观点类作文模板和常规功能句.doc

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观点类作文
观点类作文需要考生对比阐述两种观点或做法及各自的理由，然后表明自己的观点或做法并说明理由。
【常见结构公式陈列】
第一段 观点或选择A
①简述要讨论的主题，引出对其的不同观点或选择When it comes to 谈论的主题，there is no complete agreement among people。②Some people think/prefer to/choose 观点或选择A。③观点或选择的第一点理由。④观点或选择的第二点理由。
第一段 观点或选择A
① 主题句：提出要讨论的主题，引出两种不同的观点或选择。
② 扩展句一：指出一种观点或选择。
③ 扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第一点
理由。
④ 扩展句三：阐述该种观点或选择的第二点
理由。
第二段 观点或选择B
⑤ However, there are many others who观点或选择B。⑥In their opinions/They maintain/they point out观点或选择B的第一点理由。⑦Besides, 观点或选择B的第二点理由。
第二段 观点或选择B
⑤ 主题句：转折引出另一种观点或选择。
⑥ 扩展句一：阐述该种观点或选择的第一
点理由。
⑦ 扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第二
点理由。
第三段“我”的观点或选择
⑧As for me, I agree“我”的观点或选择。/Weighing up these two arguments/choices, “我”的观点或选择。⑨“我”的第一点理由。⑩“我”的第二点理由。（11）Therefore/To conclude, 作出总结。
第三段 “我”的观点或选择
⑧ 主题句：综合两种观点或选择，表明“我“的观点或选择。
⑨ 扩展句一：阐述“我“的第一点理由。
⑩ 扩展句二“阐述“我”的第二点理由。
⑪ 结尾句：经常是提出建议或作出展望。

对比论证段
【基本句型构造】
对比论证段的基本句型构造是：先用2-3句话阐述第一种观点或选择的理由；然后再通过一个转折句引出第二种观点或选择，再用2-3句话阐述第二种观点或选择的理由。
【功能句常规写法】
1. 提出不同观点
1) Opinions vary from individual to individual.
2) Different people hold different attitudes towards it.
3) There are mainly two opposite opinions about whether it’s necessary to…
4) When it comes to …, people have (take, adopt)different attitudes towards it.

2. 提出或论证第一种观点
1) Some people hold the view that it’s still worth learning from Lei Feng in modern society.
2) Some people insist that…
3) Most people subscribe to the view that…
4) Quiet a few people strongly believe that …

3. 提出或论证相反观点
1) However, still some other people/others think differently/do not agree with this/hold the opposite opinion.
2) However, there are many other s who do not favor…
3) …while others don’t think so.
4)… while others think of it negatively.
5) … while others think otherwise.
6) On the contrary, some people argue that …

4. 表明观点、倾向或选择
1) Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the first/former/second/latter one.
2) Weighing up these two arguments, I think…
3) Weighing up the advantages and disadvantages, I think…
4) Considering the above-mentioned, I insist…
5) As for me/Personally, I am in favor of…
6) As for me, I will give my vote to…
7) As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
8) As for me, I side with the supporters of…
9) Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.
10) As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.

5. 总结观点
1) All the above-mentioned tell us that…
2) Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that…
3) From the above-mentioned, we can conclude that …
4) From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that…
5) To conclude/In a word, it is every citizen’s responsibility to …
6) In general, the advantages of … far outweigh its disadvantages.
7) But, in sum, …does more good than harm. Therefore, I think…
8) Based on the description above, we can draw the conclusion that…
9) In short, it can be said that ….

