SAT强化写作标准化省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

SAT强化写作第1页Which part is this course in SAT?Critical Reading(Sentence Completion+Passage-based Reading)MathematicsWriting(Grammar+Essay)第2页Teaching ScheduleGeneral Introduction(how to get a high score in the Essay part)Linguistic Skills(the standard of vocabulary and sentence required by college board)Real Tests(P46,from.3)Examples and ReasoningPractical Skills第3页Teaching MaterialPrinceton ReviewOfficial GuideHandout第4页SAT Essay:argumentative,logic1.thesis2.example3.reasoning 第5页reasoningthesisexample第6页OG389第7页OG119第8页OG196第9页Discussion What is your point?(thesis)What examples do you choose to support your point?(example)How your examples support your point?(reasoning)第10页Example Structure(logic)Language How the Essays Are Scored第11页Effectively and insightfully develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates outstanding critical thinking,using clearly appropriate examples,reasons,and other evidence to support its position 第12页Examples:举例子Reason:讲道理Other evidence:数据，引用第13页引用As an old saying/proverb goes,“_”,which is to say,_.According to a prominent scientist XXX(and I paraphrase)_,in other words,_.第14页数据According to the statistical result of a recent survey about X(调查主题）taken by Y(调查机构)in Z（调查时间）,A and B have soared,respectively,by _and _（增加百分比）.In contrast,C declined at an accelerating rate,and it is also the case with D.第15页The statistics above illustrates that_.第16页Is well organized and clearly focused,demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas 第17页Coherence:连贯Progression:衔接第18页Transitional Words-26第19页表示先后次序PreviouslyAnteriorlyOriginallyTo begin withAbove allFirst and foremost第20页In addition AdditionallyFurthermore SimultaneouslyCoinstantaneouslyPosteriorlyEventuallyUltimately Last but not least第21页表示因果关系For the reason thatIn thatdue toowing tothanks toattribute toon account ofin virtue of/by virtue of第22页As a resultConsequentlyHenceResultinglyWhereupon/thereupon第23页表示类比关系EquallySimilarlyApproximatively LikewiseIn like matter By the same token第24页表示转折关系Nonetheless,neverthelessNotwithstandingWhereas Instead/instead ofConverselyDespite/in spite of In contrast第25页On the contraryAlbeit第26页表示强调关系ParticularlyEspeciallyDeterminatelyDemonstrablyAssuredlyAuthentically 第27页表示递进关系UlteriorlyDetailedlyMinutelySpecifically 第28页Exhibits skillful use of language,using a varied,accurate,and apt vocabulary 第29页Varied:多样化Accurate:准确化Apt:活用化第30页Demonstrates meaningful variety in sentence structure 第31页Variety 长短句改变(两长一短）句式结构改变（从句与分词）主动与被动结合第32页这个房子主人想把他房子减价销售，他妻子逝世了，他儿子在纽约工作，而他想和他儿子住在一起The owner of the house,whose wife is dead,whose son works in New York and who wants to go and live with him,is willing to sell the house at reduced price.第33页The owner of the house whose wife is dead and son works in New York,wanting to go to live with him,is willing to sell his house.第34页Is free of most errors in grammar,usage,and mechanics 第35页Grammar:语法Usage:拼写Mechanics：格式“每段之间不空行，每段之前空4个字母”第36页Sample Essay-4第37页One-example structure1.thesis2.summarize the example3.first TS+detail4.second TS+detail5.third TS+detail6.conclude above7.step further 第38页范文补充内容第39页 1忽略绝对化词汇考查论证能力而不是论证全方面能力Always/only/all/ever/best/most/every/each第40页2:Example-3C PrincipleCriticalCreativeConcrete(10)第41页“5W1H”PrincipleWhatWhoWhereWhen Why How 第42页Double N PrincipleNamesNumbers第43页3:Keywords repetitionAnother However:benefits,drawbacksBoomNegative consequencesInstitutions and regulationsPositive resultGreat Depression,a sounder economy第44页4:ProgressionParagraph 3:crash顶针知无不言，言无不尽来者不善，善者不来Paragraph4:howeverParagraph 5:also第45页5:Coherence In fact/unfortunately/most notably/indeed/such as/not onlybut also/in particular/as/most importantly/while第46页6:Varied vocabulary改变词性变同义词第47页5组宏观词汇总结第48页I thinkI assumeI supposeI conceiveI insist I am convincedI maintainTo my knowledgePersonally 第49页From my personal perspectiveAs far as I am concerned第50页importantInfluential EssentialCrucialVitalFundamental Significant Indispensible 第51页Play a key rolePlay a pushing role第52页showReflectRevealConveyConfirmJustify DemonstrateIllustrate 第53页ImplyIndicatePoint out第54页popularPrevalentPervasiveUbiquitous Universal Rampant 第55页difficultIntractableInvolveToughTroublesomeStubborn第56页Requirement for Vocabulary1.Standard and Written2.Accurate3.Varied4.Apt第57页1.Standard and Written第58页1.1 尽可能用完整拼写LabBikeMathTVExam 第59页LaboratoryBicycleMathematicsTelevision Examination 第60页1.2 不用缩写形式Cant IsntDoesntE.g.Etc.第61页1.3 不用口语表示GonnaWannaGuyFanKick out第62页1.4 不用符号&$第63页2.Accurate第64页2.1 拼写准确PasttimePastimeEntertainmentRecreationAmusementDistraction第65页2.2 用词准确Learn knowledge?Gain/develop/accumulate/increase/enlarge/obtain/acquire第66页2.3 不用生僻词OmnipotentSenile(高龄，衰老)第67页3.Varied第68页3.1 动词多样化刺激 stimulatemotivateInspireExciteUrgeSpurfuel第69页3.2 形容词多样化BigHugeGreatGiganticTitanicEnormousImmenseTremendous第70页3.3 名词多样化Computer上下义词：machine/invention/device修辞：effective assistantMachinery lover第71页African Americans上下义词：vulnerable groups/underprivileged individuals修辞：miserable people第72页3.4 短语多样化For example For instanceSuch asA good case in point is A compelling example is第73页4.Apt第74页The city is laced with rivers.Not many years ago,computers were still enveloped by mystery.