1、Practical writingPractical writingThe Beauty of Writing 文章定档文章定档 颜值当道颜值当道外在美外在美 开头开头美美词汇美词汇美衔接美衔接美表达美前提:前提:黄金黄金比例比例认真的态度(追求极致认真的态度(追求极致)规范的书写(不得连写规范的书写(不得连写)整体的美感(格式布局)整体的美感(格式布局)比例一比例一:(字母大小长短字母大小长短)比例比例二二:(字母、单词、句子的间距字母、单词、句子的间距)字母圆润字母圆润间隔间隔均匀均匀横横平平且平行竖直竖直且平行拐润拐润且平行倾斜倾斜且平行外在美:第一印象很重要!书写清楚,字母匀称,词、行
2、间距适当,卷面整洁。不不要要连连写写!Practice Practice makes Progress!makes Progress!Practice Practice makes Progress!makes Progress!Practice Practice makes Progress!makes Progress!开头美开头美Well begun,half done.How is everything going?As you are interested in the Chines customs at table,I am more than glad to expose you
3、 to the fantastic culture of China.书信通知书信开头:倡议报道应用文分类书信报道邀请函道歉信感谢信申请信投诉信询问信建议信推荐信倡议书书面通知口头通知通知套路是关键得体很重要提炼题干信息提炼题干信息,开门见山,开门见山,说明写信目说明写信目的的,反复修改,避免任何反复修改,避免任何错误错误。lettersAbout(1)I was _(高兴高兴)to _(收到你的信)收到你的信).(2)What a _it was to get a letter from you!(1)I was _(形容词形容词)to hear(2)With_(名词)(名词)I learn
4、ed(3)_(得知得知)that,I am willing to(1)一切都好吗一切都好吗?(2)How are you _(进展进展)?(3)Its a long time since I _(see)you last tim(4)I _(miss)you a lot since getting on with sawhave missedHow is everything going?more than glad hear from yousurprisedelighteddelight Hearing 书信邀请函得体很重要套路是关键1.邀请函假定你是李华,计划,请给你的英国朋友写封邮件邀
5、请他参加。1.Imwritingto_(邀请)youto_(参加).2.Imgreatly_(honor)toextendtoyouan_to.3._isagreatpleasuretoinviteyoutoattend4.Wereplanningandwonder_youwouldliketojoinus./youareinterested./youcanbesokindastoparticipateinthisactivity.invitehonoredinvitationifItjoin us inHowiseverythinggoing?Imgoingtoorganizeamounta
6、inclimbing,whichIbelievecanbeveryexcitingandmeaningfulandIamwonderingifyoucanbesokindastoparticipateinthisactivity.假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。实战演习邀请信1第一节:应用文写作(满分15分)假如你是国际班的班长李华,你打算邀请外教Bruce到你们班作一个西方文化知识讲座。现请你给他写一封邀请信。反复改进Dear Mr BruceI am the monitor of the country class,I hope you can
7、 come to make a knowlege speech.Dear BruceI m Li Hua the monitor of the internation class.I hope you can coming to attend our culture knowledge speech.反复改进Our class is scheduled to hold a Western Culture knowledge lecture.I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the culture of Western c
8、ountry.Im Li Hua,the monitor of the international class.I think it would be a great idea if you could give us a lecture about the culture of west.反复改进Im Li Hua,the monitor of the international class.It is with the greatest pleasure that I write to early invite you to give us a lecture on Westen cult
9、ure.Im Li Hua,the monitor in our International Class.My classmates are very interested in Western Culture,so Im writing to invite you to give us a lecture about it.Practice makes perfect!lI am Li Hua,monitor of an international class.On behalf of my classmates,I am greatly honored to attend to you a
10、n invitation to deliver a lecture about the customs and traditions in your country.Invitation letters开门见山,表明写信目的写清原因,阐述受邀人的特长或优势等(尤其在正式邀请函)写清细节,表明邀请内容如:时间,地点,具体要做什么About诚意邀请,期待回复Invitation lettersAbout(1)I would be more than happy if you could participate in(2)I look forward to your attendance.(3)We
11、 would be honored by your attendance and we look forward to seeing you there.书信2.2.道歉信套路是关键得体很重要假如你是李华,你不小心/无法。apology lettersAbout(1)Im _(十分抱歉十分抱歉)I couldnt reply to your email _ time.(2)I feel _(后悔后悔)for not _(hand)in the homework in time.(3)It is much _ my regret that I missed the chance to get t
12、ogether.(4)I sincerely(道歉)(道歉)_.terribly sorryregretfulinapologizetohanding道歉信假如你是李华,作为交换生(anexchangestudent)正在英国WindmillCollege学习。今天早上你骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于急着上学,你无法在原地等候车主,请留一张便条。DearSir/Madam,ImLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina,studyingatWindmillCollege.Imsosorrythatmybikescratchedyourcaracciden
