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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,雅思英语,写作篇,PPT,编写：胡宇斌,CMA Training Centre,1/48,图表题,写作,W,Skills,RITING,温故知新,2/48,图表5种类型,表格,Table,线图(直线/曲线),Line graph,柱状图(条形图),Bar chart,饼图,Pie chart,流程图,Process diagram,Learn the new while reviewing the old,3/48,线图,写作,W,Skills,RITING,第 三 讲,4/48,线图主体段,写作关键点,了解主题,比较差异;,看清趋势,找出极点;,若有交叉,点出说明,。,P226,例题12,注,：,（,可写地方。,）,图表中,最高点,和,最低点,都要单独说明。,曲线,连续改变,需要说明。,对图表中多条,曲线交叉点,进行对比。,考题多为,双曲线和三曲线,（,The graph,compares,）,对,单曲线,准确描写是基础（,The graph,shows,）,5/48,复习,W,Skills,riting,1、主体段表示,时间推移短语,有哪些？,问题：,6/48,表示时间推移短语（,熟记,）,：,At first,(=,initially,),Then,After that,From this point onwards,Finally(=,eventually,),（,不要老是使用,at 6 oclock,at 8 oclock,来开始一个句子。,),7/48,复习,W,Skills,riting,2、主体段,表示趋势动词,有哪些？,上升-下降-不变-波动,(见 P215,P218 趋势图）,问题：,8/48,表示趋势短语-,动词,（,熟记,）,：,数字趋势动词,1.,上升趋势,:rise,go up,2.,下降趋势,:fall,sink,drop,dip,reduce,go down,3.,保持不变,:remain steady,show no/little change,4.,波动,:fluctuate,趋势动词替换,1.,上升趋势,:increase,grow,climb,ascend(jump,surge,soar,shoot up),2.,下降趋势,:decline,decrease,descend(plunge,slump),3.,保持不变,:level off/out at,hover at,stabilize at,reach a plateau at,9/48,复习,W,Skills,riting,3、主体段表示趋势,形容词/副词,有哪些？,速度快-速度慢-幅度大-幅度小,问题：,10/48,表示趋势短语-,形容词,（,熟记,）,：,1.,速度快,:sharp,rapid,dramati,c,drasti,c,2.,速度慢,:gradual,slow,steady,gentle,3.,幅度大,:significant,substantial,marked,4.,幅度小,:slight,modest,moderate,注意,:,以上加,ly,均为副词。,表示分别副词是,respectively,。,11/48,复习,W,Skills,riting,4、主体段表示趋势,其它动词,有哪些？,最高点-,最低点-,到达多少-,占多少-,预测多少-,问题：,12/48,表示趋势短语-,其它,（,熟记,）,：,1.,最高点,:,peak at,reach the highest point at,2.,最低点,:,bottom out at,reach the bottom at,the lowest point at,3.,到达多少,（量）,:,reach,arrive at,amount to,hit,stand at,4.,预测,（会有）,多少,:,predict,expect,forecast,句型为,：,A is,predicted/expected/forecasted,to reach,13/48,线图主体段,写作,认真阅读,P226,主体段范文。,总结表示,升降、平稳、波动,以及,最高点,和,最低点,句型。,注意,数据,表示，放置,位置,。,14/48,回顾使用过句型,描述上升,The,period,between,10 oclock and 12 oclock,saw a slight growth,in the,number,of people in the station,with the number reaching,280,at midday,.,The,next two hours,experiences,/,witnesses,/,saw a sharp rise again,with 6 pm,arriving at,380,people.,(在哪段时间。）,15/48,回顾使用过句型,描述下降,From this point onwards,the,number,plunges to,only 100,from,2 pm to 4 pm,.,After,6 pm,the,number,falls again,reaching the lowest point of,130,at,8 pm,.,(从哪儿/何时起。）,16/48,回顾使用过句型,描述不变,At first,at 6 am,the,number,of people at the station,stands at,only 100,.,Numbers,in,the following two hours,level off at,just,under 300,people.,站上哪点。,在哪个时间段保持不变。,17/48,回顾使用过句型,描述波动,As we can see from the line graph,the,number,of people using this station,fluctuates,over these 16 hours,.,The,period,from 8 pm to 10 pm,sees a slight rise,but finally the,numbe,r of people,declines again,from,180,at,9 pm,to,135,at,10 pm,.,18/48,回顾使用过句型,描述最高点,Then,the,number,shoots up,over,the next two hours,peaking at,400,at,8 am,.,The,next two hours,experiences a sharp rise again,with 6 pm,arriving at,380,people.,19/48,回顾使用过句型,描述最低点,After that,the,number,declines rapidly,for two hours,bottoming out at,180,at,10 am,.,From this point onwards,the,number,plunges to,only 100,from,2 pm to 4 pm,.,After,6 pm,the,number,falls again,reaching the lowest point of,130,at,8 pm,.,20/48,line chart/curve diagram 主体段,模版:,The line chart,compares,the,rate,of _.,It can,be clearly seen,that _.,Male smokers,.,In contrast,female smokers,.,To conclude,we can see that_.,A comparison of shows that while .,A comparative study of shows that while .,21/48,引用数据,方法,W,Skills,RITING,句子写作巩固,22/48,你知道吗？,W,Skills,riting,图表主体段写作，第一句话是主题句，支持句,介绍数据时要详尽,。,请看例句：,23/48,图表,引用数据,句型：,1.,The number,picked up,in June,rocketing,by almost 500%.,2.,There was,a marked improvement,in July,with the number of,visitors,surging,400%.,3.,The period,between May and September,saw a steady growth,in the number of,visitors from 70,000 to 140,000.,4.,The gradual rise,in visitor numbers,from 30,000 to approximately 45,000 in the first four months,was followed by,a sharper increase,in May.,24/48,怎样,统计数据,W,Skills,riting,There,表示-1：,从早上6点到8点看电视人数有个小小增加,由3%到7%。,25/48,怎样,统计数据,W,Skills,riting,There was,a slight rise,in the number of,TV audiences,from,about 3%,at,6:00 am,to,about 7%,at,8 am.,表示-1：,从早上6点到8点看电视人数有个小小增加,由3%到7%。,26/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,The percentage,表示-2：,百分率一直大幅下滑，到早上8点最低降到约45%。,27/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,The percentage,declined,substantially until,8:00 am,bottoming out at,about 45%.,表示-2：,百分率一直大幅下滑，到早上8点最低降到约45%。