山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练-短文改错+写作(60).doc

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（60）短文改错If someone asks you how you can make you always 1. happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him2. the proper answer. Do you remember the old saying “No 3. human being can really be happy who is not giving or trying4. to give happiness to others?” If you will always think of5. taking more from others and give them less, you wont be6. able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich.7. Here is an article for you. If each of you follow it,8. your unhappy day will come to an end. So you should9. learn to give up your own interests when necessarily10. 书面表达英语书面表达：介绍中国的中秋节。（100字左右）提示：1. 中秋节在9、10月到来。我们吃各种不同的月饼，如：有坚果（nut）的、肉的、蛋黄（yolk）的等等。2. 人们喜欢在露天（in the open air）边吃月饼边赏月。3. 在外工作的亲人赶回家和家人团聚，回顾过去，展望未来。1. 改you为yourself.2. 在find后加it充当形式宾语，真正宾语是后面的动词不定式，构成“主谓宾补”这一单句形式。3. 改the为a。4. 5. 去掉will,条件状语从句中用一般现在时态表示将来。6. 改give为giving，与前面taking并列。7. 在even后加if，引导让步状语。8. 改follow为follows。句子主语为each of you是单数。9. 改day为days。10. 改necessarily为necessary。该句为省去了主谓语it is的省略句，应用形容词作表语。书面表达：Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese festival. It usually comes in September or October. On that day we usually eat a big dinner and mooncakes.（It is said “Hou Yi” missed his wife, so he made mooncakes. It looks like the moon.）There are many kinds of mooncakes. They are small round cakes with meat, nuts, yolk or something sweet inside. Eating mooncakes has been our custom. Families stay outside in the open air eating mooncakes. The most important thing is looking at the moon, In the evening, the moon looks brighter and rounder. We call this moon the full moon.On that day, there will be a big family dinner which makes family members round up. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. At dinner, they can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily, so we call this day getting together.3用心 爱心 专心