初中作文英语作文指导.pptx

Writing 作文指导作文指导Writing 作文指导作文指导By Ou Yanghong 中考英语写作评分标准中考英语写作评分标准 一档文（一档文（17-2017-20分）分）写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少有复杂结构，至少2-32-3个，个，基本无语法错误，只有基本无语法错误，只有1-21-2个，个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。但不影响意义理解。作文中作文中应避免应避免的几种常见的几种常见语言错误语言错误：1.时态错误（扣分多）。时态错误（扣分多）。2.中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让让整句不得分整句不得分）。）。3.单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关要过关）。）。4.介词介词,代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的的不正确使用（对单词的词性词性要要熟悉熟悉）。）。5.名词单复数（名词单复数（细心细心就可以避免的错）。就可以避免的错）。How can we write a good composition?(Have a discussion!)basic rulessearch（审）（审）list（列）（列）add(加加:开头和结尾开头和结尾)connect(连连)beautify(美：谚语美：谚语/例子例子)中考英语作文中考英语作文8个话题个话题v一、一、介绍人介绍人 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）感受等）v二、介绍地点（旅游等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）v三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）v四、课外生活四、课外生活 （家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）v五、假期安排五、假期安排 （计划、过去经历等）（计划、过去经历等）v六、节假日活动六、节假日活动 （志愿者活动、过去经历）（志愿者活动、过去经历）v七、环境、健康七、环境、健康 （环保、疾病、食品健康等）（环保、疾病、食品健康等）v八、个人观点建议八、个人观点建议 （提建议、劝告、说看法等）（提建议、劝告、说看法等）健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork第一步：第一步：都要都要认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作体裁体裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点How can we write a good composition?(Have a discussion!)具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画 健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork第二步：第二步：列出写作提纲（列出写作提纲（Outline）。）。具体做法：具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点根据段落整理写作要点 调查报告调查报告如何度假如何度假倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。简单的句子列出文章的要点。不要遗漏不要遗漏要点！要点！How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.加加(add)加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。（the beginning）（the ending）How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey _ here is our report._ it,a lot of people travel._ some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet._,some other people visit friends or parents._,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)美美(beautify)andAccording toAndBesidesHowever We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.美美(beautify)According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify)And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.Proverb（谚语）（谚语）/saying We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And visiting friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.写作：写作：第一步就是要第一步就是要认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作体裁体裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点第二步就是要第二步就是要列出写作提纲列出写作提纲，根据，根据段段落整理落整理写作写作要点要点。写作前：写作前：确定确定人称、时态人称、时态写作后：写作后：？We interviewed people about the way to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And visit friends or parents also make them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relaxes well work well._to_ways_s_ing_写作：写作：第一步就是要第一步就是要认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作体裁体裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点第二步就是要第二步就是要列出写作提纲列出写作提纲，根据，根据段段落整理落整理写作写作要点要点。写作前：写作前：确定确定人称、时态人称、时态写作后：写作后：检查检查 假如你是李华，来自汕头市某一中学假如你是李华，来自汕头市某一中学,你将参加你将参加 以以绿色出绿色出行行为主为主题的英语演讲比赛题的英语演讲比赛,请撰写一份演讲稿。请撰写一份演讲稿。要点如下：要点如下：1.介绍目前本市汽车增长带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等现象介绍目前本市汽车增长带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等现象。2.号召大家号召大家绿色出行绿色出行。内容包括：内容包括：(1)如非必要，少坐私家车；如非必要，少坐私家车；(2)鼓励选用公共交通鼓励选用公共交通,如乘公交车或绿色自行车；如乘公交车或绿色自行车；(3)短途尽量步行，或骑自行车。短途尽量步行，或骑自行车。3阐述阐述绿色出行绿色出行的好处。的好处。v 注意：注意：1词数词数90左右。左右。v 2参考词汇：绿色出行：参考词汇：绿色出行：Green Travel；交通堵塞：；交通堵塞：traffic jams;提倡提倡:promotev 3短文须包括所有的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发短文须包括所有的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥挥,使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关的使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关的信息。信息。v Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today my topic is_.The increase of cars has brought more and more serious air pollution and traffic jams in our city,_ in the rush hour.v So I think _ to promote the green travel at present._,wed better not travel by car unless its necessary._,people should be encouraged to choose the public transport,_ taking a bus or riding green bikes._,we should choose to walk or ride a bicycle if we dont go far away._,I believe if we all choose the green travel,_ will it improve the environment,_ it can make us stronger and healthier.Green Travelespeciallyits timeFirstSecondsuch asWhats moreIn a wordnot onlybut alsov Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today my topic is Green Travel.The increase of cars has brought more and more serious air pollution and traffic jams in our city,especially in the rush hour.v So I think its time to promote the green travel at present.First,wed better not travel by car unless its necessary.Second,people should be encouraged to choose the public transport,such as taking a bus or riding green bikes.Besides,we should choose to walk or ride a bicycle if we dont go far away.In a word,I believe if we all choose the green travel,not only will it improve the environment,but also it can make us stronger and healthier.Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）方法一方法一:善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇 我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment 我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.Which is better?他们在海滩上听音乐。他们在海滩上听音乐。A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.我认为学英语很有趣。我认为学英语很有趣。A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English.方法二方法二:妙用关联词妙用关联词Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short关联词关联词(connection words)方法三方法三:活用谚语活用谚语Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where there is a will,there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn.覆水难收。覆水难收。一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果，医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。活到老，学到老。方法四方法四:妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文组段成篇，组段成篇，加主题句加主题句审清题意，审清题意，构建框架构建框架连词成句，连词成句，变换句式变换句式抓住要点，抓住要点，列关键词列关键词Summary集句成段，集句成段，添连接词添连接词抄写规范，抄写规范，避免错误避免错误.书写规范书写规范,卷面整洁。卷面整洁。随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀许多动物遭到猎杀所有这些都导致了越来越所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于请根据上述内容写一篇不少于8080词的英语短文。词的英语短文。要求：要求：1.1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2.2.提示的内容要全部用上。提示的内容要全部用上。Thank you!Lets Help Our Friends With the increasing population,human needs more places to live in and more food to eat.As a result,we change the forests into farmland.I feel pity for the animals.More and more new cities and roads are built on animals habitat.A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur.There used to be lots of animals,but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior.For example,there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now.Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear?Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future?Dont you think animals are our lovely friends?I know your answer is“No”.So its our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.Dont put it off！Lets try our best to help our friends today!结尾：结尾：提出倡议或号召提出倡议或号召Lets Do it now!/Dont do it again!As students,we should start from ourselves.Dont wait.Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!How amazing!I cant wait!Save animals!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!Dont hesitate(犹豫犹豫).It will be great fun!