1、书面表达二经典精讲(上)主讲老师:林斌 北京八十中学英语高级老师开篇语柱状和饼状图柱状与饼状图的典型文章一、如何描述图中的各种数字,使之不枯燥。二、这类文章的基调是一般现在时还是一般过去时。题一:受某英文报的托付,你最近对高中生的英语阅读爱好做了一次调查。请依据以下信息,用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容:在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中,同学最宠爱哪一种调查范围:北京市的10所中学调查对象:高中生调查人数:1200调查方式:访谈调查结果:(见下图)_题二:最近,你校同学会对分类垃圾箱是否进教室一事进行了调查,调查结果见下表。请依据图表供应的信
2、息用英语写一篇短文,介绍同学们的不同意见和看法,并表达你自己的观点。留意:词数不少于60。提示词:饼状图 pie chart _题三:最近,上海博物馆宣布免费开放。消息传出,博物馆每天被闻讯涌来的上万名游客挤得近乎“爆棚”。这一现象引发了各方的吵闹争辩:博物馆该不该免费开放?下图是某网站进行的一次社会调查,请你依据图示用英语给该网站的英语栏目写一篇短文介绍调查结果,并为三种不同的意见拟写各自的理由。留意: 1. 词数150左右(文章开头已经给出,但不计入总词数);2. 可以有适当发挥,以使行文连贯。_双方观点审题:文章体裁:谈论文 (argumentative)时态:一般现在时 (simple
3、 present)人称: 第三人称 (the third person)题一:请些一篇阐述双方观点的例文。Support(赞成)Comparison(对比)段落转折连接词1. but2. however3. on the contrary(相反)Opposition (反对)Some students agreeSome students disagreeSome students are forSome students are againstSome students are in favor of Some students prefer to A layout of the passa
4、gediscussion about whetherFor one thing(首先)For another(再者) are against(反对) the ideaare for(支持) the ideaIn my opinion(我的观点是)However/On the contrary(相反)Persona lopinion:Main bodyTopic sentence:reason1Opposition(反对)Support (赞同)理由词reason2:段落转折词reason1:First of all(首先)reason3:In addition(此外)理由词reason2:Se
5、condly(其次) _题二:最近,某校同学针对同学是否应当出国学习(studying abroad)进行了争辩。争辩详情见下表。请依据表格内容为该校的校刊写一篇英文报道,并表明你自己的看法。65%的同学认为35%的同学认为应当出国留学不应当出国留学增长学问,开阔视野。会遇到一些困难。有助于英语学习,广交伴侣。花很多钱。_题三: 高三学年即将面临高考,同学学习压力很大,你校预备组织高三同学进行校外活动。你在班级作了一次调查,了解同学对这一活动的看法,发觉高三同学对参与学校活动有着不同的看法,请以Taking Part in School Activities 为题,用英文写一篇150词左右的短
6、文,着重介绍两种不同的观点和态度,最终谈谈你的个人看法。支持者(40%)反对者(60%)你的看法1. 从实践中学到学问2. 减轻学习压力 3. 增加同学友情1. 同学的首要任务是学习2. 学校活动与学习无关3. 铺张学习时间标题和开头已给,不计入总词数。少于或多于150词20个以上扣2分。Taking Part in School Activities As for school activities, students mainly hold two views.Taking Part in School Activities_书面表达二经典精讲(上)讲义参考答案柱状和饼状图题一:Recen
7、tly a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. Among the 1200 interviewees from 10 high schools, over half of them prefer to read news, which can keep them well informed all the time. One quarter consider story books as their favorite, because there is
8、 endless fun in every interesting story. Travelling in the world of science, some 14% of them usually read science books full of mysteries. Whats more, less than one out of every 10 students reads study methods with the purpose of making great progress in their subjects.As the chart shows above, our
9、 students reading interests is various in spite of the heavy burden of our daily study. And it is indicated that the students daily life is colorful and full of happiness. From reading, not only can we gain knowledge which cant be seen in our text books, but we can relax ourselves mentally as well.
10、(Wang Yueqi)题二:Recently the student union conducted a survey on whether recycling dustbins should be set in classrooms. As can be seen from the pie chart, different students hold different opinions on this program. Only a few students care little about it. Surprisingly, about one third of students a
11、re totally against the program. They dont bother to change their old habits. However, over half the students are completely for the program, as it is not only beneficial to recycling of resources, but also it can help students develop their good habits of garbage classification. Besides, 12% of the
12、students partly agree. They hold the opinion that educating people on how to classify the garbage goes first. Personally, Im in favor of this program. I believe its important to raise peoples awareness of garbage classification, from which we will get considerable benefits for the future. 题三:Recentl
13、y a survey entitled “Should museums be free to the public?” has been conducted to find out peoples attitudes towards this question. Opinions are found to vary. 67.9% of the people surveyed believe that museums should be free to the public as they are important places for both education and entertain
14、ment. They say that free museum entrance will attract more visitors, which will no doubt contributes to promoting knowledge and culture. The more museums open their doors to the public for free, the more people they will benefit. 14.9% hold the opinion that museums should only be free for certain sp
15、ecial groups, such as students, soldiers and the disabled. Besides, the times that entrance is provided free for the groups should be strictly regulated. However, 17.2% believe that, to keep the museums functioning well, museums should charge visitors an entrance fee. In addition, to attract more vi
16、sitors, museums, we should try to figure out visitors expectations and offer better service instead of free entrance. 双方观点题一:The Summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about whether to travel outside during the holiday. 65% of the students are for the idea. First of all, they thin
17、k it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. Secondly, they can relax themselves. In addition, they can make a lot of good friends. However, 35% of the students are against the idea. For one thing, they think traveling outside is a waste of time and meet some troubles while travelin
18、g. For another, they wont have a good rest and always feel very tired. In my opinion, I prefer to travel outside because in this way, I can get more experience and improve my ability. It is also easy for me to find a better job in the future. 题二:Studying abroad Recently, our class have had a heated
19、discussion about whether students should study abroad . Different students have different opinions. 65% of students are for studying abroad. First of all, they think studying abroad can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. Secondly, it is helpful for them to learn English. In additio
20、n, they can make many friends from all over the world.On the contrary, 35% of students are against the opinion. For one thing, they will meet much troubles while studying abroad. For another thing, they may feel lonely and will spend more money while studying abroad. In my opinion, I prefer to study
21、 abroad, because in this way, I can get more experience and improve my ability. It is also easy for me to find a better job in the future. 题三: As for school activities, students mainly hold two views. About 40% of the students are very enthusiastic about school activities; they have their reasons. F
22、irstly, they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task and they should take any chance to get some practical knowledge. Secondly, they think that after long hours study, they can relax themselves by participating in school activities. Besides, this is a good chance to develop good re
23、lationships with classmates. However, 60% of the students take little interest in them and are strongly against the school activity. They believe that they should make full use of time to study, and that school activities have little to do with their further development. Taking part in school activi
24、ties is a waste of time. Thus sometimes they even laugh at those who take an active part in school activities. As far as Im concerned, I prefer the first view. On the one hand, we can learn a great deal from other students we meet in activities. Furthermore, the modern society requires many qualities of young students, so “book worms” cant keep up with the times.