专项研讨课教案.doc

2015年扬州市中考英语复习研讨会

How to better our writing

南师大第二附属初级中学 周雪峰
Teaching Aims
Knowledge aims:
1. To learn about the evaluation standards of English writing in the high school entrance examination.
2. To learn how to better our English writing according to the standards.
Ability aims:
1. To improve the students’ writing ability.
2. To develop the students’ ability of analysis.
Emotion aims:
To develop the stduents’ interest in writing in English.
Important points
1. To write sentences well.
2. To write a composition well.
Difficult points
1. How to write in advanced sentence patterns.
2. How to combine sentences well.
Teaching procedures :
Illustrations
Step 1: Lead-in
Present the evaluation standards of English writing in the high school entrance examination.
Step 2. Discussion
Discuss How to get higher marks in writing according to the evaluation
standards of English writing in the high school entrance examination.
1.To cover all the main points and details.
2.To write sentences well.
3.To combine sentences well.
4.To check the composition carefully.
5.To write neatly.
Step 3.Lean to write by an example composition
上周你班就青少年是否应该听从父母的建议这一话题展开了讨论，不同的学生有不同观点。请根据图表，以Should teenagers take their parents' advice?为题写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们的观点，并发表自己的看法。
赞成者
反对者
1.尊重父母，否则他们不高兴
1.父母观点陈旧
2.父母有经验，能帮助自己
2.自己决定能提高自己
3…
3…
你的观点和理由。。。（理由至少两点）
注意：1.词数100左右，文章开头已给，不计入总词数。2.短文需包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥。3.字迹工整，条理清楚，行文连贯。 4.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
Should teenagers take their parents' advice?
Last week, the students in our class had a discussion about whether teenagers should take their parents' advice. Different students had different ideas.
Before-writing:
1.To cover all the main points and details.
(1) Better our paragraphs(段落)
Agreements ---Para 1
Main points Disagreements ---Para 2
My opinions ---Para 3
(2) Better our details
① Respect parents
Agreements ② Experienced Parents
③ …
④ Parents’ out-of-date ideas
Main points Disagreements ⑤ Improve ourselves
⑥ …
⑦ …
My opinions
⑧ …
While-writing:
2.To write sentences well.
(3) Better our sentences
eg: 父母有经验，能帮助自己
Our parents are experienced. They can help us.
★Our parents are experienced and they can help us.
★Our parents can help us because they are experienced.
★Our parents are experienced enough to help us.
★Our parents are so experienced that they can help us.
★The older, the wiser. Our parents are experienced and they can help us.
★As an old saying goes, “Old birds are not caught with new nests”. Our
parents are experienced and they can help us.
3.To combine sentences well.
(4) Better our coherence
★表文章结构顺序：
★表并列补充(递进)关系的：
★表转折对比关系的：
★陈述正反方的观点：
★表示原因和结果的：
★表达自己观点：
After-writing:
4.To check the composition carefully.
Find out the mistakes and correct them in Part 3.
5.To write neatly.
(5) Better our handwriting
Step 4. Try to better the passage in Part 4.
Step 5. Evaluation
Ask two students to show their passage. Then correct them in class
according to the standards. One by the teacher and the other by a student.
Step 6.Homework:
Better one of your compositions;

This step can help the students to have a clear picture of the whole class at the very beginning.

This exercise enables the students to find out what is the most important in writing.

This is a very open process,
which allows students to use their creation freely.

This develop the students’ analysing ability and writing ability greatly.