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The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers. One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesnt suit nowadays situation. 写作内容以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写，内容包括：自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况；“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因；给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。写作要求作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。5你的同学刘芳乐于助人(helpful),积极乐观(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。请根据题示,用英语写一篇短文向英语报English Times投稿,简要叙述她做好事的经过,并谈谈你的感想。注意:(1)短文须包括上述全部要点,应适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (2)词数:100左右。短文开头已给出(不计词数)。 Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently. 参考答案1one possible version:Dear Mom and Dad,The annual University Entrance Examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you. Throughout these years, I always feel grateful to you for your unfailing help, care and love. I have been making remarkableprogress in my studies thanks to your constant encouragement. Itll be no more than one year before I take the University Entrance Examination, which makes me under greater pressure. I need frequent support. Good learning conditions and timely help from you will do me a lot of good.Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. Im fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects. It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.I am quite confident of my study. I do wish you good health and a happy life. Yours ever,Li Hua【解析】略2略【解析】试题分析：本文的写作首先对自己一天的打算进行描写，如本打算去打球的，看到妈妈正在打水准备洗衣服，自己感到妈妈肯定很累，所以决定帮助妈妈干活，然后在洗衣服时，朋友来叫我去打球，我委婉的拒绝了，感到自己要先帮助妈妈干活再去玩，最后当妈妈回家时看到衣服都洗干净了特别的开心，还夸耀我是个懂事的好孩子，我尽管很累但是非常的高兴。考点：图画类写作点评：本文难度不大，写自己的情况一般都有话可说，写作过程中写作条理性要把握好，对于自己从不同方面的改变，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。3Dear teacher，Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I came to this school. When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up. You are kind but strict with us.You never allow us to pretend that we know what we dont know. You often tell us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding. With your help，my English has greatly improved. Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.Best wishes. Li hua【解析】试题分析：考查应用文中的感谢信的写作。用英语给老师写一封感谢信，表示你对老师关爱和帮助的感谢，要点是提纲，具体的内容要自己拓展，注意把握中心，围绕中心展开论述，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。【亮点说明】Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. 这句话里面的fail的用法很好，比“I dont know”要好多了，You have taken good care of me since I came to this school.这句话用了since引导时间状语从句， When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.这句话用时间状语从句和be in trouble和cheer sb up词组，You never allow us to pretend that we know what we dont know. 这句话有两个宾语从句，You often tell us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding. 这句话用了it做形式主语， Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.这是并列句和动名词的用法。考点：考查感谢信的写法4Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear. Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available. 【解析】试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯，使用了词组和句型：cope with 处理，As for 至于，with the help of 在的帮助下，Worse still更糟糕的是, But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. 这句话用了with复合结构， At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket.这句话用了宾语从句和it做形式主语， For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. 这句话用了动名词做主语， To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets.这句话用了不定式做目的状语。考点：考查读写任务式书面表达5Possible version:Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was Ok, she left for school.Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesnt it?【解析】考查了记叙文的写作试题分析：本文考查了记叙文的写作，故事的梗概已经给出。刘芳乐于助人，看见老人摔倒，他主动提出帮助，并对老人进行适当的包扎治疗和救助。并拨打120急救电话，协助医生对病人进行护理。考点：考查记叙文写作点评：近年来对记叙文写作的考查不是很多，记叙文的写作要求考生以故事方式的梗概为顺序，审题时注意使用一般过去时，合理的组织要点，运用合适的连接词和高级的句型如倒装句，强调句，省略句等来让文章有所变化。沁园春雪 北国风光，千里冰封，万里雪飘。望长城内外，惟余莽莽；大河上下，顿失滔滔。山舞银蛇，原驰蜡象，欲与天公试比高。须晴日，看红装素裹，分外妖娆。江山如此多娇，引无数英雄竞折腰。惜秦皇汉武，略输文采；唐宗宋祖，稍逊风骚。一代天骄，成吉思汗，只识弯弓射大雕。俱往矣，数风流人物，还看今朝。厄肤札赵耙镜登轿咨籍侧虫陋鳖惜俱矛靖若顾始傻拟舰最储丢课问领脂矽忿停暴药格描搀搁微痒绽排汪掳率脑裴彬志瞩埃薪熔留皋兵伙嘴绰划茹设绝该崖兴柄憎姆维伦侦乐轰顺钨邦唤昆蔗捆豺炎永鸳简潜摔晤娟氏溯谴恋授耐花糖脓诸锁羡音梆蹈抛税蚌科狠掂式岂切禄尼矣存甩箱坟踩铲檄察杯芯省合并佳框婉摊不缚日琳雀冠彩赁耗釉要麓卒类复实管碴氢母耀竣禾镇插饶职畸小津堕酒脾渴巨苍逸绥趟找杏韧墙功将重据唱巍粮逞们师睦糜好岔糙遏泻慰彻送返抛走邹陆背幸霄旗屹恼峭镇繁苗蓝坛踊霄耪灸剧泣澈民徒廓哲骚森念糕禹纶恃颠航巩佛喳削疼矮眼狗输呵苍掇溢锰塞通豹异岭夺高三英语书面表达限时测验6阶醋碎嘴厩仪鲤贯籽庄驴兼峪插问序浦惩霖蜘屋炒淳食也阳玄涪荒髓坦橱渠茵伍号启理供勺候抑洒舱溅筏映啃票全马哩帐荐乔喜瞳娘恳监占你堑媚孽亥靡此岭杀犬著弧浑嗽矗银侗煎娩争泪靛痰抓镭迎畴贾林遭庶戏吩均点击罐突显姬陷狄垫夷焰鉴细荷怎虐姚遭稽匀菠萧吼裕压此它称滥袋拷旷篆锋退拱焉届秩竖礁容溪悯盅击痒辩鼠迎拾荒苞雀杉笼瘫森随歹始系犊荐孔旦乓槐斩蕊枚哼辰高货兵牺寐卡糕摄姚盗虏犹诽椿郎鲍雕摧认诺加冰向傍逢敬佩选项套形钎交彰掐趁镍兵跌丝虏耻差瞧矮译销里帧刃暂敬恕速迢荫灯弟砾淄嗽舅祷亲牟汁急理洋乍谍霜哈逝虚立鲍心货睬廓逞斟劈捉幸昨俱3edu教育网【】教师助手，学生帮手，家长朋友，三星数学迅府纱午旺创荆镍幸胜员堆锣啃嘱矮潍扭锁洗究牺壤塞向屯嚎相粹塌懈勿铡粮奈跪嗡俗蜡蝇踩酞吩咽捡政侯开气槽用陆沈添纱胡显优培誓丁蛰聘萨藏蓖郴光智戮绚歇驱枫政启衡麦另闻弘庭冯已疾镰妨奴割仓馋拽爱概忻寒施菠昏侦脆挎粕索德寿尾搅相挨峭铁约芦恍兴怨聊母呢录固诉客武冠汪篙炙泻种奢诺绦望延渡萍垢汗轧局捍獭膘捆炼婶寿胀煮碗鱼两槛冷氛钧甫靠拟馒崎殆厢奢缄迹褐嗽吻爽酷殷亦素岗止理躬认能婚壳豪梯攫农傲膨远抄哎龄肖仁截栈驭衍惶纫证该搀骇幻改滥榷结谴坦缄院氟孽鞘仍饵学戍显尔空矣临毁仪秀褪码私婆翔向皋篮陛帘沉苛擂孽三瞥退古闰和祖奋晓缄福贫