高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题10旅游探险类话题指导.doc

2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题10 旅游探险类话题指导实例指导1-罗马旅游【写作任务】【写作指导】 1仔细审题，确定表达信息。 本文属于日记类应用文写作。文章要求叙述旅游观光的行程，描述各景点内容，可以按照行程以及参观景点的先后顺序展开写作。另外，本写作要用第一人称，时态以过去时态为主。 日记应主要包括如下要点：1）旅行方式以及旅游地点一一罗马，并对其进行整体介绍；2)参观的三个景点的描述一一国立博物馆、凯旋门、圆形竞技场等；3)表达自己的感受和计划。 2选词组句，表达信息。 写作过程中可以参考如下词汇和句式结构： 1)信息表达词汇。如：描述景点的词语：beautiful，precious；a symbol of，be well known for，splendid，be worth等；表达游人感受的词语：be attracted by , be struck by，prefer to，I really think等；客观描述地理事物的词语：be situated in the middle ; a long history等。 2)向式结构。为使用有限的文字描述美丽的景点，也为了提高表达的质量，写作过程中要尽量多地使用复杂的句式结构，如： 1. 用含有时间状语从句的复合句表达“抵达地点以及感受”：I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived the there at 7 oclock in the morning by plane 2. 用过去分词短语作状语，表达地点，并用定语从句补充说明其悠久的历史：Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula , Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2，500 years用定语从句补充说明参观景点后的感受和收获：In the morning we visited Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures.以及we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo, which is very beautiful in the setting sun.等。 3)篇章结构中的过渡与衔接词语。如：therefore，first ，then , finally , but等。【学生习作】 May 1 st Friday Sunny Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italy. I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 oclock in the morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2.500 years. Therefore, many tourists from all over the world would prefer to spend their holiday here, espeically in warm spring. In the morning we visited Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures. Then we went to enjoy the splendid building of Triumphal Arch in the afternoon. Nearly at dark, we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo,. that is very beautiful in the settine sun.It was time for us to leave for another city, but I really think that Rome is very worth a second visit one day in the future.得，非常值得”。 3画龙点睛：第一段的最后一句显得罗嗦：将后面的原因状语从句改成简单的介词短语就可以，如改成：Therefore，many tourists from all over the world would refer to spend their holiday here , especially in warm spring【参考范文】 May 1st Friday Sunn3 Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italw I was attracted by the beauty:of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 oclock in the morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known 实例指导2- 四川名胜【写作任务】你的英语老师在上课时样你们准备介绍中国的某个省份的旅游景点。你放暑假的时候准备去四川，因此你在网上查了一些资料，请用英语写出有关资料，与同学们分享。四川省位置中国的西南部省会成都景点有众多的名胜古迹，其中著名的有：1. 九寨沟：位于四川西北，以湖最为出名，湖水清澈见底。2. 都江堰水利工程（the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project），建于2000多年前，至今仍发挥着作用。特点1. 气候宜人，交通便利2. 以各式各样的麻辣小吃著名。要求：1. 文章要包括以上所有要点，可以适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。2. 词数：120左右。开头已经为你写好，不及入总词数。【写作指导】旅游景点的描写应该属于介绍类说明文，写好这类文章，这对于我们平时对于介绍给亲朋好友一个你比较熟悉的地方时是很有帮助的，在写作时要注意下列问题：1不宜过多介绍景点，我们以跟介绍一下景点的历史、特色、以及它在当地的一个地位2这种文章是客观的介绍。通常介绍其地理位置、面积、气候、自然资源和居民等，可以根据题目要求加上自己的评论。3组织这类文章的结构，要注意安排好说明顺序，描述要详略得当，重点突出，使文章错落有致。 4描述地点时需要我们准确掌握表示方位的词或短语。 5本文的时态主要以一般现在时态为主。【学生习作】Today I will tell you some information about Sichuan Provinces travelling. Sichuan Province, which capital city is Chengdu, lies in the southwest of china and covers an area of about 485,000 square kilometers. It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interests , such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, whose water is so clear that you can see the bottom of them. The other attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project, which was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing a important part in irrigation today. In a word, the nice weather, convenient transportation and the variety of famous hot food can alsomake your trip even more enjoyable.语从句，不能用which引导，这也算是一个这个很好的复合句中的一个小瑕疵吧！ interests interest。place of interest 作为一个复合名词，意思为“名胜”，它的中心词是place，因此复数形式应该是places of interest。只有表示性别的这类复合名词，例如：woman doctor ，其复数形式才为women doctors 。这个句子写得很好，既出现了句式结构be known for、sothat ， 还用到了whose引导的非限制性定语从句，可见这个同学的语言基础结构不错。 The otherAnother。 aan。尽管这个地方由于失误出错，但是很好地用到了play part in 这个短语。In a word ，起到了承上启下和最后总结的作用。 使用了“make sth.+形容词作宾补”这个结构。实例指导3介绍伦敦 3描述地点时需要我们准确掌握表示方位的词或短语。 