第75页Key Points in OG14第76页Using Clear,Precise,and Appropriate Vocabulary-14Appropriate words are accurate and specific,not necessarily long and obscure.Avoid too many abstract and indefinitive words,and seek concrete and specific ones.第77页Using both abstract and concrete language-15A frequent observation among teachers of writing(and readers of examination essays)is that student writers do not provide enough concrete illustrations.They rarely fell that a student essay has too many facts.第78页successGet 2400 in the SAT test第79页How to use both abstract and concrete language?第80页Skillful Use In Sentences-111.并列（9种方法）2.重复（2种方法）3.插入（4种方法）第81页Sample Essay-7第82页Two-example structureIntroduction1.Thesis2.summarize example A3.Summarize example B第83页Body1.TS (1)show paragraph idea (2)reflect thesis2.Example (1)narrative(logic connection)(2)concrete第84页New restaurant will attract more strangers than before,So that our neighborhood will not be as quiet as previously.Chinese people like to make friends through the dinner,so they always have food with friends in restaurant.So some people who wants to have a quiet rest after a whole days work will be disturbed.第85页3.Reasoning connect thesis and example 第86页Conclusion1.conclude the examples2.step further(suggestion)第87页Approaches to the Essay-132-Decipher the prompt and retrace the viewpoint and examples2-Introduction17-Body2-Conclusion第88页2-Leave some time to review时态主谓一致冠词语法和拼写第89页 Classified Real TestsWhy we should classify the real tests?第90页54-27Can any obstacle or disadvantage be turned into something good?第91页68-67Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune?第92页Those under the same classification can share same thesis,examples and reasoning.第93页Classified Rest Tests第94页1.挑战权威Challenging the Authority31第95页 1，2，6，7，8，18，23，25，29，38，39，40，42，57，62，69，73，75，76，80，82，83，92，94，95，99，111，115，117，121，128第96页59-42Is it important to question the ideas and decisions of people in positions of authority?第97页70-75Is criticismjudging or finding fault with the ideas and actions of othersessential for personal well-being and social progress?第98页第99页John NashGame Theory“Nash equilibrium”Questioning the theories in The Wealth of Nations,written by Adam Smith1950，in Princeton University第100页“Individual ambition serves the common good.”第101页28 pages dissertationSometimes individuals ambitions are conflicting,which means that in the pursuit of groups interests,each individual should do what is best for himself and the group.第102页Nobel Prize in Economics in 1994第103页70-75Is criticismjudging or finding fault with the ideas and actions of othersessential for personal well-being and social progress?第104页TSBy questioning the original economic theory of Adam Smith,John Nash won the Nobel Prize of Economics for his Game Theory.第105页How to Write TSShow paragraph ideaReflect thesis第106页How to Show Paragraph IdeaNamesSummarize the event第107页How to Reflect ThesisKeywords Repetition第108页Sample of the ExampleBefore 1950s,the economic theory of Adam Smith(who was respected as the father of modern economics)was prevalently accepted in the realm of economics and finance.第109页In the book of The Wealth of Nations,Adam Smith claimed that individual ambition serves the common good,which means that if the individual member of a group just 第110页 strive to earn their own interests,the whole group will benefit.It would be presumptuous to challenge his theory at that time.Yet,John Nash found the flaws of this theory,hence he 第111页 questioned Smiths theory without any hesitation by insisting that sometimes the ambitions of individuals are conflicting,which would lead to negative results to the whole group.第112页 Through insisting this belief and personal persistent endeavor,Nash developed a systematical theory called“Nash equilibrium”,which fundamentally changed the realm of economics.Due to the breakthrough of this magnitude,Nash won the Nobel Prize of Economics in 1994 for his eminent contribution.第113页The Method of Developing Examples第114页“3P”Principle第115页48-7Are people afraid of speaking out against authority,whether the authority is an individual,a group,or a government?第116页Jack Welchthe former CEO of General Electric第117页198112 billion-280 billionMarket capital“No one should allow himself to be the victim of an institution.”第118页bureaucracytends to be formal第119页Made General Electric“informal”第120页shut down factories,reduced payrolls and cut lackluster old-line unitsEach year,Welch would fire the bottom 10%of his managersdestroying the nine-layer management hierarchy第121页adopted Motorolas Six Sigma quality program in late 1995第122页ElixirAllow the company to move quickly,to communicate fluently第123页Welchs net worth is estimated at$720 million1999:was named“Manager of the Century”by Fortune magazine第124页48-7Are people afraid of speaking out against authority,whether the authority is an individual,a group,or a government?