【黄金格作文】
(1) 对比观点式
【黄金格作文1】
The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing …. They point out the fact that 支持… 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持… 的另一个原因。
　　However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do …. The reasons they have are as follows. Firstly,… What’s more,… Finally,…
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of … overweigh the disadvantages…../I think it may bring about more negative effects….
【黄金格作文2】
Nowadays many people prefer…because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(…的优点之一). Besides -------------------（…的优点之二）.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(…的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(…的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of …, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)
【黄金格作文3】
One of the controversial issues today is ____________. According to a recent survey, ____________. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it.
　On the positive aspect, one of the most significant advantages is that ____________________(优点一). Moreover, _________________________________(优点二). Perhaps the primary advantage is that ___________________________.(优点三)
On the negative aspect, for one thing, _________________________________.(缺点一) For another, ___________________________________.(缺点二)
　　As far as I’m concerned, the benefits of ___________(主题) greatly outweigh its drawbacks. We should make better use of ____________(主题) and bypass its negative effects.
(As for me, I side with the supporters of …)

（2）个人观点式
【黄金格作文1】
　　Some people believe （argue, recognize, think） that观点1….But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that观点2…As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are several reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1…. More importantly,
论据2…. Most important of all, 论据3….
　　In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
【黄金格作文】
　　People hold different views about …. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1….while others point out that 观点2….As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
　　For one thing, 论据1….For another, 论据2…. Last but not the least, 论据3….
　　To conclude, 总结观点. As a student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
【黄金格作文2】
　　There is no consensus of opinions among people about …（争论的焦点）Some people are of the view that 观点1….while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2….As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
　　First of all, 论据1. …Furthermore, 论据2…. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3….
　　A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点
　　As a student, I am supposed to 表决心 或 From above, we can predict that 预测

【佳作欣赏1】
Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed?
1.有人做好事期望得到回报。
2.有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报。
3.你的观点。
Nowadays, different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward. They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness. Also, rewards can stimulate people’s enthusiasm to do good deeds.
However, there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and are always ready to help others without expecting any reward. Everyone may be in trouble. Only if you help others unselfishly, can you get others’ help when you need it. Besides, they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds, which is the best return.
Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the second one. First, helping others is one of Chinese people’s traditional virtues. Second, this virtue is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society. To conclude, it is every citizen’s responsibility to do good deeds without expecting any reward.

【佳作欣赏2】
Should Text Books Be Recycled?
1. 一些人认为循环使用教科书非常必要。
2. 另一些人则不赞成循环使用教科书。
3. 你的看法。
Should Text Books Be Recycled?
Nowadays there is a heated debate as to whether text books should be recycled. There is no doubt that recycling books brings about many advantages. Above all, recycling textbooks can reduce waste. Thus, we can leave more resources to the next generation. Furthermore, students can buy the recycled textbooks at a low price, which means less stress on those relatively less rich parents.
As every coin has two sides, recycling textbooks has also some disadvantages. For one thing, some of the recycled textbooks are very dirty, so parents worry that a health danger may exist in the recycled textbooks. For another, notes on the recycled textbooks may disturb the next user and draw the user’s attention away from the textbooks.
Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I think textbooks should be recycled under some conditions. Undoubtedly, many people will be in favor of the recycled textbooks if the quality of these textbooks can be guaranteed. But it is worth noting that costs related to the recycling of textbooks should be controlled in an accepted range.

【佳作欣赏3】
目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：
有些人认为有必要
另一些人认为没有必要
有老师辅导比自己学好
有更多机会和老师互动
可以弥补上课错过或没听懂的东西
容易养成依赖习惯
学生需要时间休息和娱乐
导致有的学生在常规课堂上不认真听讲
请您根据以上提示，以Are Training Classes or tutors Necessary ?为题，写一篇150 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：家庭教师：tutor 要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。
Nowadays, more and more middle school students attend training classes or hire tutors to teach them at the weekend. Different people hold different opinions toward it.
Some think it necessary to do so. Firstly, it’s more effective to study with a teacher’s help than by themselves. Secondly, you can have more chances to communicate with teachers. Besides, you can make up for what you miss or fail to understand in classes on weekdays.
Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time for rest and recreation at weekend. What’s worse, attending training classes or hiring tutors even causes some students not to listen attentively in their regular classes.
In my opinion, whether a training class or tutor is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.

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