高中英语书面表达技巧省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

第1页第2页1.关键点齐全关键点齐全2.语言正确语言正确3.表示生动表示生动4.行文流畅行文流畅5.适当发挥适当发挥Pay attention to the following instructions when writing.3.表示生动表示生动4.行文流畅行文流畅第3页专题复习：专题复习：书面表示训练之三书面表示训练之三怎样使句子优美怎样使句子优美怎样使文章流畅怎样使文章流畅宝应县中学高三英语备课组宝应县中学高三英语备课组第4页n Sample 1n The students like to choose majors.They can learn interesting things.They will have good jobs in the future.The students believe that the environment is important to us.They graduate from universities.They can find good jobs.They can get much money.I think students should go to a good university.We like it and we study hard at it.Sample 2 Some students prefer to choose majors they can learn what they are interested in.It will make it possible for them to have their favorite jobs in the future.,those who think differently believe that the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job.so thatalsoHoweverand that第5页 Sample 2 Some students prefer to choose majors they can learn .It will their favorite jobs in the future.,the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job.,the best choice is a good major at a good university.If we cant obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major,we study,we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.so thatalsoHoweverand thatIn my opinionbecausewhat they are interested inmake it possible for them to havethose who think differently believe thatno matter whereso thatalsoHoweverIn my opinionwhat they are interested inmake it possible for them to havethose who think differently believe thatno matter where第6页Elegance（语（语言优美）言优美）Coherence（行文连贯）（行文连贯）第7页句式多改变句式多改变作文更优美作文更优美第8页怎样用不一样表示方式表示相同意义怎样用不一样表示方式表示相同意义怎样经过对句子结构改变怎样经过对句子结构改变,使文章显得愈使文章显得愈加丰富多彩加丰富多彩 怎样利用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点怎样利用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？第9页1.What surprised me most was that he didnt know me at all.=surprised me he didnt know me at all.=,he didnt know me at all.ItthatTo my great surprise第10页2.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam.Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam.Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam.lead to result in 第11页3.The man didnt know what he should do next.=The man didnt know _ _ _ next.4.Hurry up,or youll miss the train.=You wont catch the train _ you _ hurry.=You will miss the train _ you hurry.what to do if dont unless第12页 5.即使他是个孩子，但他知道很多即使他是个孩子，但他知道很多(一句多译)1)_ _ 2)_Although/Though he is a child,he knows a lot.Child as(though)he is,he knows a lot.第13页6.这本书是如此有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。这本书是如此有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。1)_2)_3)_4)_This book was so interesting that I read it again and again.This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again.So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.第14页7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom.=The teacher came into the classroom,_ _ _ _ _ _(用with复合结构)The teacher came into the classroom,_ _ _.（用独立结构）with a book in his hand book in hand第15页句子开头改变句子开头改变1.The boy was surprised at what he had seen,he stood there and couldnt say a word.=_ _ what he had seen,the boy stood there,_ _ _ a word.(形容词做状语形容词做状语)Surprised atunable to say第16页2.I didnt realize my mistake until you pointed it out.=_not until you pointed it out _I realized my mistake.(强调句型）强调句型）=_you pointed it out _my mistake.（倒装句）（倒装句）Not untildid I realizeIt wasthat第17页3You are sure to succeed only by working hard.=_ sure to succeed.(only+状语提前状语提前)4.We all know that he is honest.=_ (It做形式主语做形式主语)=.(as引引导非限制性定语从句导非限制性定语从句)It is known to us all that he is honest.As is known to all,he is honest Only by working hard are you 第18页5.I passed the physics exam with your help.1).I passed the exam _ _your help 2).I couldnt have passed the physics exam _ _our help.3).I couldnt have passed the physics your exam _help.thanks tobut forwithout第19页 1.They believe a public park should be free.They believe a public park should be _ _ _.2.The railway in our county is being built.The railway in our county is _ _.free of charge under construction第20页3.We think the meeting is very important.=We _ _ _ that the meeting is_ _ _.4.The result is not satisfying at all.