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I got up a little later than usual on Sunday morning. I washed and had a quick breakfast. Then I started going to town to buy the dictionary recommended by the teacher. At the school gate I saw Li Ping. I asked him if he was going to town too, and he said that he was. So we decided to go together. All the buses were crowded. We had to wait for a long time at the bus stop before we could get on a bus. An hour later we got off the bus at a busy street. There were three bookstores there. We went to the first one and didn't find the dictionary. Then we went to the second one and the shop assistant said that the dictionary was sold out. I finally bought the dictionary at the third bookstore. After that Li Ping and I went to other stores and bought various things. We returned to school just in time for lunch. (Origin)
Getting up a little later than usual on Sunday morning, after washing and having a quick breakfast, I started going to town to buy the dictionary recommended by the teacher. At the school gate I saw Li Ping, and I asked Li Ping, “Are you going to town too?” “Sure” Li said. So we decided to go together. Since all the buses were crowded, we had to wait for a long time at the bus stop before we could get on a bus. An hour later we got off the bus at a busy street where there were three bookstores. We went to the first one and didn’t find the dictionary. Then we went to the second one and the shop assistant said that the dictionary was sold out. Finally I bought the dictionary at the third bookstore. After that Li Ping and I bought various things in other stores. Then we returned to school just in time for lunch. (Revised)
Ludwig van Beethoven overcame many personal problems to achieve artistic greatness. He was a major composer of the nineteenth century. He was born in Bonn, Germany, in 1770 and first studied music with a court organist. His father was excessively strict and given to heavy drinking. His mother died when he was a young man. He was named guardian of his two younger brothers. He was appointed deputy court organist at a surprisingly early age in 1782. He also played the harpsichord and the viola. He went to Vienna in 1792 to study music under Haydn. He remained unmarried. He was troubled by financial worries throughout his adult life. He was also continually plagued by ill health. He became deaf in 1818 because of an ear infection. His writing of music continued, however, in spite of this handicap. Goethe said that Beethoven had an “untamed personality.” This may have been true, but his music shows great discipline and control. (Origin)

After overcoming many personal problems, Ludwig van Beethoven, a major composer of the nineteenth century, born in Bonn, Germany, in 1770, achieved artistic greatness. Beethoven, whose father was excessively strict and given to heavy drinking, first studied music with a court organist. Beethoven’s mother died when he was a young man. Thus, he was named guardian of his two younger brothers. In 1782, appointed deputy court organist at a surprisingly early age, Beethoven also played the harpsichord and the viola. In 1792, Beethoven went to Vienna to study music under Haydn. Throughout his adult life, Beethoven remained unmarried and was troubled by financial worries. It is worse that Beethoven was also continually plagued by ill health. In 1818, he became deaf because of an ear infection. However, in spite of this handicap, his writing of music continued. Just as Goethe said, Beethoven had an “untamed personality.” This may have been true, but his music shows great discipline and control. (Revised)