2022届高三牛津版英语一轮复习全书讲义-第三部分第八讲揣摩图画内涵从容掌控图画作文-.docx

第八讲　揣摩图画内涵，从容掌控图画作文

(2021·高考江苏卷)请依据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。

参考词汇：banner (横幅)　　　stump (树桩)
你的作文应包括以下内容：
1．简要描述两幅图的内容；
2．概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；
3．举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
留意：1.可参照图片适当发挥；
2．作文词数150 左右；
3．作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Actions Speak Louder than Words
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1．图画中的信息是“百说不如一干”。
(一般表达)The message in the pictures is“Actions speak louder than words.”
(高级表达)(主语从句和同位语从句)___________________________________________
is the message____________________________________________________
答案：What the pictures describe vividly/convey；that “Actions speak louder than words.”
2．我们的地球正受到严峻的破坏。我们该怎么做，是说空话还是实行切实可行的措施呢？
(一般表达)Our earth is suffering severe damage.What should we do，just have empty talk or take practical measures?
(高级表达)(不定式作状语＋高级词汇＋定语从句)Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just________________or take practical measures________the earth
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答案：pay lip service; to protect; which is suffering severe damage
3．为了改善环境，我们应当马上实行措施，如停止砍伐树木。
(一般表达)To improve the environment，we should take immediate action.We should stop cutting down trees.
(高级表达)(过去分词作状语)______________________________________ _________，
we should take immediate measures，such as stopping cutting down trees，to better the environment.
答案：Faced with phenomenon/the problem
4．我们应当把书和体育用品捐给需要的儿童，而不是空喊口号。
(一般表达)We should donate books and sports goods to children in need.We shouldn’t shout empty slogans.
(高级表达)(it作形式主语＋定语从句)Instead of shouting empty slogans，________________________donate books and sports goods to children________________________．
答案：it is more meaningful to；who need them/needing them
5．我们应当严格自觉遵守交通规章，红灯停，而不是埋怨交通拥堵。
(一般表达)We should strictly and voluntarily obey traffic rules.We should stop at the red light.We shouldn’t complain about traffic jams.
(高级表达)(虚拟语气＋倒装)______________________strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules and________________________just complain about traffic jams.
答案：It is high time that we should; under no circumstances should we

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One possible version：
Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain，while Picture 2 shows a couple planting trees happily.
The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.”Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it？The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate action should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees，to better the environment.
Actions are important in other fields，too.Instead of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference.

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图画类作文解题关键
图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点，其难点在于如何将图画语言转化为规律语言。只有读懂图画所蕴含的深刻道理，才能有的放矢。需留意以下几点：
1．认真观看图画。图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都有提示作用，留意图画中每一个要素供应的信息。
2．品尝图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅，认真思考这些文字所隐含的观点，使之成为弄清图画寓意的钥匙。
3．挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐蔽的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示的真正主题。挖掘出图画的寓意是写作的关键。
4．适度联想发挥。图画作文一般要求做适度的联想发挥，以使上下文更好地连接。但确定要依据图画做到合情合理。
5．描写虚实结合。对图画中的内容分清主次，详略得当。
6．做好连接过渡。在适度发挥的前提下，留意连词的使用，达到浑然一体的效果。