=The result is _ _ satisfying hold the view of great importancefar from 第21页Some people claim that reading selectively is more helpful,since they believe that reading without choice is a waste of time.However,some other people argue that we should read extensively,for they hold the view that in such a rapid developing society,we need to enlarge the range of our knowledge instead of restricting it to one or two fields.In my opinion,both sides are going to extremes.观观 赏赏 一一 下下第22页起承转合好起承转合好作文更流畅作文更流畅第23页Task 1 在以下句子空白处在以下句子空白处填入恰当过渡用语填入恰当过渡用语,使行文连贯流畅。使行文连贯流畅。第24页1)I dont want to go.,I have something important to do.2)Id like to come,Im afraid I cant.3)Lucy is twelve and Lily is eleven;,Lucy is one year older than Lily.4)Some people waste food others dont have enough.Besides butthereforewhile第25页 在下面短文空白处在下面短文空白处 填入恰当过渡用语填入恰当过渡用语,使行文连贯流畅使行文连贯流畅.Task 2第26页However,In a word,Besides that,But A lot of people smoke.They say that smoking can bring them happiness._ I am strongly against smoking.Maybe smoking can give people a little pleasure._,it brings much more harm to peoples health.Every year many people die from smoking-related diseases._,smoking is also one of the causes of pollution._,I am strongly against smoking and I call on all the people to do something about it.ButHoweverBesides thatIn a word第27页 在文中需要地方在文中需要地方 加上适当过渡用语，加上适当过渡用语，使行文连贯流畅。使行文连贯流畅。Task 3第28页May 25,Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday.The salesgirl treated me coldly.She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop.She said that I made it dirty.She gave various excuses to refuse my request.I got angry.I quarreled with her.The manager turned up.He asked what was the matter.He knew all about this,he apologized to me and criticized（批评）（批评）the salesgirl.They changed another coat for me.I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.HoweverAt the beginning,In a wordso thatJust then/Just at that momentAfterAt last(In the end),SoAnd then第29页May 25,Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday._，the salesgirl treated me coldly._，she didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop._，She said that I made it dirty._，She gave various excuses to refuse my request._I quarreled with her._,the manager turned up.He asked what was the matter._he knew all about this,he apologized to me and criticized(批评批评)the salesgirl.They changed another coat for me.I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.However At the beginningAnd then In a wordI got so angry thatAs soon as/The momentJust at that moment第30页怎样使书面表示愈加优美流畅?1.学会不一样方式表示学会不一样方式表示2.注意句式结构改变注意句式结构改变3.适当使用高级词汇适当使用高级词汇4.合理使用连接用语合理使用连接用语EleganceCoherence第31页 Practice makes perfect!第32页 Make our writing better Lets begin 第33页Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peoplehere live a better lifethanbefore.书面表示书面表示：Sample 1Nowitistakingonanewlook.Sample 2第34页Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmallandmostchildrenhadnomoney.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltand which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.thenewlybuiltteachingbuildingThankyou.第35页 Next period well discuss how to express your own opinions in your composition.If you want to know more,please search:第36页第37页Every student will be faced with the same question when he passes the college Entrance Examination:Should he choose a good major a good university?Different people will offer different answers.Some students give priority to a good major.What they cherish is specialty they like most.In their mind,whether the university is famous is not very important so long as he works hard,he can learn it well in any university and a bright future is awaiting him.第38页Other students pay more attention to the university.They attach great importance to the university because the environment is vital to the making of an excellent person and is the symbol of a good future job itself.How can you have a wide vision and broad horizon if you receive education in a small college?In a word,the best choice is a good university.We can only get such a chance after making great efforts.If we cannot obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major itself.(give priority to 表表示示“优优先先考考虑虑”，cherish珍爱，珍惜，珍爱，珍惜，attach importance to重视）重视）第39页