13、tallywhenIwasridingtoschoolthismorning.apology letters开门见山,表明写信目的提出弥补办法解释原因,表明诚挚的歉意(最好把sorry/apology/apologize都用一次)About再次道歉,请求谅解/原谅apology lettersAbout(1)Please excuse/forgive me for(2)Once again,please accept my sincere apology.(3)Anyhow,I sincerely hope that 实战演习道歉信你是李华,与同学王明约好到他家讨论将要举行的英语演讲比赛,但是
14、在路上目睹一起交通事故,并把伤者送往医院,没能赴约。请给他写一封道歉信。书信感谢信得体很重要套路是关键3.thank-you lettersAbout(1)(1)Thank you so much for the.(2 2)Im writing to express my heartfelt _(thank)for.(3 3)I cant be more_(感激)感激)for your _(帮助帮助)with my.(4 4)_(代代表表)my whole family,I would like to extend my great appreciation for your timely h
15、elp.DearMr.Declan,ImwritingtoexpressoursinceregratitudeforyourhospitalityandgenerosityduringourstayinBritain.假定你是中学生李华,作为成员之一,刚刚访问完英国的姐妹学校MorleyCollege回国,请你给该校校长Mr.Declan写一封感谢信。thank-you letters开门见山,表明写信目的具体事例解释原因,表明诚挚的谢意(最好把gratitude/appreciate/thank you都用一次)About再次感谢实战演习感谢信1假如你是李华。毕业在即,请你用英文给你的英语老
16、师杨老师写一张Thank-youNote.实战演习假如你是李华。毕业在即,请你用英文给你的英语老师杨老师写一张Thank-youNote.主要内容包括:书信通知应用文分类倡议报道应用文分类书信报道邀请函道歉信感谢信申请信投诉信询问信建议信推荐信倡议书书面通知口头通知通知套路是关键得体很重要申请信之高考模拟题2017年5月假定你是高三(1)班班长李华,近期你校学生会将组织“跳蚤市场爱心义卖(fleamarketforcharity)”活动,请代表你班级给校学生会主席王越写一封邮件,申请参加本次活动,内容包括:1.申请一个摊位(booth);2.简要描述义卖的物品;3.就善款的用途提出建议;注意:
17、1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯善款用途?义卖物品有哪些?代表个人还是班级?一些错误案例:1.ImLiHua,whoisthemonitorofClass1,Grade3.建议直接用同位语:ImLiHua,monitorofClass1,Grade3.2.Imwritingtoapplyforparticipatingintheactivitywhichisverymeaningful.建议直接用前置定语:Imwritingtoapplyforparticipatinginthismeaningfulactivityonbehalfofmyclass.3.Wehavedeci
18、dedtodonatethemoneytoberaisedtohelpthosestudentswhoareverypoorandunfortunate.建议直接用形容词前置定语或者介宾结构做后置定语:Wehavedecidedtodonatethemoneytoberaisedtohelpthosepoorandunfortunatestudents.Wehavedecidedtodonatethemoneytoberaisedtohelpthosestudentsinneed.DearWangYue,Im Li Hua,monitor of Class 1,Grade 3.Imwritin
19、gtoapplyforaboothinthefleamarketforcharity.Wevepreparedawiderangeofgoodsthatappealtostudentswithdifferentneeds,includingreference books,inviting snacks and beautifullypotted plants.Wesuggestthe moneywegetbedonated to poor children in mountainous areas,helpingthemreceiveagoodeducation.Wedappreciateit
20、ifwecouldparticipateinthismeaningfulactivity.Yourssincerely,LiHuaapplication letters开门见山,表明写信目的表明期待或信心解释原因,或阐述自己适合这个岗位的优势About如果是对活动的申请最好提及活动的意义application lettersAbout(1)Im writing to apply for a position in your summer camp.(2 2)I sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considered.(3
21、)(3)I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.(4)(4)The position of sales manager advertised in the newspaper interests me very much.(5 5)Im writing to apply for the opportunity to.(6)Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply.(7)(7)If I am lu
22、cky enough to be admitted,Ill work hard and try to be a good engineer.(8 8)I think Im qualified for the position you offered in the advertisement.实战演习申请信1l假假定定你你是是李李华华,从从互互联联网网(the(the Internet)Internet)上上得得知知一一个个国国际际中中学学生生组组织织将将在在新新加加坡坡(Singapore)(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参
23、加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。l内容主要包括内容主要包括:1.1.自我介绍自我介绍(包括英语能力包括英语能力);2.2.参加意图参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.3.希望获准希望获准Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a secondyear high school student from China.I got 7.5 for IELTS early this year,which indicates that I will have little difficulty communicating with others in an English