第125页TSBy challenging people in authority,Welch injected a fresh,healthy blood to GE and made it a top company.第126页Sample of the ExampleDuring the period of 1970s,when Jack Welch first went into General Electric,he found out that although it was a prominent company with high reputation,it actually suffered from numerous problems about management.第127页Most notably,the bureaucracy,which was characterized as the extreme formality of everything in the company,resulting in the low efficiency of management and communication among the different departments.第128页In the year of 1981,when he became the CEO of General Electric,he was afraid to make changes during the first months.第129页Nevertheless,believing that no one should allow himself to be the victim of an institution,Jack Welch finally decided to change the bureaucratic form of management,to make GE“informal”.第130页Ulteriorly,he shut down factories,reduced payrolls and cut lackluster old-line unit.To destroy the nine-layer management hierarchy,which was the embryo of bureaucracy,each year,he would fire the bottom 10%of his managers.第131页Despite the immense opposition from the board of the company at the beginning,Welch insisted his action.第132页Due to his persistent endeavor,20 years later,the market capital of GE had grown from 12 billion in 1981 to 280 billion in.Likewise,Welchs net worth was estimated at 720 million dollars in that year and was also named as“Manager of the Century”by Fortune magazine.第133页73-82Should people always prefer new things,ideas,or values to those of the past?第134页第135页Henry FordModel T(50050)Assembly lineAdopt Greatly increased productivity第136页$825 in 1908$360 in 1926第137页73-82Should people always prefer new things,ideas,or values to those of the past?第138页TSChallenging the old and prevalent method of manufacturing automobiles,Henry Ford created a miracle in the history,a miracle which made the luxury automobiles not exclusive to the rich.第139页Sample of the ExampleAt the beginning of 20th century,due to the limits of traditional manufacturing method,which required one individual to finish the whole process,第140页the average hours spent on producing one single automobile were 500,which led to a severe problem that the price of each single car was exorbitantly high.第141页66-62Is it always best to determine ones own views of right and wrong,or can we benefit from following the crowd?第142页Martin Luther King,Junior第143页American clergyman,activist and prominent leader in the African American civil rights movementthrough disobedience and non-violent meansled the 1955 Montgomery Bus Boycottdelivered his“I Have a Dream”speech at Lincoln Memorial on Washington,March 1963 第144页I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed:We hold these truths to be self-evident,that all men are created equal.第145页I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia,the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.第146页I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi,a state sweltering with the heat of injustice,sweltering with the heat of oppression,will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.第147页I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.第148页Raised the public consciousness of the civil rights movement End racial segregation and racial discrimination1964:the youngest person to receive Nobel Peace Prize1986:Martin Luther King,Jr Day was established as a U.S.national holiday第149页66-62Is it always best to determine ones own views of right and wrong,or can we benefit from following the crowd?第150页TSThrough the process of questioning the racial view held by the majority of American society,Martin Luther King ended racial discrimination and therefore became one of the human rights icons.第151页Sample of the ExampleBefore the time of 1950s,the major society of United States held a stubborn prejudice that due to the color of their skin,African Americans were destined to be discriminated,which led to numerous discrimination and persecution towards this vulnerable group.第152页2.追求完美Pursuing perfection928，31，47，58，70，81，108，110，116第153页61-47Can people achieve success only if they aim to be perfect?第154页Thomas EdisonElectric light bulbCarbonized bamboofilament第155页“Genius is one percent of inspiration,and ninety-nine percent of perspiration.”“We will make electricity so cheap that only the rich will burn candles.”第156页61-47Can people achieve success only if they aim to be perfect?第157页TSBy seeking after perfection,Thomas Edison endeavored to find the most suitable filament.第158页82-110Is striving to achieve a goal always the best course of action,or should people give up if they are not making pro