分类写作词汇句式学习一邀请信.docx

分类写作词汇句式学习一邀请信（Mr.Xu编 2015/11/7）
一、【必备词语】

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1. the nursing home敬老院
2. show our respect表现我们的尊敬
3. gain a better understanding获得更好的理解
4. a romantic story 一个浪漫故事
5. sincerely真诚地
6. be familiar with对……熟悉
7. art gallery艺术馆
8. judge裁判
9. speech contest演讲比赛
10. deliver one's speech 做演讲
11. is convenient for sb./sth. 对…．方便
12. locate位于
13. promote students' interest提高学生的兴趣
14. theme主题
15. partiapant参与者，选手
16. compete with sb.和某人竞争比赛
Tips：疯狂记背及朗读
17. feel honored 觉得荣幸

二、好句朗诵
1. l'm now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it,if you can spare thetime．我代表同学写信邀请您来参加，如果您能抽出时问的话。
2. l'm sure that you'll have a good time staying with us．我相信您会和我们一起度过愉快的时光。
3．Looking forward to your coming.期待着您的到来。
4. We would feel much honored if you could come.如果您能来，我们会觉得非常幸。
5. If you have any suggestions, please let us know.如果您有任何建议，请告诉我们。
6.I sincerely invite you to watch the show because...我诚挚地邀请您来看演出，因为……
7. You can reach me through my phone number44876655 at your convenience.
Tips：疯狂记背及朗读
您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话，号码是44876655。
8.I wonder if you'd like to go with me.找想知道您是否想和我一起去。
三、单句改错（每句只有一个错误）
1. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenience for you.
2. Let me know as soon as possible that you are able to come or not.
3. Since you are such eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
4. l've read in the paper about a five-days tour, which I think suits you, so now l'd like to recommend it to you.
5. CCTY is inviting foreign students to perform at the Spring Festival Gala, that will be held at CCTV Station on the evening of February 9, the Chinese New Year’s Eve.
6. Please let me to know as soon as possible so that I can make some arrangements.
7. l'm writing to tell you we'II have an English Corner active which will take place in the library on Saturday afternoon.
8. We have never been abroad ago, so we are very interested in what it is like in your country.
9. This is Li Hua, a monitor of Class Two, Grade Three of GuangMing High School.
10. Therefore, to make it a success, we would like to invite you to be our guide, give us some help wrth our spoken English.
四、真题满分佳作赏析
【2012全国2卷：邀请外教参加生日聚会】
假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：
1．时间：周五晚8点至9点
2．地点：学生俱乐部
3．内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
4．要求：备小礼物
满分佳作（一）
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.
①Just as the name suggests, the party is still kepta secret from him, This Friday evening, we'II gather atthe Students' Club at 8 pm to celebrate his 18thbirthday.②l'm now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it, If you can spare the time.
③The details of the celebration, which will last about an hour until 9 pm, are as follows. ④At the start,the candle will be lighted and we'll sing "Happy Birthday” together for him, after which we'll enjoy the birthday cake and have fun together, playing games and singing songs. ⑤1'm sure that you'll have a good time staying with us.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分赏析
①Just as the name suggests(正如名字所说一样)，语言运用地道，很自然地引出细节。
②用到l'm now writing on behalf oLto…（我代表……写信……），句式高级地道，点明写信目的；if you can spare the time又显示出交际中的礼貌，十分得体。
③用到了which引导的定语从句；...are as follows也是很好的引出列举的主题句。注意：follows不要漏了s，否则效果会归零。
④用after which介词提前的定语从句和playing games and singing songs现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显得高级，句法复杂度高。
⑤本句是作者添加的细节，详略得当，内容合适。
满分佳作（二）
Hi， Susan
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.
As scheduled, all the classmates in our class will gather at the Students' Centre at 8 pm this Friday evenrng to celebrate Xiaoming's birthday.①We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it, which is to finish at 9, lasting an hour. As the partystarts, we will light the candles and sing "Happy Birthday" for him. ②Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy, following which we'll sing songs and play some small games.③What‘s more, as a surprise, we'll all prepare some secretbirthday gifts for him, and it'll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts. ④As it's a surprise party, he will know nothing about it beforehand, and we do hope that you could manage to attend it.
⑤Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分赏析
①We would feel much honored if you could语气委婉礼貌，句式高级，用would和could的过去式更体现出客气语气，且用到Jwhich引导的定语从句和lasting...现在分词，体现句法能力。
②following which…是一大亮点，现在分词短语中包含一句定语从句。
③用what's more连接自然，条理清楚；用and有效地整合了信息。
④本句是自己添加的内容合适，且用do强调，更显邀请的诚意。
⑤这是写信的必备用语，必须做到零差错。
【模仿翻译】
【2007湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人】
作文原题
假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经常举办联谊活动，你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请园际学校的学生参加。请根据以下内容要点给国际学校的学生会主席Tony写一封信。
要点：向老人赠送礼物（鲜花、自制贺卡……）；
为老人提供服务（做清洁、陪老人聊 天……）：
为老人表演节目（唱歌、跳舞……）。
练习：作文翻译
亲爱的Tony，
重阳，中国传统的老人节日，即将到来。我们计划去敬老院庆祝这特别的日子，我们也想邀请你们学校的学生加入我们。
我们计划了几项活动。当我们到达那里时，我们会分小组在老人们的房间拜访他们，给他们送花和自制的卡片，以表达我们的尊重和爱。然后，我们会在护士的帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。
因为有些老人觉得孤单，我们可以和他们聊他们以前的日子、我们城市的变化、或者他们感兴趣的任何事情。我们也可以给他们一些表演，例如唱歌、跳舞等等。我坚信我们都会对中国的老年人有更好的理解。如果你有任何建议，请让我知道。
期待着你及早的回复。
你的，
李华