24、speaking country.Im writing to apply for a position in your summer camp in Singapore.I believe this is a wonderful opportunity for me to introduce China to young people from other countries and to learn from them about their countries.I sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considere
25、d.If more information is needed,please do not hesitate to contact me via this email.Yours,Li Hua 实战演习Dear Sir or Madam,The other day I happened to read your advertisement on the Internet,saying that you are holding a summer camp aimed at students from around the world,and Im interested to participat
26、e in it.Im Li Hua,a middle school student in China.As a teenager,Im interested in making friends with kids of my age from all over the world.Your camp will provide a good chance for me to know a lot about other countries and tell them something about China.Whats more,I can improve my English by comm
27、unicating with people from other countries.I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.Looking forward to your early reply.Besh wishes,Li Hua。书信通知应用文分类倡议报道应用文分类书信报道邀请函道歉信感谢信申请信投诉信询问信建议信推荐信倡议书书面通知口头通知通知套路是关键得体很重要投诉信之高考模拟题2017年5月假假设设你你是是李李华华,你你购购买买了了一一部部某某外外国国公公司司生生产产的的手手机机,因因有有质质
28、量量问问题题,要要求求该该公公司司更更换换。请请根根据据下下列列要要点点,用用英英文文写写一一封封电电子子邮邮件。件。要点:要点:1.问题:问题:手机手机不响铃,不能发短信;不响铃,不能发短信;该该产品已售完,无法更换;产品已售完,无法更换;型号型号新,无配件,无法维修。新,无配件,无法维修。2.2.要求要求:公司公司应尽快予以更换。应尽快予以更换。参考词汇:配件参考词汇:配件 spare part spare part 有何要求?写信人和收信人的关系?投诉理由?Dear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of DephoneS250 I
29、 bought on 20th Apr,2017 at Tele Mall in Wuhan,P.R.China.I contacted the saleswoman but the problem of my mobile phone could not be effectively solved.The main problems are as follows:First,the mobile phone does not ring and messages cannot be sent out.Second,all the mobile phones of the same model
30、were sold out,so it is impossible for me to exchange a new one.Third,since the phone is a new model,there are no spare parts available,and therefore,it cannot be fixed at the local store.A mobile phone is a very important tool in my daily life.Therefore,I require that you send me a new one of the sa
31、me model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of DephoneS250 I bought on 20th Apr,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan,P.R.China.I hate to say that there is something wrong with my mobile phone.First,the phone bell doesnt ring
32、at all.Whats worse,it cant be used to send short messages to others.Besides,because the product here has been sold out,the salesman cant change it for me.Later,I went to have it repaired.However,I was told that the model can not be repaired due to a lack of spare parts.Taking into account all three
33、factors above,I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Huacomplaint letters开门见山,表明写信目的提出你的要求投诉理由,对产品或对服务不满的具体原因About期待答复complaint lettersAbout1.I hate to say that there is something wrong with my mobile phone
34、.2.Therefore,I require that you send me a new one.3.Taking into account all three factors above,I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible.4.To my regret,it didnt work normally.5.I received such poor service that I felt I should bring it to your attention.6.Your
35、 prompt attention and early reply will be appreciated.7.I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.8.I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.实战演习投诉信1假假如如你你是是李李华华,昨昨天天在在商商场场购购买买了了一一台台电电风风扇扇,回回家家后后发发现现它它不不能能运运转转。你你回回到到店店里里与与营营业业员员交交涉涉时时该该
36、营营业业员员对对你你的的态态度度恶恶劣劣,对对你你提提出出的的问问题题不不予予受受理理。请请你你为为此此向向经经理理写写一封投诉信。一封投诉信。Dear Mananger,Sincerely yours,Li Hua实战演习Dear Manager,I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop,but when I got home and turned it on,it didnt work.
