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短文改错学案（20180509）
班级 姓名
Task1. 单句改错
1. When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.（2015全国卷Ⅰ）
2. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem.（2015全国卷Ⅰ）
3. It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some People even had to wait outside.（2016全国卷Ⅰ）
4. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking. （2016全国卷Ⅰ）
5. Poisonous smoke and gas producing by the increasing number of cars on our roads are now a major cause of breathing problems.（2018泉州1检）
6. The government has been realized how serious the problem has become.（2018泉州1检）
7. I got my diploma, feel really fantastic.（2018泉州2检）
8. After we had our diplomas,we all throw our graduation caps in the air.（2018泉州2检）
9. Mao Zhaomu drop out of high school several years ago. （2018省质检）
10. To seize every chance to study English, he would memorize words while wait for customers. （2018省质检）
错误类型自主归纳：___________________________
11. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. （2015全国卷Ⅰ）
12. Cars are one of the leading cause of air pollution in the world today.（2018泉州1检）
13. Some people gave speech and then they presented awards.（2018泉州2检）
14. Now the self-taught English learner has been admitted to one of China’s top foreign language university.（2018省质检）
错误类型自主归纳：___________________________
15. We must find ways to protect your environment. （2015全国卷Ⅰ）
16. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books.（2016全国卷Ⅱ）

17. And he chatted happily with English learners online during her spare time.（2018省质检）
18. Next, they handed us their diplomas.（2018泉州2检）
错误类型自主归纳：___________________________
19. Much rare animals are dying out.（2015全国卷Ⅰ）
20. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”（2015全国卷Ⅱ）
21. Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady.（2016全国卷Ⅰ）
22. I remember my high school graduation very much.（2018泉州2检）
23. I had a wonderfully day.（2018泉州2检）
24. There were much grammatical mistakes,but that didn’t prevent him from chatting.（2018省质检）
25. I was true delighted when I finally made it.（2018泉州3检）
错误类型自主归纳：___________________________
26. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. （2014全国卷Ⅰ）
27. My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time.(2016全国卷Ⅰ)
28. That’s a interesting tradition.（2018泉州2检）
29. Last week, my friend Tony invited me to have traditional Chinese meal with his family.（2018泉州3检）
错误类型自主归纳：___________________________
30. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. （2015全国卷Ⅰ）
31. They have done so in the hope that people will take notice the problems caused by poisonous smoke and gas from. （2018泉州1检）
32. Besides my family, a lot of my aunts,uncles and cousins came the ceremony.（2018泉州2检）
33. Mao once worked a delivery man for a restaurant.（2018省质检）
34. Tony’s mother put various foods which were unfamiliar with me onto the plates.（2018泉州3检）

错误类型自主归纳：___________________________
35. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.（2015全国卷Ⅰ）
36. My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. （2016全国卷Ⅰ）
37. Though not very big ,but the Restaurant is popular in our area.（2016全国卷Ⅰ）
38. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. （2016全国卷Ⅱ）
39. Health officials, noticing an increase in the number of people with breathing-related diseases, has warned the public. （2018泉州1检）
40. It has been encouraging people to walk, cycling or make better use of the underground system.（2018泉州1检）
41. While we stood in line to receive them, and my mother took a lot of photos.（2018泉州2检）
42. He has been admitted to one of China’s top foreign language universities, Sichuan International Studies University, that he used to deliver food to students.（2018省质检）
43. Having tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. （2013全国卷Ⅱ）
44. Mao said that how he hoped very much to become an interpreter.（2018省质检）
45. Whoever have a dream and dares to seek it is the loveliest person.（2018省质检）
错误类型自主归纳：__________________________
46. Health officials ......have warned the public. He have done so in the hope that people will take notice of the problems. （2018泉州1检）
47. .... I finally made it. Therefore, my fingers suddenly lost control of the chopsticks.....（2018泉州3检）

错误类型自主归纳：_________________________

Task2.比较表1和表2找出共性

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Task3. 根据双向细目表把下面书面表达范文改编为短文改错练习

高考英语短文改错双向细目表
内容领域
能力维度
分值
及
权重
题型
一级指标
二级指标
记
忆
(1)
理
解
(2)
应
用
(3)
分
析
(4)
评
价
(5)
创
造
(6)
10

7%
短文改错
写作
短文改错
（1）纠正冠词错误

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（2）纠正名词错误

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（3）纠正代词错误

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（4）纠正介词错误

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（5）纠正连词错误

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（6）纠正形容词、副词错误

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（7）纠正动词时态、语态错误

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（8）纠正动词非谓语形式错误

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（9）纠正情态动词错误

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（10）纠正句子结构错误

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（11）纠正主谓一致错误

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（12）纠正从句引导词错误

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（13）纠正词性错误

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（14）纠正行文逻辑错误

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Hi John,
Knowing that you’re interested in tea, I have good news for you. The 9th International Tea Culture Festival will be held in Ningbo from May 3 to 6. I’d like to invite you to the festival, where you can taste all kinds of tea from across the world and enjoy tea art shows.
China has a long history of tea planting. Tea has become a healthy and popular drink in our daily life. People will serve you with tea when you visit their homes. I’m sure you’d have lots of fun here. I really hope you’d come and experience Chinese tea culture.
Best,
Li Hua

Homework：Finish off the exercises
（2017全国卷Ⅱ）
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
（2017全国卷Ⅲ）
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
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