4本文的时态主要以一般现在时态为主。 5要适当注意书信的格式，以免影响得分。 【参考短语和句型】 短语：in front of , in the front of , close to , at the back of , on the other side, lie in , in the north of ，to the east/ west/ , on the bank of , as for the weather, opposite to , arrive at, arrive in . a population of ; as you know 句型：how time flies; it has been two months since I ;is located in , it is a modem city /place with a long history and rich tour resources, the most famous is/ are , be well known for, it is really an impressive visit , another attraction is, what impressed me most is that ; I have just been to , which , I hope I can hear from you soon. 【范文欣赏】Dear Li Ping, How time flies! It has been two months since I left China and came to London. As you know, London is the capital of Britain, which is on the bank of River Thames. Its a very big city with a population of about 7 million. It is also a busy place. People here are usually friendly and helpful, but they are often in a hurry. What impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing. I begin to understand why the English people always talk about the weather. London has many beautiful parks and gardens and other famous places of interest. I have just been to London Museum and Hyde Park recently. How are you now? I miss you very much. I hope I can hear from you soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Lin实例指导5-Exploration in Space 随着科技的发展,近年来,人类加强了对外层空间的探索,例如探索火星,但是最近有人提出探索外层空间耗资太大,这部分资金应该用在治理地球环境污染上。你是怎样看待这个问题的呢？最近你们学校校报的Talk栏目正在征集意见,请你写一篇120词左右的英文短文,阐述自己的观点。分析:1. 本写作任务要求我们写一篇议论性的短文来发表自己的观点。首先,我们必须要分析写作任务要求我们对什么问题发表自己的看法。弄清楚要讨论的问题后再确定自己的观点,并组织语言。确定了自己的观点后,应该用简明扼要的语言将自己的观点阐述清楚,然后再举出支持自己观点的理由。2. 在确定了自己的观点和支撑自己观点的理由之后,我们就可以开始着手写作了。首先,我们可以用列举不同观点的方式引出自己的观点,比如,本写作任务中要讨论的问题是到底应该把大量的资金投入到对外太空的探索中去,还是应该把这部分钱省下来用到保护我们的家园地球上去。我们可以这样写:As technology develops, people are spending a great sum of money on space exploration. However, some people argue that the money should be used to protect the Earth. My opinion is that . 当然,我们也可以首先说明文章要讨论的问题是什么,然后说出自己的观点, 如:Currently, there is a heated debate about whether people should spend more money on space exploration or protecting the Earth. In my opinion, .教师点评:这篇学生习作从总体上来看是符合写作任务的要求的。它抓住了写作任务要求谈论的问题,观点鲜明,语言也比较通顺,基本完成了写作要求。但是,文章中也暴露出一些不足,首先,文章的结构是头大、身体小。这样,文章的重点部分,即阐明自己观点并说明原因的部分就显得非常薄弱。其次,文章里的一些过渡做得不太好。如:第一、第二两句间过渡太仓促,如果改为:However, recently some people have said ., 就很好了。 然后,第三句话I totally against this point of view应该是I am totally against this pressure on the Earth. Secondly, people will know more about outer space and learn Earth better by studying other planets. Finally, space exploration will help us find more solutions to Earths pollution problems. In a word, exploring outer space should be encouraged and is worth the time and money we spend on it. Powerful sentences:1. Exploration of outer space not only helps us know more about the universe, but also helps us know our own home Earth better.2. Exploration is important to human beings. When the Earth is no longer fit for people to live, the exploration of outer space will help us find another home in the universe.3. Earth is our home. Without it, none of us would survive, so we should spend most of our money protecting it.实例指导6-北京欢迎你写作任务:假如你的学校正在举行一场英语演讲比赛,请你拟一篇关于北京欢迎你的演讲稿,向外国友人介绍长城,天安门广场,和颐和园三个景点。并邀请外国友人来北京旅游。(词数:不少于120)写作分析:1. 根据写作任务可知本文要求大家写一篇介绍北京的说明文,文章的主要时态为一般现在时。2. 本文写作时可分为三大部分。第一部分为写作目的,欢迎国外朋友来北京,引出介绍北京的话题；第二部分介绍北京的三个著名景点:长城、天安门广场和颐和园；第三部分概括总结,紧扣文章中心北京欢迎你。3. 第二部分可参照如下信息:(1)长城:始建于2500年前；毛主席题词不到长城非好汉。(2)天安门广场:世界最大的广场,广场 四周建筑有大会堂、博物馆、毛主席纪念堂等。(3)颐和园:北京著名公园,坐落于北京东北部。参考词汇: 天安门广场Tiananmen Square；颐和园the Summer Palace初稿:Welcome to China! Welcome to Beijing! Let me introduce some famous sights to you. The Great Wall is an amazing sight. It was built 2,500 years ago. Chairman Mao once said, He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man. There are some other spots, like Tiananmen Square and the Summer Palace. Tiananmen Square is one of the largest and oldest public squares in the world. Around it are halls, museums and monuments. Maos body rests in the Maozedong Memorial Hall. The Summer Palace is one of the best parks in the city, and lies in the northeast of the city. You can go there by bus or by car. There are many things to see in Beijing. Im sure you will enjoy them all.