37、So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem.To my surprise,instead of helping me solve the problem,the man,in a rude manner,refused to examine it.Generally,your shop is wellknown for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop.I was really upset to find th
38、at such a thing should have occurred in your shop.I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua书信通知应用文分类倡议报道应用文分类书信报道邀请函道歉信感谢信申请信投诉信询问信建议信推荐信倡议书书面通知口头通知通知套路是关键得体很重要询问信之高考模拟题2017年5月 假假定定你你是是李李华华,计计划划暑暑假假期期间间去去英英国国学学习习英英语语,为为期期六六周周。下下面面的的广广告告引引起起了了你你的的注注
39、意意,请请给给该该校校写写封封信信,询询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。参考词汇:住宿参考词汇:住宿accommodationaccommodation询问目的?写信人和收信人的关系?询问内容?Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad,and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English
40、 course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am
41、 looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li HuaDear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua and I am a student from China.I saw your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to attend the sixweek English course you offer during my summer vacation.I am writing to ask for more information about
42、 it.First of all,Id like to know when the classes will start and how many students there will be in a class.Second,how many course hours per week will there be?Third,how much is the course?Finally,what types of accommodation will you provide?Personally,Id prefer a quiet room where I can sleep alone.
43、Is this possible?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,Li Huainquiry letters开门见山,表明写信目的询问出于什么目的询问内容,想知道哪些细节About期待答复inquiry lettersAbout1.Id like to know something more about.2.I am writing to ask for more information about it.3.Im writing for more information about 4.Ive seen your
44、 ad,and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course.5.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.6.Im looking forward to hearing from you.7.I am looking forward to your early reply.实战演习询问信1 假假定定你你是是李李华华,正正在在英英国国牛牛津津参参加加短短期期语语
45、言言培培训训,计计划划星星期期天天去去伦伦敦敦旅旅游游。互互联联网网上上一一则则广广告告引引起起了了你你的的注注意意,但但一一些些具具体体信信息息不不明明确确(箭箭头头所所指指内内容容)。请请给给该该旅旅行行社社发发一一封封电电子子邮邮件件,询问有关情况。询问有关情况。参考词汇参考词汇:牛:牛津津 Oxford 费用费用 feeDear Sir/Madam,.Yours,Li Hua实战演习实战演习Dear Sir/Madam,Im writing for more information about the day tour to London.As a student at Oxford
46、University,Id like to know if you have any special price for students.As for the money you charge,does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed?What about lunch?Is it included?Or do I need to bring along my own food?How long will the tour last?Since I need to prepare my lessons for
47、the next day,Id like to know the time to return.Besides,is there any time for shopping?I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua书信通知应用文分类倡议报道应用文分类书信报道邀请函道歉信感谢信申请信投诉信询问信建议信推荐信倡议书书面通知口头通知通知套路是关键得体很重要建议信之高考模拟题2017年5月 假假定定你你是是李李华华,你你校校为为了了让让高高三三学
48、学生生更更好好地地复复习习迎迎考考取取消消了了体体育育课课,请请你你给给校校长长写写封封建建议议信信,建建议议高高三三继继续续保保留留体体育育课。理由自编。课。理由自编。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。建议理由和目的?写信人和收信人的关系?建议内容?letters of advice开门见山,表明写信目的针对问题提出建议/答复问题存在问题About希望建议被采纳或对对方有帮助letters of adviceAbout1.Im writing to express my views concerning2.I am writing to offer my propos
49、als.3.I will try to make some suggestions.4.Im writing to advise you to5.You have asked me for my advice onand I will try to make some conductive suggestions.6.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on7.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.8.So I would appreciate
50、it if you would consider my suggestion.Looking forward to your reply.9.I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.Looking forward to your reply.实战演习建议信1你你校校图图书书馆馆为为了了给给学学生生更更好好的的服服务务和和阅阅读读体体验验,决决定定广泛征求学生们的意见改进图书馆的服务和设施等。广泛征求学生们的意见改进图书馆的服务和设施等。假假定定你你是是李李华华,给给图图书