,28/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,The next,.,表示-3：,接下来两个小时，数字又巨幅攀升，中午时分最高到达280。,29/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,The next two hours,witnessed,a dramatic rise,in the number,again,with the number,reaching 280 at midday,.,表示-3：,接下来两个小时，数字又巨幅攀升，中午时分最高到达280。,30/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,However,.,表示-4：,然而在一天其它时间，听收音机百分比要比看电视百分比低很多。,31/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,However,for the rest of the day,the percentage,of radio,was,much lower than,that of,TV,.,表示-4：,然而在一天其它时间，听收音机百分比要比看电视百分比低很多。,32/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,The price,.,表示-5：,价格在1994年急剧下挫，不过很快恢复到了原来水平，最终冲上新高点。,33/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,The price,plunged dramatically,in 1994,but then it,regained its previous level,before,soaring to a new peak,.,表示-5：,价格在1994年急剧下挫，不过很快恢复到了原来水平，最终冲上新高点。,34/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,In spite of,.,表示-6：,尽管价格波动很大，但趋势显著向上。,35/48,统计数据,句型,W,Skills,riting,In spite of the,sharp fluctuations,in the price,the trend was obviously upwards,.,表示-6：,尽管价格波动很大，但趋势显著向上。,36/48,线图主体段练习,P,222,例题9,图一,怎样改写首段?,The graph,shows how,the,amount,of water used world wide changed between 1900 to.,本题假如是一个图：,主体段能够写三段（,一个元素写一段,），,也可写两段（,类似合起来写,）。,如有两个图，本图就只写一段，以下：,37/48,参考范文：,Throughout the century,the largest quantity,of water was used for agricultural purposes,and this,increased dramatically,from about,500,km,3,to around,3,000,km,3,in the year.,（,介绍农业用水情况-,最高值,）,Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors,also increased,but consumption,was minimal,until,mid-century,.,（,工业和家庭用水情况-,相同值,）,From,1950,onwards,industrial use,grew steadily,to just over,1,000,km3,while domestic use,rose more slowly,to only,800,km3,both,far below the levels,of consumption by agriculture.,（,工业和家庭,与农业,相比较,）,38/48,线图主体段,课后,练习,P,221,例题8,怎样改写首段?（见,P221,),(,先口头用汉语描述。,）,1、写几段？,2、怎么写？,39/48,原文,-开首段,W,Skills,riting,【,修改,】,The,three,curves,given in the line graph,show,us the percentage of the,aged,people 65 and above in,Japan,Sweden and USA,from 1940 to 2040.,These curves indicate us the percentage of the people above 65 in,some,countries during the period from 1940 to 2040.,We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.,40/48,原文,主体段-1,W,Skills,riting,The proportion of population aged above 65 in USA,were increasing,slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9%to 10%),after which,there,is,a sudden rise to,15%in,1980s,.After that,the percentage began to fall gradually until,the,number at that time,is estimately,14%.The next,several,years will see,a,increase to about 17%,and then,rocket,to 23%in the last 10 years.,41/48,修改,主体段-1,W,Skills,riting,The proportion of aged population in USA,increased,slowly from 1940 to 1960(from 9%to 10%).,Then,there,was,a sudden rise to 15%in 1980.,After that,the percentage began to fall gradually until（,14%,）.The next,20,years can be seen a drastic increase,rocket,ing,to 23%in the year 2040.,42/48,原文,主体段-2,W,Skills,riting,The trend,in,Sweden is similar to that,of,USA,it,(,代什么？,串句,。,),began at 7%in 1940,a bit less than that of USA,and increased to 9%,until,1962,.,Then,just like the change of USA,the proportion climbed,more fast,and plateaued at 15%in,1980s,.,Yes theres,a little difference from the States that the curve,sores,after a short period,gradual decline,until and reach 20%,(,有吗？看错图啦！,),which is much higher than the USA,at same time.,(,不准确,),In the last 10 years,elder,Swedes increased rapidly,after a 10 year decline,(,看错图啦！,),and,will,(,主语是啥？,),peak at 26%.,43/48,修改,主体段-2,W,Skills,riting,The trend,of,Sweden,，,at first,，,is similar to that of USA,.With its starting percentage,at 7%in 1940,a bit less than that of USA,it increased,to 14%,in,1980,.Then,unlike,the,downward trend,of USA,the Sweden proportion,continued to,climb,until it,reached,15%,in,and 17%,in,.,Afterwards,the Sweden curve,soared,peak,ing,at,24%,in 2040.,44/48,原文,主体段-3,W,Skills,riting,Japanese saw a,consist,a,nt,（,坚实；可靠,),decrease form 5%in 1940 to 3%in 1960,and kept this level for,25,years.,(,怎样算？,),Then began,to rise gradually to,10%,until,2030,(,不确切,),prospectively,(,adv.可能；潜在；预期,).,A dramatically,rising,will be seen in the next,2,years,(,？,),which,will lead the percentage to,25%,.,Finally,the,proportion of Japanese,will end at,(,？