据提示，写一篇阐述英语重要性的文章。(80词左右)
1.英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言;
2.全球有4亿多人把英语作为第一语言来使用;
3.世界上有许多国家把英语作为一门外语来学习和使用;
范文：
As we know,English is becoming more and more popular.Therefore,it is very important for us to learn English well.
Firstly, English is the most widely used language in the world.,It is also used as an international language. Secondly,It’s spoken by more than 400 million people as their first language. What's more,many countries use English as a foreign language.
In a word, we must try our best to learn English well .If we can learn English well,our life will be better and better.

二、同学们， 通过几个学期的英语学习， 一定让你收获不小， 感触也不少吧！请你回忆一下自己在英语学习方面的经历和学习体会，写成一篇６０－８０词的短文。
要求：体裁不限，书写规范，语句通顺，结构完整，语法正确
三、你的英语非常优秀, 学校请你和七年级的同学们做一次英语学习经验交流。请根据下列提示，写一份80词左右的发言稿。
提示: 1.When did you begin to learn English?2.Why do you like English?
3.How do you study English well?4.take part in/join, follow the tape, keep a diary in English, remember words ...
范文：
As we know,,English is becoming more and more popular.So it is very important for us to learn English well.However ,it is difficult to learn English well.There are some useful advice for us.
Firstly,we should read English loudly everyday.It is the best time to remember words in the morning.Secondly, It is very useful to join the English club.We can not only improve our English but also make some friends.,Finally,listening to English music is also a good way to improve English..
In sum,if you try these advice,your English will be better and better.

科技产品专题
汽车、电脑、手机、因特网等科技产品为话题
As we know, Internet is becoming more and more popular.It makes our life nicer and easier.It is very important to learn Internet.
Internet can help us do a lot of thing.First,we can read news on the Internet Second,We can go shopping without leaving home. What's more,we not only can see movies but also can listen to music by Internet.
However,we should not spend too much time on the Internet because it is bad for our eyes.
In short ,if we can use the Internet properly,our life will become more and more beautiful.

不定代词专项练习
1．I don’t like this coat，could you please show me ______？
A. other B. another C. the other D. others
2．There are many people in the park，some are playing cards，some aredancing，and ____are taking a walk in it.
A. other peoples B. the others C. others D. the other people
3．I have two uncles，one is a doctor and _____ is a teacher.
A. the other B. another C. other D. another one
4．Some students hope to enter the best universities while _____ simply wants to learn skills.
A. the others B. others C. another D. the other
5．“Do you like these pants sir？” “No，please show me ______.”
A. another B. some ones C. some others D. the other
6．I have two TV set，but _____ of them is in good condition.
A. both B. none C. neither D. every
7．Walking along the streets，you can see many beautiful flowers on _____ side of the street.
A. every B. all C. both D. either
8．_____ of my parents is poor-educated，they both left school when they were 13.
A. Both B. All C. Either D. Neither
9．_____of us answered the phone，for we were all in the yard.
A. Either B. Neither C. All D. None
10．——How many monkeys are there in the cage left？ —— _____.
A. None B. No one C. Nothing D. not some
11．Some students hope to enter the best universities while _____ simply want to learn skills.
A. the others B. others C. another D. the other
考试真题：
12．I invited Joe and Linda to dinner，but _____of them came.
A. neither B. either C. none D. both
13．I had to buy ____these books because I didn‘t know which one was the best.
A. both B. none C. neither D. all
14．I have done much of the work. Could you please finish ____in two days？
A. the rest B. the other C. another D. the others
15．Both teams were in hard training； _____was willing to lose the game.
A. either B. neither C. another D. the other

Today’s focus
遣词造句解题技巧

遣词造句主要考查学生写句子的能力，最主要的是能够写出一个结构正确的简单句
全对要求：1.句子结构正确2.切合图片，使用所给的词语3.没有明显语法错误
在讲解过程中，强调每一个句子的主谓宾，树立学生简单句结构意识
注意：1.图片出现单个人，主语尽量用I，出现多人，主语尽量用we
2.所有时间词放句末
3.所给出的单词全部要用上
4.讲解四大时态时可以举同一个例句进行横向对比
(一)一般过去式
标志词：yeresday,last nignt/week/Sunday
考点注意：
1.时间词放最后
2.谓语动词变成过去式
3.一般是常见动词或者规则性动词，考到过去式不规则变化的动词主要是BE动词和go ,come等

boy, yesterday go, yesterday

heavily, last night flowers, yesterday

be ill , yesterday shop yesterday

(二)过去进行时
时间词：at four yesterday,when,while,from nine to ten yesterday
考点注意：1. 时间词放最后 2.强调谓语由was/were+Ving组成3.图片中常常会出现一个时钟，要把时钟上的时间写入句子中

yesterday, Dad,reach,Tom,read this time yesterday

Yesterday afternoon while, yesterday

when,knock

(三)一般现在时
时间词：often,everyday,every week/month,once a week,usually
考点注意：1.谓语主要一般考查第三人称单数变化2.若学生三单变化较为薄弱，可以将主语绕开三单，以第一人称或第二人称为主语，避免错误发生3.考查词组

do morning exercise,everyday often, music

yesterday, foot

often,climb

spend,every Sunday

（四）一般将来时
时间词：tomorrow,next week/month/next year,in+一段时间
考点注意：1.谓语尽量用 will+动词原形，避免用be going to，易错
2.注意现在进行时表将来的用法
school,tomorrow

shop, tomorrow weekend,fish tomorrow,go

(五)现在进行时
时间词：now
考点注意1.谓语注意用be+ving 2. 图片出现单个人，主语尽量用I，出现多人，主语尽量用we ,以减少错误的发生

talk, on the phone, now now，computer now,bird

Mike, now do some shopping, now

（六）There be 句型
考点注意：
1.图片中没有出现人，显示两件物体的空间关系
2.凡是中文可以说成“在某地有某物”的意思，都是考查there be句型
3.是时态一般为一般现在时，单件事物，be则用is,多样则are.
4.了解基本空间关系词：under,next,near,behind,on等，常考in front of 和in the front of的用法区别

computer, table under，there

there,family park,in two years
there,family

room,there

class,front

（七）常考句型、词组、词汇
1.比较级
fast,than

thin,than

Strong,than

2.情态动词
（1）常考点：should,must,can+动词原形
（2）注意切合图片，判断是肯定句还是否定句
must, read, sun should, exercise, fit must, here

can.here must,street
not, rubbish

3.be good at/be good for/be bad for
be good at, jump bad ,read

bad, health
good ，play
good,dance

4.be fond of/ like+Ving
Like,free time like,play piano,fond