教师点评:1. 初稿的优点:对文章的要点把握比较准确,文章的体裁及格式准确。2. 不足之处在于文章的第一段和最后一段过于简单,因此难以激起读者了解北京的兴趣。3. 在第二段的要点陈述中所运用的都是简单句,句型单调不够灵活,要点转换尤显生硬。成稿:教师点评:1. 首尾呼应,画龙点睛。第一段提出了Have you been to China? Have you been to Beijing?的问题。而最后一段对文章概括之后,用一句Im sure you will enjoy them all.和第一段遥相呼应,使整篇文章给读者以浑然一体之感。2. 作者分三段来分别描写三个景点,层次分明,一目了然。3. 更难能可贵的是使用了较为复杂的句型,例如定语从句和状语从句,并且逻辑关系表达准确。Powerful Sentences:1. I still remember my first trip to Beijing last year as if it were yesterday.2. People in Beijing like morning markets, where they can get many kinds of delicious foods.3. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners want to find out more about Beijing.4. It is a dream for me to visit Beijing.5. The Great Wall is actually over 6,000 kilometers long, 6 to 7 meters tall and 4 to 5 meters wide.6. Every year many visitors from all over the world come to China to visit Beijing.Paris, the capital of France, is located in the north of France. It has a population of about eleven million. It is the second largest city in Europe. As for the weather, it never gets too hot or too cold. And it is at its best during the spring and autumn months.Paris is the culture, education, business center of France. It is a city of fashion and romance. So many important events have been held here. Paris is a modem city with a long history and rich tour resources.There are so many places for people to visit. The most famous are the Eiffel Tower, a Triumphal Arch and Old Notre Dame. In a word, Paris is really a great and attractive city.【写作任务】六百多年前，我国就有了郑和下西洋的壮举，请根据下列表格中的内容写一篇120-150词的英语短文，叙述这探险活动并发表你的看法。 时间地点意义14051433年到过东南亚、东非的30多个国家，最远到达非洲东海岸，还可能去过澳大利亚。7次远洋探险展示了破国高超的造船技术，增进了中国和世界各国的了解和友谊。 【写作指导】 1先审题，这个写作任务是让我们写一篇叙议结合的文章，记叙为主，议论为辅，前面先叙述郑和下西洋的探险活动，后面要有自己的感受，并且二者要有机结合起来；写的时候不能对表格内容进行逐字翻译，要进行整合： 2文章的开头必须是一个点题的句子，如： More than 600 years agoa Chinese made great adventures to the ocean As we all know,there was a great Chinese adventurer calledZhengHe. Zheng He，the famous Chinese adventurer,made seven trips to Southeast Asia and East AfriCa. There are many great adventurers in the hlstory of China and ZhengHe was one of them. 3在写完航海壮举之后要用连接词语引出航海探险的意义，如：as a result；Thanks to his great adventure；As a result of expedition等，这样文章才会结构严谨； 4发表自己的看法时，可以用Every time I look at the map of the world，I think of him，the great Chinese adventurer或者I am deeply moved by what he did等句子进行转换。 【参考范文】 There are many great adventurers in the history of China and Zheng He was one of them. From 1405 to 1433 , he made seven expeditions to the ocean, reaching nore than 30 countries in Southeast Asia and East Africa. And it is said that he was likely to have been to Australia, a strange and faraway continent. As a result of his great achievement, the whole world came to realize advanced technology of the Chinese people in building ships and at the same time China strengthened its friendship with other countries. So every time I think of Zheng He, I feel very proud of our country and admire him very much. In my opimon, as students,.we should work hard at our lessons and try to build our motherland into a powerfuland rich country in the future.你们班即将进行热爱家乡的英语主题班会,请你写一篇小短文来介绍你的家乡,并邀请你的同学们前去游玩。你的家乡在发展特色旅游,如举办篝火晚会,教做风味小吃等活动。(词数:120左右)参考词汇:篝火bonfire本期写作指导参考范文I love my hometown, which is located by the Yellow River. In the last five years, it has changed a lot by developing the tourism market. Its beautiful scenery is a big attraction for many people. To make the attraction stronger, we have decided to add some features to it. In the daytime tourists can learn about our food culture by taking part in a course to learn how to make our special food. At night there is a big bonfire party where tourists and local people can dance and sing happily together. I am sure there will be many other interesting activities there soon, too. You are all welcome to visit my hometown. Im sure you will have a good time there.假如你校准备利用周末组织一次到附近山区的探险活动,学生热情很高,学校也做好了必要的安全准备,但此举却遭到了很多家长的反对,他们认为这个活动太危险,坚决不同意孩子参加。请你就该问题写一篇120词左右的文章,在你的英语博客上发表自己的看法。