,),27%in 2040,.,(,画不出图来。,),45/48,修改,主体段-3,W,Skills,riting,Japan,curve,saw a,slight,decrease form 5%,in 1940 to 3%in 1960,and,remained stable,until 1980.,Then,the proportion,began to,pick up,reaching,5%in,and 8%,in,.,After that,there is a,dramatic,rise,in the next,20,years,lead,ing,the percentage to 27%in 2040.,(,能出,画图。,),46/48,参考：,This chart illustrates the percentage of elder people aged 65 and more in three countries,namely Japan,Sweden and USA from a period of 100 years(1940-2040).It indicates that by 2040,the senior will reach to approximately 20-28%in all these three countries.,In 1940,the percentage of the senior people aged 65 or more stood at 5%in Japan,7%in Sweden and 9%in USA,respectively.Both the proportion of the aged population in the western countries increased(Sweden from 6%to 14%,and USA from 9%to15%)after 40 years,while that in Japan decreased(from 5%to 3%).However,the USA proportion,unlike that of Sweden,which kept consistent upward climb to 24%,showed a downward trend afterwards,and remained this trend until before it surged to 21%in 2040.As for Japan,it had a slight increase,regaining its 5%in,and jumping to 8%in,and finally rocketing to 28%in 2040.,Its predicted that the percentage of population aged 65 and over in all these three countries will ascend dramatically after the year,especially in 2030 and 2040.And the proportion of Japan will climb straightly from 8%to 25%in 20 years between and 2040.,47/48,参考：,These curves indicate us the percentage of the people above 65 in some countries during the period from 1940 to 2040.We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.,The proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9%to 10%),after which there is a sudden rise to 15%in 1980s.After that,the percentage began to fall gradually until,the number at that time is estimately 14%.The next several years will see a increase to about 17%,and then rocket to 23%in the last 10 years.,The trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA,it began at 7%in 1940,a bit less than that of USA,and increased to 9%until 1962.Then,just like the change of USA,the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15%in 1980s.Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until and reach 20%,which is much higher than the USA at same time.In the last 10 years,elder Swedes increased rapidly after a 10 year decline,and will peak at 26%.,Japanese saw a consistant decrease form 5%in 1940 to 3%in 1960,and kept this level for 25 years.Then began to rise gradually to 10%until 2030 prospectively.A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years which will lead the percentage to 25%.Finally,the proportion of Japanese will end at 27%in 2040.,To a sum,all the 3 countries keep the up rising trend ganerally.But the proportion of Japanese will take the lead finally,though it began with a very low level.After all,these,These curves indicate us the percentage of the people above 65 in some countries during the period from 1940 to 2040.We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.,The proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9%to 10%),after which there is a sudden rise to 15%in 1980s.After that,the percentage began to fall gradually until,the number at that time is estimately 14%.The next several years will see a increase to about 17%,and then rocket to 23%in the last 10 years.,The trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA,it began at 7%in 1940,a bit less than that of USA,and increased to 9%until 1962.Then,just like the change of USA,the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15%in 1980s.Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until and reach 20%,which is much higher than the USA at same time.In the last 10 years,elder Swedes increased rapidly after a 10 year decline,and will peak at 26%.,Japanese saw a consistant decrease form 5%in 1940 to 3%in 1960,and kept this level for 25 years.Then began to rise gradually to 10%until 2030 prospectively.A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years which will lead the percentage to 25%.Finally,the proportion of Japanese will end at 27%in 2040.,To a sum,all the 3 countries keep the up rising trend ganerally.But the proportion of Japanese will take the lead finally,though it began with a very low level.After all,these countries are all getting in to the AGED society in prospect.(302 words,22mins),48/48,