读写任务型作文议论文公开课一等奖优质课大赛微课获奖课件.pptx

专项一 记叙文读写任务专项二 寓言读写任务专项三 阐明文读写任务读写任务型作文专项四 议论文读写任务第1页第1页Learning aims:1.to learn the effective ways to summarize an argumentative passage.2.to master the basic structures of an argumentative passage.第2页第2页Type1 phenomenon+opposite opinions+conclusionType2 thesis+arguments+conclusion第3页第3页请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右文章词左右文章 Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.Senior school students are asked to enter society and get some ideas of it.Surely,social practice has many advantages.Firstly,social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people.In this way students can gain some precious social experience,which will be useful to their future career.Secondly,students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work,thus knowing themselves more clearly.Thirdly,social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.However,some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made.For example,some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money,thus neglecting their studies.And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society,which will affect their future values.In order to carry out social practice smoothly,students should first know their objective.They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement(补充补充),so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.phenomenonType1 phenomenon+opposite opinions+conclusion 第4页第4页Social practice enriches students experience,put their knowledge into practice and reward them with money.However,there remains problems for lack of correct guidance,like neglecting studies and affecting future values.（31words)detailsdetailsoff the pointoff the pointphenomenon:Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.conclusion:they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.Social practice has caught on in senior schools.Although it can benefit students a lot while it also has a bad effect on their studies and future values.Therefore,they should seek a balance between social practice and studies.main point main point to the pointto the pointSocial practice has caught.on in senior schoolssocial practice and studiesTherefore,they shouldseek a balance betweenbenefithas a bad effect onTip 1Tip 1Learn through polishing up summariesVSVS第5页第5页Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.It has many advantages and some problems may arise.They should strike a balance between social practice and studies(27words)Tip2 paraphraseTip2 paraphrase Tip3 organization Tip3 organizationIt has many advantages and some problems may arise.Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.original original looselooseSocial practice has _ in schoolsIt has _and _ effects on students.caught onnegativepositive第6页第6页Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.It has many advantages and some problems may arise.They should strike a balance between social practice and studies(27words)Tip3 organizationTip3 organizationwith+O.+O.C.Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.uWith social practice_ _it has many benefits and problems.attributive clauseSocial practice has been more and more popular in schools.It has many advantages and some problems.uSocial practice has been more and more popular in schools,_has many benefits and problems.passive voiceThey should strike a balance between social practice and studies.uA balance between social practice and studies _.should be struck/keptbecomingwhichmore and more popular第7页第7页Excellent version 1:With social practice more and more popular,it is of great benefit to students.However,it also has bad effects on them,which encourages students to keep a balance between social practice and studies.Excellent version 2:Social practice has caught on in schools.Although it has positive influence on students,it brings about many problems.Therefore,students are encouraged to balance social practice and studies.great benefit to students.However,it also has badWith social practice more and more popular,a balance between social practice and studies.it is of effects on them,which encourages students to keepSocial practice has caught on in schools.it has positive influence on students,it brings about.many problemsencouraged to balance social practice and studies.students are第8页第8页 1.Omit detailed information and be to the point.2.Be sure to paraphrase the original words.3.Try to well organize it.Other tips:4.Write it in the third person with the present tense.5.Limit the number of words to about 30.6.Pay attention to handwriting.Tips:第9页第9页thesis+arguments+conclusionType2topicsupporting reasons第10页第10页 Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women.Career women are healthier than housewives.Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders.A study shows that whenever the unemployment rate increases by 1%,the death rate increase correspondingly(相应地相应地)by 2%.All this comes down to one point:work is helpful to health.Why is work good for health?It is because work keeps people busy,away from loneliness.Researches show that people feel unhappy,worried and lonely when they have nothing to do.Instead,the happiest are those who are busy.Work serves as a bridge between man and reality.By work,people come into contact with each other.By collective activities,they find friendship and warmth.This is helpful to health.The loss of work means the loss of everything.It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.Besides,work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement.Work makes one feel his value and status in society.When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow,they are happy beyond words.From the above we can come to the conclusion that the more you work the happier and healthier you will be.Let us work hard and study hard and live a happy and healthy life thesisargumentsconclusion第11页第11页Summary：thesisWork is good for health.arguments1.Work keeps people busy,away from loneliness.2.Work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement.conclusionThe more you work,the happier and healthier you will be.Many studies highlight that Now there is a growing awareness thatThe writer/passage informs us that Start with第12页第12页Possible version:Now there is a growing awareness that work is beneficial to health,because it keeps one occupied and off loneliness and makes one proud of their achievements,which contributes to a healthy body.(33words)beneficial to health work isoccupied and off loneliness and makes oneit keeps oneproud of their achievements ,which contributes to a healthy body.第13页第13页Learning aims:1.to learn the effective ways to summarize an argumentative passage.2.to master the basic structures of an argumentative passage.第14页第14页How to write the rest parts How to write the rest parts of an argumentative passageof an argumentative passageuopinions and reasons urelated examplesueffects on life or workusuggestions or measures第15页第15页Exercise 2:Work and health约约120个词就个词就“高兴学习高兴学习”主题发表主题发表见解见解,包括下列要点包括下列要点 （1)谈谈谈谈“高兴学习高兴学习”对高三学习影对高三学习影响？响？(2)举例阐明你同窗是如何努力学习举例阐明你同窗是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观心态？并保持健康乐观心态？(3)简述如何才干做到高兴学习？简述如何才干做到高兴学习？(1)opinions and reasons(2)a related example(3)suggestions or measuresGroup work Exercise1:Social practice约约120个词谈谈你对个词谈谈你对“社会实践社会实践”见见解，包括下列要点：解，包括下列要点：(1)你赞同你赞同“社会实践社会实践”这一观点吗这一观点吗？(2)举例阐明举例阐明 你或你朋友所经历过一你或你朋友所经历过一次社会实践次社会实践;(3)你认为如何协调好学习与社会实你认为如何协调好学习与社会实践关系。践关系。(1)effects on studies(2)a related example(3)suggestions or measures第16页第16页Exercise1:Social practiceGroup1opinions reasonsGroup2a related exampleGroup3measuresExercise 2:Work and healthGroup4effectsGroup5a related exampleGroup6measuresDiscussion第17页第17页suggestions or measureslEffective measures are taken to deal with lIt is necessary for me to put forward several suggestions concerning effects on life or worklhave a potential/positive effect on our life.lIt plays an important role in lIt brings about some problems.opinion and reasons lThe reason why I am in favor of is that lMany factors contribute to my view thatlThe reasons accounting for my support/objection are as follows.general structure a related example A famous example/event in history occurs to me.lAn example in daily life reflects the phenomenonl Lets take.for example.第18页第18页 Review what weve learned and complete the argumentative passage.Homework:第19页第19页Excellent version:I am in favor of the view that social practice benefits students in many ways.Nowadays,more students have opportunities to join in various social activities,such as military training,voluntary work in a community service,a part-time job in a super-market,from which they can learn how to serve,how to cooper ate and how to solve problems.Gradually they will become strong-willed,kind-hearted and enthusiastic in study and life.Two years ago,I organized a team of classmates to a Charity House where orphans and the disabled live.There we told stories to the blind;we drew beautiful pictures for the deaf;we helped friends in the wheelchair go around.It was the visit that made me realize that helping others should not be only an empty talk and that life is worth cherishing.Of course,we must strike a balance between study and social practice,never allowing social activities to take priority over schoolwork.After all,senior school stage is a vital period for students to obtain knowledge and get prepared for their future.Therefore,I strongly suggest that we make full use of our spare time and holiday to participate in that.Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves on campus.measuresopinions and reasonsa related example第20页第20页